Artur, You have a good poem. It sparked a humongous feeling in me. Im crying because it was sooo good. Work hard and ill see your name on a poetry book.

wat ever u wrote is really true although i have not exprienced it but its true every word is true thanks for giving such a nice poem.

it reminded me of my lost brothr, who i loved so much and yet did not have enough time to be with keep up your sensitivity a;

i do love many poems and i do write many poems with m friend i love her ver much

I thought it was beautifull. its reminded me of a friend i had but then lost her going into high school It was hard to get over nad it took be about a year. I tried so hrad for her to even notice me butit was no use. She would say i miss and that we have to hang out soon. But she never called. Never made an effort. And now i realixe that if she called right at this moment i would have said no beacuse i wouldnt want her to take me bak into her life and throw me back out. If she said sorry for hurting me that would be all i need I miss her so much but thats life and all you can do is learn from it

i like ur poemz

hey girl, ammm i lost one of my best friends from a brain tumor and i just wanted to die and i didnt think that i would be able to cope and just the other day i found out that my truest friend has a brain tumor and is in hospital and their is nothing that the doctors can do about it but with your poem you let me remember all the good times we had together thankyou love georgie-lou

Thanks, this poem is so true about my friend Ashley and I. I miss her so much. You really helped us alot.

this peom touched my heart. thank you for writing it helps me think a lot.

That was such a good poem. It made me really think and almost cry. Excellent work

written with heartfelt emotions, very beautiful words, very touching, a well written poem!

this poem reminds of my friend who moved away

when i read this poem i cried! i have lost my best friend when i was only 11 and will never be able to see her agen she left without sayin bye this brought it back x X x

I like this peom so much. It expresses a lot of things,but specificly loss. I have experienced loss and it helps people who haven't experienced it (lucky people!) to know what it feels like.

I thought that was amazing! that was just- touching. that had so much emotion and you are a great poet. i myself just wrote 4 poems. I'll be 14 on December 31st. Thankyou - you have inspired me!

it was very touching! Your poem really touched me!

that poem is so true. thanks for helping my friends and i.

This poem captured the passion and pain of the disintegration of a friendship. It was so stirring in its ability to paint the emotions with words and mental pictures of the man standing in the Savanna alone. It left me awestruck, with the ability to see out of the tear filled eyes of the man up to his knees in the waving grass by the beach, feeling the emptiness of loss. I LOVE it!

WOW!that poem is AMAZING!it's sad but soOoOoOoOo beautiful!

This was the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. It made me feel what I was reading.

Wow!

This poem is so amazing that I don't even have to comment as to why.

Iloved your poem it was the best you have the passtion to become a poet thanks for letting me read it.

You really have a knack at poem writing! Really emotional, a fine piece!

I really like this poem. it made me cry jus reading it.

i really liked this poem because ive lost one of my best friends we were like sisters and now we hardly talk1 we have so many hatas it aint even funny!

i like your poem because one of my friends died because he was proving a point to his friends and he was swimming across the river and then he got pulled under the water and all the people that was with him didn't help him and on top of that he was afriad of water to.

Hey this poem reminded me of what happen the other day. I lost a friends because of a stupid remark don't ever take advantage of your friend cause you never know when u might lose them.

Boy! I never read this type of poem before. Liked it a lot.

I really loved this poem it was so good. You expressed everything with such detail. I could almost see what was going on is was so great. I know how you feel forever is just a joke. But then again if we always think that then nothing we ever have will last. So, we can't let the past decide our future. Be strong and keep writing you have a thing for it.

wow! i love your poem it takes me to the heart. WOW! how did u think of all of this??? it is great. Thanx for the inspiration!

I love this poem! i can relate to it.

I like your poem but your real name can't be Artur Hawkwing I mean he's a character in a book series

cool and i can relate

breath taking

This poem is great! I loved how expressive it's and it really paints a picture for me.

I love this poem, i have been there and i know how it feels to loose a friend, earlier on today i was thinking of how i was told forever by this person and it was a joke, its hurts so much, your poem truly is wonderful!

a very nice poem with majestic expression, a poem which really is a treat to read for any reader who like poetry

I loved it. A most touching and sweet verse. Deserves our time and feelings used on it

I love the poem. Keep up!

A work of art in the form of writing. Never before have i felt such inner pain such as the one when I read this.

WOW! I can relate. You have a strong talent. your poem had a strong powerful meaning. I like that. Keep up the great work.

The poem i just read was very good it had really made me think about me annd my bestfriends friend ship but i should reall let her read this maybe it would knock some sense in to her head 4 once

WOW!!! what else can i say

I loved the poem. I will share this poem w/all my friends!

i think this poem is really kewl and i would read it over and over agian

it was very moving, you really true do have a talent of writing poetry