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I wrote this poem a couple of days after my friend was killed. It talks about how I felt after his death.

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Angelina
This is a very beautiful poem. my thoughts exactly!. I lost my best friend. apart of me died w/ him that day 2.
Blaise
This poem really touched me because about three months ago in May a friend of mine was killed in a train-truck accident and this poem is something Ican relate my feelings about his death to.
stephanie
I like this poem because. well I really don't know. But i do know that it is the best poem I've ever read. And I don't read a lot of poems. So that's why I like it. And I hope you make other poems like this one.
Cleshaun
This poem really touched me

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Dying Inside

Something so hard
goes straight to the soul;
it seems impossible to get over
and my heart is left with a big hole.

I'm trying to be happy, wearing a smile;
but I'm dying inside.
The world seems to be fading,
and I just want to run and hide.

Everywhere I go I see your face,
and realize how much I miss you;
and on the day you died
a piece of me died too.

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Tamara
I thought who ever wrote this poem that done a very great job.
Jessie
i was really close to my cuz and she died of cancer and this poem reminds me of the day of the awake and how hard it was to see her lying there. keep up the good work!
katie
this is such a great poem my mom died when i was 7months and this is like my life thank you for writing this
laura
this poem touched me it is very moving as i lost my brother jst not my brother he was my best friend he was killed in a car crash 4mnths ago and it ad that i will never cee him again ur poem is lovely ur friend will be very happy with u xxx
Kim
I had a miscarriage recently and this is exactly how I feel. I died on that day too.
chantelle
i just recently lost my bf he was so amazing i wake every morning just to cry my eyes out i loved him so much but now never to c hime again even though he is gone his memory lives on ur poe has touched me and brought to relaize i am nto alone in the worl dof loss and greif thank you
carlos
This poem has touched me. I can actually say that i understand it well because iv'e lost my brother and as much as i try to act fine it kills me inside. Thank you for writing this
Austin
This poem touched me greatly because less than a month ago my friend drowned in his bathtub after a drug overdose. I felt that a part of me died when he died because we we're best friends for almost a full seven years and he was there for me in my times of need and I was there for him. I really loved your peom.
Grace
This Poem was very sad, it reminds me of when my nephue died, he was my best friend.
smith
this poem remindes me of mu aunt and i really enjoyed it. i love to read peoms that remind me of my aunt.
himandme
You're poem touched my heart, After knowing him for 2yrs and were good friends we decided to take it to the next step, and after 2 unforgetable nights God decided to take him away from me! I MISS HIM SO MUCH
mineshia
hope this poem make it to number one because it had some posisitve points in this poem.
Matthew
I feel your pain, and know exactly where youre coming from. I'm missing parts of me too. Keep the poems coming though, theyre great.
Corey
I really like this poem alot. Im 16 and about 3 months ago two really close friends of mine had died in a car crash and I miss them soo much!
wendy
hi i love the poem it said everything iam feeling right now becauce i have just lost my mum on the 5/1/06 i have taken it very hard as i was very close to my mum and it was every sudden and it broken my heart these words said it all for me because thats just the iam and iam dieing inside these words are so true thank you so much i give this 1oo% vote
shelly
i recently had a tradgy happen to me, a guy i knew little about but knew he was amazing his smile made you love him. he was my sisters boyfriend and she is going through a very hard time and this poem said all the right things! i just want to tell you i am truley sorry! my heart goes out to you!
Cambree
This poem totally tells how i feel, cuz i lost both of my parents and still havent goten over it, but im trying so hard to. im only 13 and they died when i was 3. But i must move on, and thats a REALLY good poem.
summer
i loved your poem, now just tell me how to stop the pain
nikki
i vote this as high as it can go baceause my uncle died 2 yrs ago and he died at the age of 20. he had the worst kind of cancer. and when he died i felt like my heart was gone!
megan
When I was reading Dying Inside every word you said I understanded every meaning to it. I lost a best friend and my true love. and its been like 2 years now and I still cry at night. I dont know but I liked what u wrote.
Kailey
I can relate to this story because my best friend died and when that happened I felt the same way. Great job!
April
My Mother passed away and when I read that poem it brought tears to my eyes, that poem is how I feel everyday, thank you for putting it into words.
dalenna
u poem reminds me of myself alot, i feel this way when i think about the loved one that i i've lost.
lori
your poem really touched my i lost my mom and that is exactly how i feel, touching poem
heath
im loved it it was awesome
Michelle
thats just how i felt when my 5 month old nephew died. i was only 11(15 now) but it inpacted me pretty well. I miss him so much to this day. I really like the poem.
marnie
yea it was pretty alright
paula
i loved this poem because i have honestly lost so many people in my life from friends to family members and it was really hard for me to cope with a lot of them and this poem just reminds me how i felt while i was dealing with all of the deaths in my life and it feels good to know that im was not the only one out there that has felt this way. thank you for sharing your poem with the world it will touch more people than you know and it will help a lot of them cope with someone close to them dying. so thank you again and god bless you and let only good things come your way.
nobody
hey, that's so true! i lost my grandmother and my grandfather in the same month and everytime i think about it i realize that with every thought i have of them a little peice of me dies!
Cyndi
I just lost my best friend in a horrible car accident a week ago today. I had her funeral today and it was a very difficult thing for me. I felt that day that she passed away a piece of me floated up to heaven with her and her 7 month unborn baby girl. So this peom touched me in a certain spot.
Chelsea
My sister died in a tragic accident on January 25,2005 In South Carolina. A part of me did die that day. I am only 11 years old and I miss my sister so much. She was my older sister and she was only 17 when she died. She was my older sister but sometimes she made me feel like she was my best friend. I miss her so much. That poem made me cry the first time I read it.
sahuly
i'm deeply sorry for your loss and well i feel sad as well cause i too lost many during life but i like to say it this way it is a quote by well i don't exactly know who but i know it well "those who are born must die at a certain time and those who die are reborn in a next life" so don't worry whoever you lose they will be reborn somehow so don't worry ok that is all i think about when i lose someone i think of that quote and the one who taught it to me was my teacher from first period and besides writing helps in a way so you just keep on writing got to go see ya!
Joe
I lost a long time friend on this very day last year and this poem could not better explain how I and many of the people she's touched feel. She's in a better place and will forever be missed.
candice
I LIKEDTHE POEM CAUSE I HAVE LOST MY DAD 4 MONTHS LATER I LOST MY BROTHER IN '97'
Amber
My best friend Nate dien 11-11-2004 and i miss him so much . he mean everything to me . we were dating for 2 years and we had just broken up that same wekk he died . i love your poem it touched me and nates mother
ashley
i really feel that way to and that is a really good one tho
Desiree
I know exactly how you feel! Exactly a week ago i lost two friends in a car accident. There were four people in the car and out of the four people two died and of course they had to be friends of mine. The other two lived (the driver and the passenger). She was drunk (the driver) and its really upsetting cuz she killed two innocent people. I just want everyone to know that things can happen anytime. Please be safe by wearing your seatbelt and dont drink or do drugs. It causes alot of pain to people when something happens. I should know it happened to me.
Leslie
my friend Lyndon just past away and i know how it must have felt
Roxanne
When I read this poem, I knew how you exactly feel. I just lost my first love Garret to brain cancer. He was just seventeen. He fought wight months of it, but I'm happy he's not suffering. I goon with my life, trying to keep busy, but I'm dying inside.
stef
this really touched me as my boyfriend aged 13 died on monday the 12th july 2004 and is deerly missed and this poem reminds me of wat i am doing
holly
Just last year i lost my father then a month later i lost my nephew. i has heen really hard and that poem really explained how i feel.
maria
ur poem is grate. and it touch me. I lost my brother in a motorbike accident before 2 years ago. he was just 18 he was like an angel. The day that he died, i died inside too. I cant let go, i miss him every single day,every single minute, every sinlge second of my life. God bless u!
shelly
This poem remindes me of my grandpa. He died the 21st of this month and this poem really outched my heart.
Jane
I read your poem and love it. I lost my best friend over two years ago - her husband murdered her - this poem says exactly how I feel - keep up the good work!
Cherisse
I thought it was wonderful. Just wonderful.
Els
I've had a friend, who commited suicide last January. Now, two months later, the pain won't ease. Reading this poem made the memories all so real. It describes what I feel. It's good to have a way of sharing the pain. I hope this pain will be passing, and the memories remain. Thank you for sharing my pain Els
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