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I awoke from a dream, sweaty and breathless. A fantasy so vivid I couldn't close my eyes without seeing his face or hearing his voice. It frightened me, this lack of control; yet I was enraptured, obsessed with a world I had only glimpsed in my dreams.

Submission

I kneel, supplicant before you
my will
offered up in quiet acquiescence
awaiting your approval
or reproach
the fine line between pleasure and pain
becomes ever sweeter with your control
with every touch, kiss, word
smoldering embers are kindled
tormenting desires awakened
I quiver
captured by heat and hunger
bend me to your will
My Lord
show me what you most desire
my purpose but to serve
through your dominion I find myself
You, the Master of many
my only

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Don
This poem moves me. To me it comes from a place of love with two people matched perfectly. Thank you, Don
Susan
It is wonderful that you capture the essance of being owned. Thank you for this.
Fran
My favorite verse. "the fine line between pleasure and pain becomes ever sweeter with your control". Brings back a memory of one of my own dreams.
Kassadi
I know exactly how she feels. The poem was soo good you could tell her love for her master.
Melosy
Perfect!
Misty
I thought this was wonderful. Being a submissive woman myself i really felt what she was sayiing, relating on so many levels. This is very good i thought!
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