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About the Poem

This is a poem regarding how I feel, in general, about my life today and in looking back over the years. It is about the solitude that is experienced in life and knowing that there is no other way.

The Darkness

If only it were so simple,
to cruise through life smelling roses;
but the obstacles blacken the countryside,
and we unwittingly crush them beneath our boots.

Dreams sustain us through the madness;
goals give a finish line to our race.
Yet they change with every turn, around every wall,
and remain elusive throughout the quest.

Mistakes are made, and regrets are our luggage;
we will drag them with us to slow us down.
The victories are flashes of light, sudden and unlasting, which allow us
to glimpse the road ahead before darkness descends.

Love is bitter, yet it is the bread that keeps us.
Over and over it fills us up, only to starve us.
The people whom we love shape our destinies and our strengths,
yet leave us cold and alone in the darkness.

There are others trying to race to the end;
occasionally, we bump into one or two.
The bonds we form help us down the path less lonely
but eventually, we lose each other in the darkness.

Alone is not a bad way to be;
it clears your head and focuses you on the journey.
Cherish the short intervals during the quest you have with others,
but be prepared to walk alone in the darkness.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Angela
This is a very touching poem, i relatre to it. I'm so happy someone is understanding the same consept of life that i am.
melisa
This poem has such meaning! I think it is unique, because it can fit several different aspects of many peoples lives.
Patricia
This poet mind me about my life same time and that how I feel like most of the time when my father think he is better then everybody around him.
Chris
This poem really speaked to me i seem to feel like those roses latelty that r being trampled so i can really relate to this poem gratz to u Christinia
Suresh
Actually it says about the strength of the lonelyness. I Really liked it.
Lifeless
I do see some philosophy in this poem, though I do see that it is written after an experience that distorted the writer’s life and way of accepted wisdom, For me it gives confer that only numbered people feel the same … It touches the shield of our hearts Living yet lifeless … AnGeL!
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