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This poem means a lot to me. My brother died when I was very young so I didn't have a chance to know him, and it may sound silly but I feel writing this poem brings me closer to him in some way because I feel in my heart that he can actually hear what I say can maybe see what I write.

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Kamryn
My brother died 1 month ago. I am only 15 and i lost my brother. i am so thankfull that i got to spend so much time with him. But he was my gaurdian. My parents died and he tool care of me. Nw he is dead and i live with my aunt. i cant believe he is gone, when i wake up in the morning i still think that i can go jump on him to wake him up. He and i were very close. we wrote songs together and were like best friends. I really hate waking up every morning with the feeling that he is not here with me. I remember that he is still with me. because i can feel him. i still have so many thinks and all i can be is thankful. Insted of waking up to my brothers amazing voice, my boyfriend is there. It is a bittersweet life and i am learning to take it day by day I love you Bryan!
Melisa
I really love this poeme, because I think I know how you feel. My father's wife was expecting a baby. My babybrother. But suddenly, there were some complications and an operation. She wasn't expecting a son anymore. And I wasn't expecting a little babybrother anymore. But I really have a strong feeling I know him, because I've seen him. (Echo) I loved him, I always wanted to have a little brother or sister. I wanted to get to know that babybrother/sister. So much! Unfortunately that's not going to happen anymore. It's very painfull, but by reading this poeme, I know I'm not the only one. Good luck!
Terri
A poem that truely touched my very soul. I too lost a brother. He was still born. He was born before me but I feel a huge connection with him. I am a sibling of four but He is the one i know is looking over me. I can feel him guiding me thru life. I cant wait to meet him. I will not be scared of deaths door because i know he will be there waiting too.
Katie
I Lost My Brother Last Year AndThis Poem Reminds Me Of Him As We Were'nt So Close.

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Missing You

Do you look down at me in the night
Do you see my candle burning so big and so bright
The candle I burn that reminds me of you
The candle I hope that you would burn too.
Not a day goes by where I don't think of you
hoping that you'd come back so the days won't be blue.
I feel no one understands me, apart from you.
I go to your grave expecting a response
to the pointless questions I can't get across.
Though sometimes In my mind I forget that you're dead
but I'll make sure you keep living in my head
I love you so much it makes me so sad
that I can't hear you say it back - the one thing that would make me glad.
You probably think I'm silly when we didn't even know each other
But to me you'll always be my brother.

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Ciara
I lov this poem . it relates 2me becus i lost my big brother 16days ago. He was only 17 nd im only 15 but we only got 2meet 4de 1st time 2yrs ago. I new him But ther was alot i didnt no about him. He did al the big brother tings lik he stuck up4me,Kept his friends away from me etc. But the one ting im glad of is tat we NEVER had a fight. We wer more lik friends. Nd the memories i hav are al good. my heart is broken but i dont feel lik hes gone. Tanks u for ur poem it means alot to me 2. R. I. P Shane xxxxxxx
nichole
this poem make me remember my grandmother. I did not meet her that why this poem is for her. peoper told me things about her thats all.
leah
i love this poem it realy cuts deep my brother died before i was boren so i can relate
Raegan
I loved this poem. it reminds me soo much of my best friend matt. but lets not get into that because he kinda was suisidal and killed himself. but that poem is exactly how i feel right now
stacey
i reali like da poem i no how u feel cuz i lost my nan n i reali miss her n wish she cud cum bk n i hope shes lookin dwn on me :)
Jessica
This was an awesome poem because I know my brother is here but he won't accept me because of who I am he is to into girls and Drugs you know maybe trying would help thank you for writting this poem because I know it will help me someday to remember my brother even if he doesn't remember me.
Lacy
Your poem really touched me because my brother has been in a coma for three weeks due to a car accident and has no brain activity at all so they are going to take him off life support. I didn't know him as well as I should have, so I completely understand what you are saying. Thanks for the great poem, it made me feel less alone.
Lynsey
I really liked this poems because I am 14 years old and lost my brother about 2 months ago. He was 18 and sometimes I have these major breakdowns where I beg God to bring him back and ask why he took him. I know it won't ever come true, but at this age everything seems possible.
Kelly
omg this is a really good poem! i didnt lose my brother. i lost my mom and dad but this poem relates to me so much !
sarra
i just lost my brother and i think you did an amazing job writing this poem
Azucena
I LiKe Da PoEm You wRoTe. I LiKe WaT iT SaYs. iS BCauSe I LosT Ma FrEiNd -N- Da PoEm It iS TrUe WaT You wRoTe KeeP iT uP . R. I. P VANESSA
Tracey
Hey! When I was 9, I watched my 22yr old brother drown in the local river. Its now 7 years on and I still think about him every day. This poem touched me and is so beautiful. Thanks
Arinze
i'm really touched by this poem. I also lost my little brother when i was 10 years old. This poem actually made me cry because if i had a chance, i would exactly thesame thing for my dear brother. Thanks and God bless
Becc
i love it im very sorry you lost someone you love so dearly. One day you will meet again. It was a beautiful poem
Sunshyn
i lost my dad 7 months ago and still i feel as if it has never realy haapened just sometimes you fell as if it only haapened to and you only knw the pain. we all felt it!
Ashley
Your poem was great. I thought i was going to cry. I really know how u feel i lost three cousins two in a car crash and one at birth. i never really knew them at all. I just wish I could have. I think about them every day.
Tami
That was a very pretty poem!
breanne
this poem really touched the depth of my soul. it made me think of the time i lost someone and needed them with me. God bless america and natalie harrison
Belinda
I lost my brother to an unexpected illness, at the age of 38. I miss him every day and this poem when I read it reminded me of how I feel.
isabell
this poem made me cry. i lost my brother 6 mouth ago he was 3 years old. i miss him alot and i know how heard it is to say goodbye to someone you love.
amber
this poem reminded me about my lil brother who died April 22 2004 i will never forget him he was only 2 months old. My stupid father wouldn't let me see him that much, I hate him for that but theres not much i can do. I LOVE my baby marcus SO MUCH AND I MISS HIM 2!
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