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I awoke from a dream, sweaty and breathless. A fantasy so vivid I couldn't close my eyes without seeing his face or hearing his voice. It frightened me, this lack of control; yet I was enraptured, obsessed with a world I had only glimpsed in my dreams.

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Don
This poem moves me. To me it comes from a place of love with two people matched perfectly. Thank you, Don
Susan
It is wonderful that you capture the essance of being owned. Thank you for this.
Fran
My favorite verse. "the fine line between pleasure and pain becomes ever sweeter with your control". Brings back a memory of one of my own dreams.
Kassadi
I know exactly how she feels. The poem was soo good you could tell her love for her master.

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Submission

I kneel, supplicant before you
my will
offered up in quiet acquiescence
awaiting your approval
or reproach
the fine line between pleasure and pain
becomes ever sweeter with your control
with every touch, kiss, word
smoldering embers are kindled
tormenting desires awakened
I quiver
captured by heat and hunger
bend me to your will
My Lord
show me what you most desire
my purpose but to serve
through your dominion I find myself
You, the Master of many
my only

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Melosy
Perfect!
Misty
I thought this was wonderful. Being a submissive woman myself i really felt what she was sayiing, relating on so many levels. This is very good i thought!
absek
woderful poem. i read this poem to my girl n hoo boy did i get some action or wat?
kari
I felt she was very passionate about her Master! I would definitely share this poem with others.
E
I really enjoy this poem :)
Ren
Wow. just, wow!
Raven
a perfectly beautiful poem. Words that only a loving. LOVED. submissive could ever dream up. Sighs. I miss my Master even more
nicola
i have met a wonderful man and i will be sending him this wonderful poem, your words say it all
c
This poem touched my heart so strongly, i found it necessary to send it along to the One to whom i submit. Thank you for putting such simple words to such a complex feeling.
Mary
Excellant! I loved this poem!
ROBERT
As a Dom I was touched by this poem. You have captured the solu of submission. thank you
Patricia
I love this poem, it captures the fantasy that lies within me!
kamni
a poem written from the heart. so simple yet so powerful it its meaning.
starr
Gets to the heart and soul of submission. It is wonderful.
Robert
Wow. that is passion beyond the recgonition of response. Simple words, yet joined together, parilize the heart, by first slaying the soul
Allie
I really enjoy this poem for I understand. I am submissive too.
Josť
No matter who submits to whom, no matter who kneels before whom, the lover who writes the poem is the master.
precious
A beautiful poem obviously written from the heart
Dianne
This poem is really special & sweet.
jennifer
i love this is wonderful

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