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I broke up with my girlfriend two months ago. She was the first person I have ever truly been in love with. It took me quite a while to finally come to peace with myself over our breakup. I wrote this after sitting down one night and thinking about life in general and why we go through the hardships that we do. I realized everybody, or almost everybody losses some one they love and you learn to live with it.
And by doing that, you are able to help some one else who is going through it because you have been there, and you understand their feelings.
A Few Visitor Comments
Emily
Wow, that poem really did speak to me. I've been going through the same thing, and it really helps to have all my feeling brought before me. through someone else's words. Thank you.
Jazreel
I know it's true. I've stood in that rain & I'm facing again. Just being hopeful. Thank you.
Franky
Thank you sow much you have truly touched my heart, i really needed that info. I wish it would disepier soner rather than feel it everyday. I'm still tryiing to find a way but for now i guess i'l stay.
mway
i love your poem, i want to talk to you :P
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Peace Of Mind |
| by Dave |
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Have you had cold showers of pain My friend, you've stood in my rain Deathly feeling of loneliness No need to feel shameless I've been there before Not wanting to feel any more Your hearts been broken in half Mind still living in the past Cold dark thoughts of suicide Why don't I do it tonight Don't worry it will go away Learn to love another day Put it in the back of mind Let it rest and you will find Dark clouds begin to part New love will mend the heart Thoughts of suicide disappear Self- esteem will reappear One day you'll be able to say My friend you've stood in my rain |
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vani
Wow, its simply wonderful. Your poem really touched me.
skegger
this poem makes me feel like im home and alone, showing no one my feelings but nothing but the internet, my friends are these letters im typin.
Isabella
This poem touched me, it helped me feel better like i was worth something thats why i give it my vote
Andrea
i think that this is a very good poem and should be voted as one of the best
Chantel
Thank you
Ce-Ce
I really enjoyed reading your poem, and i can relate
jade
I really enjoed this poem it touched me and gave me hope to live ur poem inspired some of my new ideas for writing! I love'd ur poem!
Chezni
Its very inspiring
ashlee
i loved this poem. i know how it feels to be hurt. and feel all alone. i write poems myself. i REALLY like this alot and i can relate to it ALOT. so thankyou for this i wish you the best in your future =0)
paige
i no how u feel but ur it will pass sooner or later loved ur poem!
Mercedes
ur poem got 2 me b cuz it just fits me perfectly. almost as if ur writing this on my life. ne ways i just wanna say its a great peom and ur a good riter, as far as i can tel by this peom. keep ^ the good work. mercedes gonzales
J
Great poem
megan
after reading "peace of mind" we got goose bumps. it was extreamly touching
corey
this is a very good poem we all will find new love if we do not give up on our selves, even when others give up on us
Gabs
well written, execptionally worded and it touched something inside because i to have stand in your rain
Latasha
this poem touched the very core of my heart so much cause i use to be in that state of mind and i have learn to get over some things
wahidur
this poem has really touchd me,it kinda suits my position. my girl is slowly gettin far from me. it really has boosted my morale. thnx.
Samantha
Thats a good poem hope it is true because that is what I feel now.
Freak With A Guitar
Omg i love this poem so much. Im only 13 and ive thought about suicide multiple times but never have i gotten a chance to do it. ive tried and ive tried. This poem shows how good it can be to have the feeling of no suicide thoughts but also that it takes alot of risks!
vanessa
i know how u fel and i love comeing to this web site because i write teen poetry
BrokenAngel
I'd just like to say i think your poem was really beautiful:) and i like the hope your sending out to everyone. if only everyones dark clouds could part, wouldnt that be nice?
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