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My Love Left On A Saturday by Michael Perez

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Jackie

This is a very good poem, good expression of emotion and love.

nick

Bro, I felt this one. Aren't chicks evil?

Emily

I really liked your poem; it reminded me of my ex who I did not want to leave but as you said I was forced to. YOU HAVE GREAT POTENTIAL!

aGirl

Tears started falling down my face! I read this and Im going back to see my bf (whos name is Mike. weird!) and its basically a make it or break it thing and if I leave itll be on Sat. And it makes me so sad to see what he might feel like. Thank you for helping me see. GREAT WORK!

Leif

A very good writen poem i have to say, i like the way the author proposes his sonets. me being a man i have to admit that this poem really marked my life beacuse i broke up with mty girl friend a saturday night Thank you for having this poems opened to the public

annie

It was really sad but i liked it!

Helen

This is so true, my love left on a sunday, i can still, to this day feel the intensity of my emotions as a watched him walk out the door. I was ready to curl up and die, even my clothes ached my skin as i removed them that evening.

Tasha

its booty

Rissa

A lovely poem! What's interesting about it, is the fact that it reminds me sooo much of what happened between me and my ex bf abt 3 mths ago. Unfortunately he thought it was best that we part - I was pretty much left heartbroken and even to this day I think of him.

kendr

Its touching on what a man can write , You don't usually see a man write poems , but when you do they are beautiful. GREAT POEM , MAN!

tahn

i guess i can use this quote "it's better to have been loved and lost than to have never been loved at all" i guess that the bad part is the awful pain when all your dreams are over and reality comes nocking. but you know you have a great way of expressing yourself in such a beautiful way. your poem touched me. cus i lost my one love but it was my fault, but anyhow keep writting!

Lisset

good poem, men don't usually share their feelings of such, for fear of "less masculinity" but you said it bluntly and with feeling. that was cool

darcy

i like it !

dunge

This poem is very nice. it describes true event which is happen to any body. Thank you for writing this nice poem

Parul

The poem is so simple and touching. How when everything seems so unbelieveably perfect, with no scope for doubts, so smooth that there can be no flaws.within a moment destiny with it's cruel twists, leaves us so vacant..so pale..languishing. One feels.is this moment TRUE or was that true when Love resided?

Dinny

your poem just reminds me of this saturday morning and the actions I took.

parul

Michael u have this wonderful gift of being able to mirror your emotions in the rhymes that many of us can relate to.i don't know if it helps purge the heart of the pain, but it sure does make the love and the pain an immortal ones..hope you keep carving such beautiful lines.and ofcourse true love shall come your way!

geovany

Most of the time human beings agree in one thing: We all can feel love as well as sadness. Good for Michael. I think his is a beatiful poem.

linda

hi i know what i mean.i havent been through the same thing but i know how it feels my love life aint the best right now. keep the good work

Steph

this poems tells exactly what i think

Peter

This is the story what happened to me a while ago. Funny... my love also left one a saturday.

Cristina

i love this poem.as simple as that.

Muhammad

Dear webmaster, Hi, I read some poems on your site. I choosed the poem wrote by Michael Perez. Same story was happened with me when I was a college student. Since that I am in what condition,only I know. I think you can easily understand my feelings about this poem. Thanking you,dear.

Patrik

It´s so deep and so much me.

Liza

Michael, I loved the way you put your feelings into words, I could feel myself relating to everything that you wrote. Keep up the amazing work...

Tabitha

This poem touched me deeply...i feel what the writer is saying. I know how he feels in every way. If you read this please don't stop expressing yourself with your poetry, you could touch many lives with it. You have a gift a beautiful gift. Tabitha(18tennessee)

Jackalou

Talk about fulfilling an insatiable need...I've often stumbled upon the question of a man's devotion. Most sentiment is portrayed by the woman of the two conjoined, so I dare to challenge a man's affection toward his beloved. Michael has stepped up to the plate here, and he soars high as he has become febrile with accomplishment and satisfaction on my behalf. Now I know beyond reasonable doubt that I too may invite hope to remain within the depths of my soul, and wait patiently for my bethrothed. I was once advised against wishing for something I already possess, that love will find me...well, my adorned heart has been bled but sits idly for the next ride.

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