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Hand In Hand by ShoeBowl

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Elle
yeah this poem is so sweet and it remindes me of smeone i once loved! u go girl!
Katrina
this really touches my heart cause it makes me think of my boyfriend!
Amanda
I LOVED this poem. Its just how i feel about my baby. WOW!
marci
you made me cry. that was so sweet and i wish i could be back with my bf under the stars. hand in hand. i love this poem. thank you
rachael
i've always searched for a poem that describes the way i feel about my man and this poem exceeds my feelings
krissy
this poem is really sweet. . i really love it. its like while you read it, its like you are in the poem. like reality.
sharon
i thought that this poem was very sweet. feelings are hard to explain unless you know how to write them down on paper which shows me that you do. it ROCKS!
Brielle
This poem is everything i felt inside because my boyfriend is away right now and i wanted to send him a poem and this on stuck out to me. Reading this poem gave me alot of ideas on what i can say to him. Thank You
Amanda
I give this poem a 10 out of 10! It touched my heart and me and my boyfriend can enjoy it together!
meagan
i liked this poem because its true. when you feel love its just like this. once you find the one you want to be close with try it its really sweet.
Shuquale
THAT POEM WAS SO SWEET
carole
brilliant poem, it seems to just put the words that you try to tell someone into your mouth, because we all know that when you try to tell someone exactly how much you love them it comes out all wrong, If you were to give someone this poem then your feelings for them would be very clear.
Lena
Oh how i have dreamt of feeling like that. this poem has given me hope again, thank you.
Krissy
I thought this poem was very good. It describes every girls fantasy or atleast mine. ShoeBowl please continue to write great poems like Hand In Hand.
Haley
I felt really touched by this poem. It is very beautiful. I felt inspired the most of all the poems I have read on this site. It is simple enough to understand and relate to. Congratulations! Excellent!
Chris
Oh my gosh i LOVE this poem! I have been married to my husband for two and a half years now and there have been SOO many times i have wanted to say these things to him. just couldn't find the words. Love is such a powerful and awesome feeling! Thanks for putting it into words
Nikki
this is such a lovely poem really tounched me and mi bf
Joan
This Poem really touched my heart
TK
It seemed so and alive. Great work!
robyn
i really like this poem because it says a lot about people's first loves. :)
Amanda
This poem was very good.
martha
This poem really touched me, I loved it.
Amber
I really liked this poem. It makes me want to think of all my past memories, and what I want to be. I liked this poem a lot.
jessica
i loved it i couldnt said it better my self
lucy
This poem is so true. i love the way the poem is described. xxxxxxx
Lauren
i like this poem I hope one day my life could be like that!
geanette
this was a great and touching poem it touched me
Noneof
I like, no i loved the poem.
Kerly
excellent poem it was also really nice and sweet!
Daniela
This is a really touching poem and i really loved it. This is something that i would not be able to express.
Bailey
i thought it was a very well written poem and it was also a very good one at that!
Britt
Excellent. You put some of my recent thoughts on paper. Thank you.
Donna
i love the poem,im a huge fan of ur poems
MARY
THE WORDS YOU CHOSE WERE PERFECT YOU ARE A GOOD POET
Ezli
So touching. really sweet
Catianne Marie
This is a really sweet poem. If I Had to rate it from a 1-5 I would give it a 5 =) I just want to ask you one question was this poem for a loved one who left or no because Im trying to look for poems about a love one going away because hes going to the army! Just a Question but keep on with the poems. I like this one Love always Your Friend Catianne
Alaina
I really like you poem.
Steffy
I wish that I would've been able to express myself in that time with this, the feeling was there, I just couldn't get the words out.
Aigner
the EXACT same thing happened to me! only we were standing under the stars not laying. this poem really toched me. i love it. he was me first love by the way. that was 2 years ago. and we are still together!
Amy
That was really good reminds me of how things were with my ex maybe I'll send it to him.
Kaci
I loved this poem it was very inspiring
whitey
Simply beautiful. I wish I could feel that way again :)
caroline
this poem is everything that happens in my life . it is total talent.
Theresa
I think that this poem means so much. I wish I had that sometimes.
Veronica
i just liked it, and soon you'll be reading some of my poems!.
Heather
This poem is the sweetest thing I have ever read! It made me cry reading about it because it's everything me and my boy share!
Linda
WILL I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS GOOD
Tommy
I am going to use this for my girlfriends.
Benjamin
I loved it so much I gave it to my girlfriend wish me good luck. :)
Sharron
This poem was perfect for me. It really hit home; I wish I could get my boyfriend to believe.
Tiffany
This poem is just heart stopping and I think that it should be in a book.
Gucci
Ofcourse it said in poetry what my hubby and I experience sometimes while holding hands. Can you write one about a long and cozy hug?
kaela
i loved your poem it was beautifull it bought a tear. i love your work
Katie
Missy you make me so proud. i love this poem. i hope your doing good in the USMC, i know you are
mike
I thought it was a very uplifting piece of poerty keep up the good work. thank you very much
becky
you know i really like what you said you just made me realizies how much i want to be w/ my b/f even if were far away thx. i love poems keep on sending them
Alex
Now this poem reminds of my girlfriend so much
SILLA
THAT IS A PRETY POEMS I LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRB HOW YOU FELL I THANK U FOR LETING US READ YOUR PREETY POEM
Tina
I really liked this poem, It was sweet. It pretty much speaks for all who dream of a night like that. Thank you for sharing it!
Janie
IT'S SWEET I LOVE IT & IT'S THE BEST ONE I'VE READ SO FAR.
Mandy
The poem is great
Katie
you are my best friend in the whole entire world. I want you to know that after we graduate and go our own ways, you will live on in my heart for forever. You are such a good writer and I want everyone who is reading this to know that you are also the WORLDS BEST FRIEND. You are the one who can make me feel the best on the worst of days, your the one who touches my heart everyday, your the one who teaches me more about trust and love with each passing day, I want to thank you for everything you do and everything you are, because you truely are a miracle. Best friends for life. you and me
Nikki
very nicely writen i like it a lot.
baby
i really like this poem it really touched me to the heart!
Katie
I really enjoyed this poem. I think the author has a lot of talent. I hope to see more from ShoeBowl in the future!
colin
great poem,very moveing,just like love should be
Crys
This poem is a very deep poem, great job
sid
this poem is great! the author has great talent. persue it and write more. i hope to see more poems like this from ShoeBowl. i'll come back to see all the others!
Laura
this poem really described the relationship i have with my boyfriend.. its a beautiful poem
Yitzel
i liked this poem a lot..it described what i felt exactly but couldn't say to the one i love
Ashley
hello i just loved your poem it touched me in many ways.
joe
Verry great poem i was impressed!
Maria
I cryed when i read this poem. It's so lovely and made me think about a kind person that i loved so much.
Megan
This poem reminds me of my boyfriend and I!
g.s
This is what i call a love poem its sooo sweet and full of pure love just made me close my eyes and dream.You are great.
priscilla
Very well written. I tought it was very romantic. Good job!
N
This is exactly the poem I was looking for. It sounds like what I was trying to write, but I have been stumped the last few days. My 5th wedding anniversary is coming up and this will go great on the gift tag of my gift to my husband. (of course you'll get the credit.) Wish you the best of luck in writing.
meg
this poem brought back great memories, its as if the poem was written just for me! i loved it. keep up the good work
Mel
your poem made alot of sense. It was a great poem to send to my boyfriend
Rockman
This was a really great poem. I could see myselj laying there with my perfect love! Good job!
elizabeth
This song was very touching, indeed. Simple, yet very complex.
rolandia
I really liked this poem. It's very romantic, I enjoyed reading it.
Tiffany
Oh WOW! I really liked this poem. Its probably one of the best i've ever read. This poem describes me and my b/f so much and the stars and everything cuz we really love looking at them together. And right now we're in a point in our relationship that we have distance and it really sucks,but i love him so much. Well thanks for writing this poem i really needed to read to it,
juliet
beautiful. what can i say?
Leslie
That was really good. Keep it up. God gave you a great gift.
ceri
That was a very romantic poem. I enjoyed it alot.. thanks for sharing
ashlie
this is a sweet poem
sid
I think it is the best romantic poem i have ever head.The passion described is exactly what i want to express to my sweetheart.I salute you the poet of this poem.
Ashley
HEY! I LOVE THIS POEM! THE SECOND TIME I READ IT, I STARTED TO CRY. IT IS SO SWEET AND TRUE. IT HELPED ME IN MY RELATIONSHIP. THANKS SO MUCH :-)
Jessica
I really loved your poem. It reminded me about me and my boyfriend.
suubun
woow extra ordinary!
Jacki
I thought this was a very sweet poem and I think I'm going to give it to my boyfriend because it expresses a lot of feelings about someone you love deeply. I'm sure a lot of other people feel the same. Great job.Keep writing. I'd love to read more of your poems in the future.
Molly
I love it! I tink that it express every feeling I have for my love..
Amy
I just wanna say that this poem really touched my heart. While I read it , its seemed like I was really there. It brought warmth to my heart. I LOVE IT! Please write more. They are worth reading.
MAtt
GREAT PEOM< I SENT IT TO MY GIRLFRIEND TO WHOM I FEEL THIS WAY ABOUT
Melissa
I thought it was great. To me it expressed what the author was feeling,and it's great feeling love at least once in your life. because so few get to. Thank you
alon
a very nice poem to send u're sweetheart
jani
I thought your poem was beautiful! It reminded me of someone I care about very much. There isn't that many poems that I actually like and I like yours.
yari
great poem! I'll give you all the credit in the world! thanks yari
Stef
I love how you wrote this poem! I love it, You have done a really good job!
Monica
I love this poem (Hand In Hand) so much it is so increadible! It touches me so soft inside. I have heard great poems but this one is something diffrent. I think it is something more special, and whom who wrote this you have beatiful TALENT keep it going.
In
When I read this poem, I was brought to tears. You know,,when you are really, true in love, you have found your soulmate, words flow like an endless river, calm, beautiful and serene. Thank you for that moment.
MIRZA
I love this poem because it is something that i could relate to and it is the way most of us feel when we are withthat special person.
Angela
I am a very sentimental person. I think this poem is beautiful. You have done a wonderful job. You have said so much in one poem.God Bless
Misty
I LOVE THE POEM. IT MADE ME THINK OF THE TIMES ME AND MY BOYFRIEND USED TO LAY UNDERNEATH THE STARS AND TAKE LONG WALKS TOGETHER UNTIL HE MOVED AWAY. I MISS HIM SO MUCH. THAT POEM REMINDED ME OF HIM. ~LOVE MISTY~
DeeplyPassionate
I totally understand how you feel. Last night i was alone under a full moon with my boyfriend and everything just clicked. thanx for sharing your talent
Tammy
this poem is really cute
princess
NICE POEM
Shannon
I thought it was a very sweet poem. Great job.
Heather
This a great poem. I loved reading it.
Tiffany
That was a very sweet poem that I am sending to my boyfriend!
Laura
I loved this poem so much. There is a guy i like at the moment and these are the things that i want to do. i loved it so much. I dont know what ur real name is but Shoebowl i really think u are a great poet. keep up the good work.
chanel
this is an excelent poem you should be proud. i only wish i could express my self like you.
Annie
hello ur poem sound very romantic peace n quiet it sound good keep up with the poems hope u rite more i really likes poems bye hopw all the best 4 u!!!!!!
romeo
that was a nice poem.
tammy
This poem is very sweet and innocent,like your first love.
kristy
i really like this poem it really touched me
steven
this was the best i have ever heard it fits me and my sweet girlfriend just right
Jezebel
i really love this poem.its very sweet and passionate.one of my favorites.
amy
beautiful poem,words are right,it just a great poem,but how do i send this card to someone special
Kent
Soft and sweet, Very nice.
Romell
This was a good poem. I might have just read it at the right time but it hit me in the right place.