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How can you live when the best part of you dies? Where do you draw strength when your sole source of strength is taken from you?

This poem explores the loss of my father and the impact it had on my life. Even now, 6 years later, I can't seem to grasp the straws together to make my life whole again. Every day I fight with an enemy I cannot see. The one thing my father never taught me how to do.

Please, Dad

As soft winds sweep away the days
I look back on life through a haze.
Remember playgrounds, parks and friends,
In childlike gaze that never ends.
The laughter in a game of catch,
Shall memory ever attach...
To innocence in youthful eyes,
Catching the ball to Dad's surprise.

I recall my first bike, first wreck,
Who picked me up, said, "What the heck?"
Convinced me to give one more try,
While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry.
Just the joy knowing he was there,
Making him proud my only care.
There was nothing I couldn't do,
My heart held fast that to be true.

Though teenage years were kind of rough,
I sure wasn't too big or tough.
You taught me to defend what's right
And never back down from a fight.
So I learned the hard way to stand,
Still, with each lump, I found your hand.
Drawing from you an inner strength,
And stubborn pride of equal length.

But there the line of fate was drawn,
As though I blinked and you were gone.
I found myself facing the sun,
Not man, not boy, fatherless, one.
Eyes blinded by a void inside,
I could not live that you had died.
Alas finding it to be true,
I could do nothing without you.

Please, Dad, today just hear my call,
I'm sorry that I dropped the ball.
My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned,
My emotions undisciplined.
I can't get up although I try,
Please don't be upset if I cry.
Though I can't fight what I can't see,
Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me.

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somebody
woahhhh. THIS POEM IS LIKE TOTALLY AWESSOMMEEE! i wish i could write like this
kassie
i love this poem. i know what ur going through. my dad died when i was 10 years old. i am now 16. i was his baby girl. but i think this is a teriffic poem and u should be proud of urself. this poem is very touching. i give it a perfect 10.
Brooke
This poem is one of my favorite poems. It touched me a lot and a lot of what this boy in this poem is going through with not haveing a father, I am too, and i will for the rest of my life. Not cause he's dead but because he never bothered. Point is i liked it so much because i have so much in common with it. You have so much talent!
Toma
This is one of the best poems I've ever read, amazing job. Very touching, shows how much you loved your dad. Really sorry about your loss by the way, dont know how it feels but Im sure its hard.
Kristi
This is a realy good poem
catherine
this peom was so touching i could almost feel what was down inside me , i could hear the voice calling out to me, i think this peom was so amazing its a pitty that it was trew, im sorry for the lost of u.
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