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The loss of a parent can be devastating, more so when thy were also your best friend.

Mommy

As I sat watching by your bed,
A million thought ran through my head.
Of just how much were you aware?
Did you know that I was there?

Could you feel the love I sent,
In whispered word, Or prayer bent?
Upon my cross as I asked God,
To spare your life for my selfish cause?

So that I could tell you just once more,
"I love you Mommy! " as I had before.
And we could chat like days of old,
Over coffee cups all rimmed with gold.

And laugh and joke, or just to share
some small hurt and perhaps a tear.
To talk of the past, or things yet to do.
To sniffle, and sneeze, and say "Bless You! "

All these dreams now hang in shreds,
As I sit here with bowed down head.
And ponder on these sad thoughts.
Just to wonder, "Was it all for naught? "

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
helena
this poem fits the way i feel about my mum
zarah
I have recently lost my dear mother, i was looking for some inspiration and i found it in this poem, it's exactly how i feel! very well written, it touched my heart. Thank You.
deandra
i really love the words of the poem because it reminds me of everything i uesd to do with my mother who recently died last year october 2006 of kidney failure. it really touches me when i can find the right words at the right time. to the author of this excellent put together poem a job well done! bravo.
jessica
this is sooo pretty lisa. i loved it. you touched me inside alot. i was surprised. i dont kno wut id do if my mommy died. but i love this poem and you did great. keep up the good work hunny.
verlenta
i voted for this poem because i just had to deal withthe lost of my own mother and it seems to me just like the day it happened to me
Mop
Your poem brought tears to my eyes, I can't even begin to imagine how you must feel, but it takes alot of guts to write such a touching poem after a tragedy like that, really sorry, LUVED the poem!
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