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This poem was written while caught in the rain, realizing just how important a part "wet" has been in my life.

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I had no clue what was going on till the end. Awsome! I loved it to all ends!
I thought this poem is kinda creepy! It is very sexual.
WOW had to read that one twice
i like this poem so much i am going to give this one to my boy friend

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Languidly parting the moist curtain.
he slides into the smooth vessel.
the color of fire pink velvet.
his large hands securely wielding the creamy white handles,
firmly manipulating them until
just a trickle of foamy liquid flows forth.

She faces him, their eyes, reflecting pools of love,
lock on each other. embracing, both, with body and soul,
they melt together in the steamy atmosphere.
memories flood as her neck arches and wet kisses cover her throat.
teasing one another in the aquamarine Caribbean ocean.
causing rough ripples to fan out across the water of a swimming pool
discovering new things as a soft summer rain, like the sound of a
xylophone, soaked them.

Aromas of citrus, colognes and faintly, the sea
drift and swirl around them.
skin drenched, rivulets of salty sweat stream between them.
sauna heat builds as temperatures rise.
flesh moves with synchronized, frantic fluidity.
a torrential river violently rushes into a cascading waterfall.
drowning in a frenzied whirlpool, gasping for air, silent screams.
then the peace of a tranquil, crystal clear lake prevails
and the relaxation of a hot spraying shower returns,
as she lovingly shampoos his hair

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I love poetry and short stories, especially ones like these with great detail. The write has artistic talent. And the title definitely says it all! I was able to envision every detail and it made me a little hot. Keep it up.
I liked the first part the best. very sensual! And the ending, "As she lovingly shampoos her hair" was a very good ending; I sometimes do that type of ending.
A lover and i share these feelings and we call it 'wett'
That was so awesome and sexy! Lovin' it!
Beautifull, beautifull, that's all I can say. Beautifully written and the imagery! wow!
I really loved your poem it was so cool. really touching.
WOW! Just the feeling of this poem. the desire, love and so much more. kate you really did a great job with this poem. the picture in my mind when i read it is indescribable
This poem is in deep thoughts it makes you wonder if love is really deep as they say it is. It's sexy, warm filling, and unique. Author " " keep writing.
Girl ya poem is on point on a mental level and a physical level! keep doin ya thang!
ooh, oh so sexy!
i really enjoyed this poem. it reminded me of when me and my bf make love in the shower and then in the end i wash his hair lol
I really love this poem it was quite erotic, and now I feel the need to go take a cold shower.
wow you are really deep as me and my bf read this we were like whao ! ~me
This poem was beautiful!
this poem was very sexy and deep
Awesome poem girl!
Soft, quiet, touching. Sensuous, erotic, something. eloquently nice. Not overbearing.
It is straight to the point - i loved ever word. Good Job
Its ver y unique it just brings a felling to me that i havnt known for a whil since my fiance is locked up
I loved your poem. at first I thought it was ok, until I read your last two lines. Then it hit home. you ended it perfectly. it just beautifully rounded off your poem. bravo!
thank you
Very Sexy!
This is the perfect poem for two, full of surprises, I truly love it. My compliments to the writer.
Brilliantly done! I couldn't have said it better myself! Wow, I think I need to go have a cigarette.
your poem was the bomb. The way you described this expirience is amazing. I could tell by the way you write you are very intelligent and I encourage you please write more so I can read them. holla
Wow, this is awesome!
Lovely - well balanced with an excellent ending! Congratulations to you Kate!
This poem is great and I think that every couple that is love should read it so they will know the real meaning of love.
that poem wuz off da chia-ain
That was a beautiful poem how you described everything it was very good.
this poem was tyte
the words paint both image and emotion. i could feel something move inside my soul as i read this, something sensual and tantalizing. excellent poem.
i like the way you described everything. It is definatly something you would give to someone you are sexualy involved and in love with.
Objectively - The poem (as literature) is fantastic, impossible that anything sweeter exists. BRAVO!
WOW, this poem creates emotions and imagination as I was reading it. It's great man, I love it!
what's your number?
A very good poem.
nice poem
I Loved this Poem, It was Sexual but Beautiful and Erotic.
Jenny, lmao! about the poem, I actually liked it, it was a bit confusing. but a great poem.
Wow! That was great!
wow..i love how you made what you were saying..into something else. It was truely beautiful, and this poem puts into words how i feel when i am with "him", absolutely beautiful
The plot was so complete and well put together I've never read anything slightly similar
what the hell is this poem about?
I love tthis poem, Kate! I love all the water...
I received this poem from a friend on Valentines Day. And it described us to a tee
Wow this is a great piece of work. I really totally see everything as it happens. Wonder job.
A very sensual and erotic poem. Wonderfully weaves the deep passion of a sexual act, within the surroundings of nature.
This is wonderful.
I love this one !

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