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This is about a friend that was depressed about her break up with her ex boyfriend. She turned to smoking and stuff for relief. I did my best to help her

Blind

Your beauty intoxicates all you encounter,
Yet you fail to notice,
This is your blunder,

You've had a rough time,
Though now it is over,
But yet you continue clinging to what is left over,

And in doing this your depression grows deeper,
Pulling you apart at the seams,
Causing you to unravel and fall to you knees,
Pondering desperately: "How much worse can it be? "

To ease your mind of your terrible burden,
You bargain with Satan (as if he cares),
Giving you a release, in turn for your soul:
That you believe tarnished and not worth much at all,

When all of your friends have been with you till now,
But here comes the crossroads up ahead,
They give you a choice: "Stand tall or fall down."

You have your beauty and charm,
Your intelligence and grace,
Good friends and your health,
What more does it take for you?

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Angel
WOW! this poem was amazing. i love the depth of it. it shows how people care. WONDERFUL
daisy
the ending is great. a reality check truely loved it
paige
wow this wounderful! it made me cry ni love it keep it up p. s.
lydia
I am very depressed and think about suicide often,this poem made me think. Thank you so much for writeing it.
ruth
it is a good work of writing this poems to help people which are depressed,sad and wanting to finish off themselves. i really appreciate this good work.
grainne
this poem is a fact of reality everybody loves you until you go nuts then your just that person i used to no!
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