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I love poems that describe how things actually are in real life, and the way that this describes the feelings of so many of us. I loved it!
jermeisha
I JUST LOVEEED THIS POEM IT REALY CONVERTED TO MY SAME SECHAWATION IT REALY HIT ME HARD AND ALSO DEEEEEP!
Morena
I LIKE A LOT, BECAUSE IT IS THE SAME SITUATION THAT WE ARE INVOLVED
ashley-lynn
beautiful and with strong meaning.
Georgia
Although I am feeling your poem all the way at this moment in time I just wanted to say that the poem was dead on the money when it comes to love and understanding what love can make you feel.
Jen
WOW! its so cute, and very original. i had this skool thing, that i had 2 look 4 poems from the net, and urs definately stood out, coz it woz so different from the rest, bout mushy luv. Urs was cute and quick witted! rate: 11/10:)
cris
i really really like this poem it rocks!
Court
That was great for someone to actually inspire a young writer as myself for the very first time! I have never seen such a beautiful poem! Usually they dont inspire me to write more poems- but this one definately does! Thankz
Carla
Allison Jane is a very inspirational writer! I enjoyed her poem cause it proves love can be good or bad. I proves love can take forvever. It mostly proves love doesn't have to be guy or girl
Tiffany
youer poem is an inspriration to my life i tkank god that it was in your heart to write this poem
Ashleigh
I REALLY like the last few lines. A really good poem. Keep up tha good work.
katie
great poem!
rebecca
great
Grant
Allison, What a way you have with words, you bring this web site more to look at.
caren
I think this poem descrbes love to a "T" I really really liked this one.
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