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The Forever Friend by Artur Hawkwing

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Jasmine
well it touched me because one of my friends I havent seen since like 5th grade and I miss her so much and It makes me feel that something is going to happen and thats what Im really scared of something happening to her so this poem really touched me alot and i hope nothing happens to her pleaz!
mayra
very cooooooooooool
kat
this poem is brillant
RAMIREZ
I LOVE THIS POEM
Elizabeth
this poem was amazing it really has a lot of feeling in it. i like the form and the words used tis is a wonderfur poem. i cannot even express in words how much i love it.
marie
this was a lovley and very tuching poem
Samara
I like This Poem alote.
SaaD
What you said before da poem z real and true , and funny how it seemz it happenz all da tyme. Its a nice poem ,keep up da good writing .
Feroz
absolutely true, it tell u what it feels when u loose a close friend.
ROBYN
THIS WAS ABSOLUTLEY BEAUTIFUL, NO OTHER WORDS TO DECRIBE!
Amber
Your work was well done, and the point of the poem was out there, keep writing i would love to read more of your work.
jade
this poem reminded how precious my frnds were , are and will be.
Kristen
This poem makes me think of when I lost the best friend ever had in my whole life and losing him wasn't just losing a good friend he was my great grandfather. We where so close it killed me to know he was gone that day i lost 2 people and a huge part of me. my life was and nor ever will be. I miss him so much that this poem makes me cry tears of sadness and of joy.
Merlisha
love it love it love it
stephanie
this poem was the moth beautiful thing i've ever heard! please write more. there realy touching!
hannah
it made me cry
danielle
heyyy bo0otifull even thogh i dont kno u i just want you to know that u have a gift from god and that is ur poems u are so0o tallented i wish u all the best in ur future and im really so0orry about your lost friend i kno if i lost a friend i would probbly feel the same way but babe life goes on and u have to get on with your life i kno maybe its to hard to but u cant just keep thinking about it everyday andywaizz im off babe bii biii take care love alwayz danielle
GLADYS
I LOVE THE POEM KEEP IT UP
Ebonie
Hi,Artur Hawkwing Well i really loved your poem it touch me sooo much it made me cry at the end. See i had a friend called Cody Mills and he's not here aanymore and i really do miss him,he would talk to you if you needed sombody to talk to. I just miss seeing his face and seeing his laugh i wish i could bring him back. Your poem really toched me.
Ashante
I really enjoyed this poem bcuz i could relate to it alot and it really touched me in my heart.
Jennifer
I truly understand this feeling and you are left wondering why with no answer. A friend is the hardest part of losing a part of your life when left unanswered.
chelsee
i liked dis poem i have wrote one meself about me uncle dat was a very gd poem. from chelsee xxxx
cricket
this poem made me think about my friends that ive lost chelsea jo chappell paxton lee farris and christy dawn foster. nice job keep up the good work.
rachel
this poem is sooooo deep it reminds me i dont have any friends
SHANNON
I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SOO NICE!
Vicky
This poem touches my heart i lost a friend she was in a comba and didnt make it out
cortany
i really like this one i just had a teacher leave. and this pome is really good
Emily
I really like this poem. It reminds me of a friend who left me fo the 'popular' girls at school. (I am in seventh grade. )
candace
this was excellent! I loved it
Carrie
This poem is very touching if you ever had some one very close to you pass away or know you would never see or talk to them again
melinda
nice poem it almost made me cry it was wonderful keep up the good work who ever wrote this
Becki
this is qn awesoem poem. it reminds me soo much of my best friend basically my brother who i lost in january. good poem. god bless
jonae
this poems is the best one
Kathy
Your poems are so beautiful this one realy hit me hard i lost alot of frineds and this to hit me like i feel those times thank you for writeing them keep it up.
Lauren
I thought that this poem was great. I was planning on getting married to this wonderful guy and he was killed just in February. This poem makes you really think about what you have and what you may lose. Your poem touched my heart!
Tara
Wow. This poem truly moved me. I have tears in my eyes. Thank you for sharing your story and your beautiful gift.
Angie
This is a real good poem. I just rcently lost my best friend in February. I miss her deaply. We were bst friends since second grade and now I'm 20 years old. Your poem was great. thank you
Shawna
Artur, You have a good poem. It sparked a humongous feeling in me. Im crying because it was sooo good. Work hard and ill see your name on a poetry book.
alifah
this poem really touched my feelings
Diana
wat ever u wrote is really true although i have not exprienced it but its true every word is true thanks for giving such a nice poem.
Athina
Absolutley beautiful
anil
it reminded me of my lost brothr, who i loved so much and yet did not have enough time to be with keep up your sensitivity a;
Danielle
I really like the poem it is so heart touching i like to write poems and with this i am trying to write a poem about friends
santosh
i do love many poems and i do write many poems with m friend i love her ver much
Kristina
I love this poem. It explains me and one of my friends so much, I almost started crying. I love how you wrote it out. Simpley beautiful.
livchick517
I thought it was beautifull. its reminded me of a friend i had but then lost her going into high school It was hard to get over nad it took be about a year. I tried so hrad for her to even notice me butit was no use. She would say i miss and that we have to hang out soon. But she never called. Never made an effort. And now i realixe that if she called right at this moment i would have said no beacuse i wouldnt want her to take me bak into her life and throw me back out. If she said sorry for hurting me that would be all i need I miss her so much but thats life and all you can do is learn from it
shelbi
i choose this one because i have a friend who lives in Iowa.
sexc
i like ur poemz
dal
this poem says exactly what i fee
georgie-lou
hey girl, ammm i lost one of my best friends from a brain tumor and i just wanted to die and i didnt think that i would be able to cope and just the other day i found out that my truest friend has a brain tumor and is in hospital and their is nothing that the doctors can do about it but with your poem you let me remember all the good times we had together thankyou love georgie-lou
tanya
i love this poam the peson how wrote this please can you email me another i fell very undersanding to you and i hope things get better im going yto ask you a qquestion i love poams i writte them alot im only 10 bet im still good can you give me some tips i have won 2 awards for pams i put some on the web
Ashley
Thanks, this poem is so true about my friend Ashley and I. I miss her so much. You really helped us alot.
barliin
i love this because i left my friend backing in my country so read this poem helped me. so thank u for writting this peop
kk
this peom touched my heart. thank you for writing it helps me think a lot.
vicky
i fink its a fantastic poem. and i understand as the person who wrote it felt. or still feels.
Emily
That was such a good poem. It made me really think and almost cry. Excellent work
STEPHANIE
When i read this poem i starded crying cuz it made me remember when i lost my best friend. And know that i dont have her is what i need the most Jessica thats my best friends name (i miss you come back)
Andric
written with heartfelt emotions, very beautiful words, very touching, a well written poem!
Brittany
This poem is a very touching poem and pretty sad because many people are loosing loved ones to drugs or achol and Im not saying thats how he died but it a meaningful poem I loved it
sarah
this poem reminds of my friend who moved away
Margarita
You rule!
AnGeL
when i read this poem i cried! i have lost my best friend when i was only 11 and will never be able to see her agen she left without sayin bye this brought it back x X x
cari
this poem is great and reminds me of my grandma. it reminded me of her because it reminded me of Arizona and that is where she lived until she died thanks for the reminder I love the poem cari
Lana
I like this peom so much. It expresses a lot of things,but specificly loss. I have experienced loss and it helps people who haven't experienced it (lucky people!) to know what it feels like.
Amanda
I love this poem its very verbal and speaks from the heart. At least thats what I feel. This poem makes you feel like the person that wrote it really felt that way and knows what it's like thats what good poetry is.
Erica
I thought that was amazing! that was just- touching. that had so much emotion and you are a great poet. i myself just wrote 4 poems. I'll be 14 on December 31st. Thankyou - you have inspired me!
liz
this poem reminded me of two ppl my bros friend (ever close to each other) and my friend that i will never see again i started crying b\c i had flash backs of him and i needed that thanx and i love ur poem
nikki
it was very touching! Your poem really touched me!
lynda
Your poem has brought back a very sad time in my life when i lost a dearest friend through suicide. he never said goodbye, at one time i tried to tell him & others of my concerns, no one listened. and now he is gone. Your words display such emptiness, such sorrow for me. I needed to read this tonight. Thank you for sharing Lynda
angel
that poem is so true. thanks for helping my friends and i.
Tina
Heya, i love this poem it touched my heart and i remeber i've seen this poem when i was 15 but i still do love this!
Paula
This poem captured the passion and pain of the disintegration of a friendship. It was so stirring in its ability to paint the emotions with words and mental pictures of the man standing in the Savanna alone. It left me awestruck, with the ability to see out of the tear filled eyes of the man up to his knees in the waving grass by the beach, feeling the emptiness of loss. I LOVE it!
Mj
If only you could see the tears in my eyes. I can Feel the pain of this person.
genn
WOW!that poem is AMAZING!it's sad but soOoOoOoOo beautiful!
kalee
that is great
Erica
This was the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. It made me feel what I was reading.
Sarah
dude your poem is so true. i feel that all fo my frineds are drifing away one by one
Debbie
Wow!
Danielle
I really liked this poem. It is so very true and I had a Best Friend that was a guy and we called each other "brother and sister for life". Well that all changed because he changed for his friends and he became something that he really isn't. He is now locked up and has no where to go. I hope he learns from this. He was also the ONLY person in the world that I trusted with everything. I would have died for him. Thank you for the poem and keep writting.
Melanie
This poem is so amazing that I don't even have to comment as to why.
Aquirro
very beautiful words, well written I feel there pain.
Tiffany
Iloved your poem it was the best you have the passtion to become a poet thanks for letting me read it.
Zaf
FAB. lovely and sad
Elessar
You really have a knack at poem writing! Really emotional, a fine piece!
Ashley
Hey! I love this poem. It's really vivid! And it really reminds me of this close friend that I used to have, She told me there is no Forever friends, but there is always Forever friendship. Think about it. it took me years to understand what she meant, but now I know what she means, and I hope that all those who read my comments will come ot understand it too. U keep writing! U have a flare for it! Keep it up!
Elizabeth
I really like this poem. it made me cry jus reading it.
Jebrella
Hi! I really loved that poem, and it really talked to me because me and my best friend are in a fight and she asked me: What ever happened to best friends FOREVER? I had no idea what to say, but this poem really says it all. You have a real talent in poetry and keep up the good work!
krissy
i really liked this poem because ive lost one of my best friends we were like sisters and now we hardly talk1 we have so many hatas it aint even funny!
Aviendha
wow, this is touching. youe get the message across without just coming out and saying 'this is wut i mean'. its really great
Tonya
i like your poem because one of my friends died because he was proving a point to his friends and he was swimming across the river and then he got pulled under the water and all the people that was with him didn't help him and on top of that he was afriad of water to.
Red_storm
It's so true. Actually i feel like all my friends are fading away one by one:(
Jaden
Hey this poem reminded me of what happen the other day. I lost a friends because of a stupid remark don't ever take advantage of your friend cause you never know when u might lose them.
frumpled
amazing.
Jay
Boy! I never read this type of poem before. Liked it a lot.
angela
this poem is very heart touching because it reminded me when i was talking to this person he was very sweet but i'm afraid i left this person heart broken.
Mack
I really loved this poem it was so good. You expressed everything with such detail. I could almost see what was going on is was so great. I know how you feel forever is just a joke. But then again if we always think that then nothing we ever have will last. So, we can't let the past decide our future. Be strong and keep writing you have a thing for it.
cn
its a really touching poem so i think you did good
Angel
wow! i love your poem it takes me to the heart. WOW! how did u think of all of this??? it is great. Thanx for the inspiration!
Rain
i love this poem it is one of the best i read
Jasper
I love this poem! i can relate to it.
Cat
Wow. It touched me.
Tawnie
I like your poem but your real name can't be Artur Hawkwing I mean he's a character in a book series
Babee
this poem is so awesome i can totally relate to that (unfortunaltely) it is good to have words for what u feel when u just cant talk and put it into words cause it's too overwhelming
Doop
cool and i can relate
Traci
this what a really good poem
shay
breath taking
TONYA
HEY I LIKED THAT POEM THAT YOU WROTE ABOUT THE FOREVER FRIEND
Katie
This poem is great! I loved how expressive it's and it really paints a picture for me.
Krist
I think it is nice and sweet
angel
I love this poem, i have been there and i know how it feels to loose a friend, earlier on today i was thinking of how i was told forever by this person and it was a joke, its hurts so much, your poem truly is wonderful!
Alex
This poem is beautiful. I was quite moved by it, an dI can realate to it.
M
a very nice poem with majestic expression, a poem which really is a treat to read for any reader who like poetry
quena
it's really great i should send this to my friend before,coz' it can really touch her heart. this is true.
Chiu
I loved it. A most touching and sweet verse. Deserves our time and feelings used on it
Javed
Its the best poem . I love it very much. The man is really great who wrote this.
Andie
I love the poem. Keep up!
Tracey
it was a sweet poem!
Azwald
A work of art in the form of writing. Never before have i felt such inner pain such as the one when I read this.
Danielle
Nice. Wonderful poem. I lost a friend but in a horrific way and it makes sense.
Sandra
WOW! I can relate. You have a strong talent. your poem had a strong powerful meaning. I like that. Keep up the great work.
Doina
The poem is good, it captures the most important thing in life:friendship. The association with the nature remains eternal, because these are our feelings for special friends.
Katie
The poem i just read was very good it had really made me think about me annd my bestfriends friend ship but i should reall let her read this maybe it would knock some sense in to her head 4 once
Toni
I really liked this poem because i can relate to it very well. I have had friends do this to me on purpose and because it had to happen. I also like it because you talk very religously and wheat you said was true!! I hope the best for you and your friends! :)
rob
WOW!!! what else can i say
Jillian
Very moving I can relate! Great writing talent!
Sam
I loved the poem. I will share this poem w/all my friends!
jessi
wow! that is so sad and touching! great poem!
Steph
i think this poem is really kewl and i would read it over and over agian
Tamara
I like his poem very mutch.
Ashley
it was very moving, you really true do have a talent of writing poetry
Zhou
Nice and touching!