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Agonistic Spirit
by Jayzee
Thinking of you - acid rain falls -
or are those tears which burn
fiery paths of hurt down my
face and on my neck - where I
can't swallow or breathe - can
this choking be my end? Yes -
but the pain has just begun
as the heart thirsts for love
but only soaks in anguish - which
drains it of life - tearing
a jagged scar - a raw wound
open and screeching - echoing
through a tortured mind -
then time is the enemy -
all that remains
is a skeleton of
agonistic spirit -
singing a haunting melody -
"I'll love you to the bitter end."

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
losergirl
Amazing.
Andre
I got the word. She is over me. I saw it coming for a very long time and looking at this site is one of many things I have been doing to deal with it. I can appreciate this poem because it described what it felt like, when I finally understood that she has moved on in her mind and possibly into the arms of another. And it is times like this when I wish I was blind.
babygurl
You use alot of description and that takes skills! it is hard to let go of the one u love (trust) i know and its been 1 year and u still cant look at another guy.
cammy
very good poem
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