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This is a poem regarding how I feel, in general, about my life today and in looking back over the years. It is about the solitude that is experienced in life and knowing that there is no other way.

The Darkness

If only it were so simple,
to cruise through life smelling roses;
but the obstacles blacken the countryside,
and we unwittingly crush them beneath our boots.

Dreams sustain us through the madness;
goals give a finish line to our race.
Yet they change with every turn, around every wall,
and remain elusive throughout the quest.

Mistakes are made, and regrets are our luggage;
we will drag them with us to slow us down.
The victories are flashes of light, sudden and unlasting, which allow us
to glimpse the road ahead before darkness descends.

Love is bitter, yet it is the bread that keeps us.
Over and over it fills us up, only to starve us.
The people whom we love shape our destinies and our strengths,
yet leave us cold and alone in the darkness.

There are others trying to race to the end;
occasionally, we bump into one or two.
The bonds we form help us down the path less lonely
but eventually, we lose each other in the darkness.

Alone is not a bad way to be;
it clears your head and focuses you on the journey.
Cherish the short intervals during the quest you have with others,
but be prepared to walk alone in the darkness.

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Rita
this poem is soo sad but i like it. It touched me in my sad hear and remind me the reason that I've leaved my boyfriend. I like it.
john
this is how i have lived most of my life alone and sad wanting to end it all but you are right to just keep walking is better than stoping
ghada
when i read this poem (the darkness) i felt as if the auther is talking about me,this poem is very real and touches deeply
Traci
I like this a lot.
Lisa
This is a very personal poem. I felt as though it was written from my own thoughts. I just lost an extremely close friend and her words echo my feelings. beautiful poem
Pip
so true.
Andrea
Life is a sad, lonely journey. Christinia has described it beautifully in her poem. Shame that people are so busy trying to succeed in life, that they forget that success is measured by how many lives you have touched.
maygan
i loved this poem, it's not depressing to me it's realistic, i mean life really is a roller coaster of ups and downs but the downs seem to outweigh the ups and she totally gets that and i loved it b/c of that.
Sarah
YOU ARE RIGHT! THATS HOW LIFE GOES, I JUST FIGURED THAT OUT AFTER I LOST THE ONE THAT I TRULY LOVE!
Elizabeth
My vote is the poem is very moving and relaxing feel to. It keeps my focus of clarity within the moment. My opinoin its very good.
daniel
you are a great writer beacuse this poem was cool
claire
truely wonderful. i really liked this, it wasa so honest. i can relate to this and it is so true. thank you.
Laura
this was an awesome poem, great job. It made alot of sense, and I felt a great sense of release knowing that someone feels how i do
Morgan
This poem is beautiful, it related to me a lot, and i'm sure it did for a lot of people. Keep on keepin on. You are an awesome poet.
Taylor
I like your poem. So much emotion was wrote into it that i can relate too
kathy
I think there is a lot of truth to the peom. We don't want to be alone, and if we are then our quest is to find some one, but if we only took a moment to relize that being alone can be mind freeing, and good for the soul. I enjoyed this poem very much (:
Claire
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. I believe that sometimes i feel the same way. I was reasearching poems for a homework assignmeant and out of a lot, yours truly benefitted me the most. Thank you and keep up the beautiful work!
pauleice
yeh i feel you its so dame true what you wrote. look i love the way you put you poem together so i say to you kep your head up and continue to inspier peole with the poems you create in this life time. much love to you frm the thug princess keep up the good work you got it.
bob
I think this poem really demonstrated what life is really all about
majoky
I found this poem accidentally - accidentally? - and it immediately struck me. It says very precisely what goes on inside me every single day.
Nyasha
Beautiful.
kamika
I felt every word as if it were my own.
stephanie
excellent
Pamela
i thought this was brilliantly written. some people find it really difficult to decribe true lonliness with elloquence, but you pulled it off. i loved it
Danielle
Ilove this poem. Ineeded tofind one for my Language arts class that I really liked and I picked this one! Good job on it
dead birds
I can relate to this poem
Rhonda
This poem shows a real understanding of how we can all feel the road is long and lonely at times even when there are other people in our lives and around us
haifa
i like it
mel
this poem made me cry i loved it! i think that this poem could win an award(sorry im not very good at these little speaches)
James
i love this poem i can relate to it alot this poem basically is my life story but a little smoother
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