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At Night by Miss P.

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Stephanie
your poem was nice
amber
this was a really great poem and very touchy! this persom must of had very deep fealings for this boy. and thats y i always think alot of boys arent worth it because you give them your heart and they just throw it away. this poem is great this person is a great poet and should use her talent to express her fealings more often! when ever i am broken hearted i think this poem will come to me like the blink of an eye! well done this poem is great and im sure that alot of other people would have been touched by this poem just like i was. i hope i see more poems written by this person more often! BYE for now p. s if you write more poems you will be hearing from me again
Maggie
This poem really touched me. It reminds me of my ex-boyfriend. This poem describes exactly how I feel.
Michelle
This poem totally describes what I feel and going through right now. Amazing, I could never be able to put my feelings on paper.
Saad
I believe this song is talking about me
Michelle
Nice poem! i relate to it.
Stephanie
i love this one from who this is beacuse i thank of my ex. boyfrioend and i think that makes me happy so i want to so thank you soooo much and if you want to so something like i am crazy then i dont care but i just want to tell you how i feel about you poem
Tatacat
This poem really touch me.
Romesha
I really liked this poem and it touched me. Actually when I read it it made me cry
shawana
this is a good poems
Maranda
This poem really fit me well. It was a wonderful sad poem and i loved it.
Briselda
this poem is really nice keep more comeing =)
cyara
i am voting for this poem because it touched me in so many ways. it touched me because a lot of things that were said i do, i think about this one guy at night cuz he did me wrong he told me he was not ready for a relayionship but yet he got a girl. so, i still like him and all and i think about him a lot but like the poem said i guess it was just a dream.
Sandra
Great poem. It braught back some old memmories.
Cheyenne
This Is really good really tru for me i'll alwayz think of dis boi at night an you just summed up my thoughts thanx peace
Christina
I was searching for a poem to help me cope with my disorganized feelings, when i came across this poem. i wanted to cry to release my feelings. and when i read the title I thought to myself "At night is when all my feelings come out and it's 1:00 am right now so this would be apropriate" I really likeed what i read and it made me remember my "ex" so to speak and well i cried. but thats a good thing. I feel like i have a conection with it now, i love this poem.
Alison
I love this poem! This is excatly how I feel at night sometimes! Great job!
samantha
this is a really grate poem please write more your very talented
Youstina
WOW, this poem is really so beautiful !
Jason
That tells so many true feelings it's not even funny.
codie
hey whats up i really like your poem. I think i like it so much cuz i feel the same way and i go through that to.
brittany
I loved this poem i feel like this with my exboyfriend i love him but then i realize that i really don't feel that way i really really loved this poem!
Melissa
This is a poem that hit's me hard, it's how I feel, and it's a vary strong poem.
Gen
I loved this poem because it seems so true.
Raven
I have to take sleeping pills for this very ailment.
mireya
I like this poem very much. This can be very true.
flaca
i love this poem cause it makes you think about your relationship and stuff
Rebecca
I was truly touched by this poem. I'm 13 years old and i met a boy 2 months ago online through a friend. I absolutely fell in love with him and we started goung out then i found out he had cancer and within 4 weeks he had died and i never got to meet him. It broke my heart so much but all i can do now is pray for him xx
Kayla
It was really good i can relate to it.
arshi
this poem really touched me because its the same way my life is goin on and i too feel the same this person does
Crystal
This poem is a perfect poem of how things were before for me and I would of wished I would of read it before. I like it alot!
steph
this poem reminds me of my ex boyfriend who i love with all my heart i will never forget him. thankyou for writing a poem i can read and just feel him with me.
karine
I think this poem is really well written! I fell the same as his author caus I lost everything and i wish to her his author to forget the past and go further in his life to feel better.
kenya
this was really great and in a weird way i can relate
Krystal
I loved your poem,when i was reading your poem it brought back the times i was with my boyfriend and how i feel for him and everything that was sayd in your poem was the way i feel. You did a good job.
shahid
It is in such a simple word but somehow it tormented my heart.
ella
i think this poem is very nice. it tuched me and everything it remindes me of my and my ex boyfriend!. i like this poem very much! from ella
Ruby
Hello, my name is Ruby, and well i wanted to tell ya'll that that's exactly how i feel all the times at night! i just don't know why most of the guys don't take stuff serious as we girls do! and well i always have to get in love w/ the wrong person. i just can't help it! and this poem really touched my heart AWW it's so sweet! keep ^ the good work guys! :) i love it!
Nik
wow! you hit it right where it hurts, that is a great poem, at night the same exact thoughts come back to me from my last love.
Addy
9/10 I love dis poem just because i think that its so true because its at night when you have to think about things and ur imagination goes where it wants
Leslie
I really like this poem becasue i was abel to relate to how that person felt at night.
Juanita
This is the cooliest pome I ever read
my'lin
i love the poem. reality bites! nights can be so unreal.
trisha
wOoSh! yA rIgHt! iT ONlY hapPenS At niGth. hUhUhu. i mIsS mAc sO mUcH! mIs yOu babY! hOpe u cOulD 4givE mE. wAla lanG! tHis pOem rEallY rOcKs me!
Tasha
This poem was gorgeous! I love it. it made me cry. Im feeling the same way. keep up the beautiful work.
nina
i really like this poem because i have laid in bed plenty of times and done the same thing and now that i no im not the only one i feel alot better now thank u so much for writeing this poem good job
Tiffany
very good it was great!
Jessica
i love this poem its so sad i feel a tear comin down :'(
J
i really do like dis poem cause i relate to it so much word for word
Persha
this is a very nice poem,it really pertains to me and my past relationship.
Stacy
It was a great poem! I can relate to everything your saying
Shelby
Yea. I feel this at night too.
babi
omg i luv dis poem it made me cry badlyyyyyy
lauren
i broke up with my boyfriend 3 days ago, and i dont think i will ever get over it!this poem was very near to my heart, as last night i was awake all night cry and thinking of the good-times, half dreaming that i was still with him. but then the morning comes andyou realise it all was just a dream, and things willl neverbe back to normal again. it very emotional poem. i brought a tear to my eye!
repon
I read your peom it was so cool and sad alittle
DaDa
I really love this poem, I had the same thang happen to me. Keep writting these poems
adaimis
miss p. i think you got the idea from my life cuz i feel that exact same way. when you love someone truly it hurts!
terry
I really liked your poem it touch me. I been thru that and the same amunt of time too! 1
peanut
this poems remind my of all the things that happen to me in the past and now i'm just gettin over him and all the pain that he put me in
Roxy
I love this poem! It really relates to me. Thanx Miss P!
wajdan
The best one. perfect one I love it I love wvery single word of this poeam whoever worte this Good job.
CAROLYN
aww this thing reminds me of mah ex. it sux. lol
sandra
i think this was a good poem i loved this poem from the first time i read it thank you soo much for writing it! sincerlly, miss lewing
naina
i loved this poem it reallty touched me
Caity
that was a 10!
jeanette
this poem is great. everything it describes i feel. i wish that love was that easy to forget, but its not. anyway i really enjoyed this poem
Kim
Being that I am going through this right now- this poem does speak to me the way words have never done before. It expresses how alone one feels when you have lost what you know, what you loved.
Akilah
Ohh wee! Man I don ben thru dat. I kno how it feelz 2 wizh dat thingz were da same wit sum 1 u cared 4. Den u realize dat datz da way it iz
jessica
i like you poem very much it remind me of myself
m
I loved this poem, i am going thru a breakup, or as he calls it, a break. Either way it sums up all that i feel and helped clear my heart a bit. Thank you Miss P
PUSELETSO
THIS IS GOOD MAN, I LOVE IT
Brittany
This poem really touched me because, The exact same thing that happened to Miss P. happened to me in the EXACT same way. It's like something lead me to this poem and as I read the Intro. I realized that this same situation happened to me with my baby Terrius. I feel that same way when I'm sittin in my room at night in my bed thinkin bout all the times we talked on the phone, I went to his house, he told how much he loved me, etc. But i guess it was all a big joke to him. It left me with a HUGE hole in my heart. I still love this boy inspite of what happened between us. I had been with him for 2 months and he drifted away from me.
otha
i love it!
Kelly
Wow! You have no idea how much this peom just touched me. My boyfriend and I recently broke up and I told him at night is when I think of him most and cry myself to sleep. Thankyou for posting this poem. Its nice to know there are others out ther eliek myself.
juliana
this poem is so good i really like it, it made me think a lot and it remindes me of myself
carrie
that poem really touched me. i guess thats howq love works, you can dream forever about the one you love, and wake up to reality and realize he is'nt there anymore. sometimes you cry at night cause you wonder if it was all your fault. that poem was awesome. i loved it
Angelina
Hey what an awesome pome i love it
Nigel
The poem At Night was a very very Touchy poem. I have the exact feelings for my Luv which matches to ur poem
badz
it reminds 'bout my 2ndgf. i cant sleep at night remebering our past. i realize dat i was a fool thinking 'bout wat weve been through d years.
Ruby
I love this poem,it made me realize of what I'm going thru at this time. It touched my heart and made me remember about my exboyfriend whom I was madly in love with. I still think about him every single time I go to sleep at night.
jared
I never cry but my girlfriend and i just broke up and reading that poem was the exact senario that I am in and I cried.
Donamarie
I really felt like this poem was me speaking about a partner i have now. I love the affection of the night (when its there ) but by day i feel life goes on in a brave and unreal way. Without the closeness of my partner, but at night we lay together and nothing else matters but the love and warmth of being together.
Molly
I loved this poem. I feel like that towards my ex. I loved him for forever. And i still regret everything that happened and wis we were togeather. But like i said excellent poem.
alen
this is exacly wat i think about at night i wish i could go back with him. but there is no more of me and him. just like the poem said"there is no more of us"i wish i could go back with him. I WISHHHHH.
tess
this is good cause i can relate. i do the same thing every night, with the same thoughts
emma
WOW! that was brill i now relise how i feel bout ma ex, and i need 2 tell him. now u hav given me the strenght 2 do that. thanx. x
stefany
4 those who r confused this poem is what every day people feel
Giovanna
I thought this poem was awsome. It reminded me of when I had problems
Daisy
i like this peom. i go through this sometimes at night. it's a sad peom but i like it!
omon
nice piece of writing. u can actually save someone dying frm emotional stress. these were jux d words i needed to tell ''her''
sheena
all i have to say about his poem,is''WOW''!i thought it was so beautiful,just exactly what im going through.
Gina
i love your poem Missy P i know just the way you feel i can relate b/c i lyk diz guy in skool but he left me hanging & he's w/another grl who not me & i do just as you have wrote in this poems thanxs now i know i'm not alone w/the same feelings.
Shakita
I loved the poem and right now i can honestly say i can relate to it. Thanks!
cal
i think that poem was awesome it reminds me of the way my bf i use to be. and it seems like we are going that way again. soo i just wanted to say that was a really great poem
Vanz
I Really Liked this poem because it kind of makes me think about me and what I do, because me and my old boy are not together and I really miss him!
Claudia
I Love this poem! I totally feel you! I know how it is when the love feels gone, but not for you side, for the other person. I give this poem a 5.
Gina
i loved ur poem miss. p i totally can relate 2 ur poem thanx 4 ritin' it u should keep ritin' i'd love 2 read some more.
Briana
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! IT BROUGHT ME TO TEARS WHEN I READ IT. IT MADE ME THINK OF SOMEONE I LOVED SO DEARLY WHO MOVED AWAY. YOU SHOULD KEEP IT UP YOUR POETRY IS AMAZING!
teresa
very good poem, i like i like
Angel
This poem reminded me of what has been going on in my life. It always seems that i think of the on i love (i truley love)at night i i can never sleep with out thinking about him every night befor i go to bed. My heart always seems to be awake a night.
megan
This poem is great I love It soooo much!
jennie
i really felt your poem ! at night i think all those same things .
tavie
it reminds me of me an travis my x
Devin
Very Nice. I was just faced with the same situation. My gf of 8 months, my first love ever decided out of nowhere that we needed time apart, then never called so i broke things off. it hurts the worst at night :( - Nice Job!
Tara-Lee
So true
Rose
oh my gosh. this poem describes exactly how i feel about my ex. this is one of the best poems i have ever read. it's amazing how some words on an internet can trigger someone's emotions like this did. i love this poem, this webstie, and everything about both!
jilou
it was really good
Johnathan
I really love your it speaks to me the same thing happen to me but we a female I hope you are ok now.
CANDACE
THAT POEM IS ME BECAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT THIS BOY I WAS WITH FOR 1 YEAR AND WE ARE JUST FRIENDS AND I DONT WANT TO BE JUST FRIENDS
Lorell
I love'd your poem. It really touched me. My bf left me last nght and I Love him and I know i always will but life has to go on. thanks you put in words my feelings.
Kayla
i thik this poem is almost the best one i've read so far
g-baby
i thought it was very very good. It reminds me of my ex bf i still luv him but i want him back but he dont want me back
Katy
I just about cried when I read this poem. My first boyfriend and I went out for a mere 2 and a half months, broke up, went back out for a couple more weeks and then we broke up again. All of the break ups were his decision. This poem really expresses how I feel and I wish that there were more poems out there like this one. Even though I'm going out with someone else now, I still wish that me and my ex-boyfriend were still going out because deep down, I still really like him. No matter what, I will always love him. Nothing that anybody says or does is gonna change that. In other words, I'm in love with someone else when I am going out with someone else and this poem expresses exactly how I feel. Thank you so much!
jade
i think ur poem was great i loved it
Ashwin
Ms. P, Your thoughts just touched me, for, I feel the pain which runs at night and the mind begs for sleep after the eyes water. AN
Justin
a short, but very meaningful one. it really touched me. it ressembles the same xperience when i tried to meet n' be with my loving frend. but all was in vain. my attempt! good luck Miss P n' please try to put poem like this one in the future.
SHEONNA
That poem was wounderful i loved every momment of that poem you are a very creative poet to be a teen
jasmine
i really think this poem should get voted because me and boyfriend are just like that except he haven't broke nothing off and i haven't either but i still wish we could get better
kelsey
i think this was a really good poem it knid of reminded me of my ex boyfriend and me
kennrcik
hi whatz up so i realy love poems you poem realy tuch me thanks
velly
i really like this poem alot its everything i wanted to say but couldn't put it to words i think who ever wrote this must have a lot of talent i really do like it hope u keep up the good work!
tara
good poem
andy
I really enjoyed reading this because i could totally relate to it. Every word you wrote just made me remeber those nights alone where i would think of my lost love. Exceelent write.
Jennifer
the exact thing happened too me and I always think of like daydreams of what could of happened and this poem made me feel so much better it had me smiling again after a long time of frowning
lilly
I love that peom its alomost what I'm going throught with my boyfriend/ex-boyfriend Ross who I love a lot but he doesn't think I love him but I do.
Chithra
Wooooooooooow The poem was really good. I have much to tell about this poem, but word is not enough to express ma feelings about this poem. it has really simple words, but those all are the truth and has wonderful meanings. keep up the good work.
sarah
hey wats up i guess i felt like this before beacuse i wrote poems like it this summer after i was foreced to leave the man i loved. for the mere reason he was a man . i am now with someone else but that feeling still haunts me at night the feeling of wishing that things were the way they were before and that herts. in the morning when my new love calls me on the phone i remember it was all a dream and hopes that wont ever be true. newayz yea i liked your poem alot . -sarah
Kristen
That is is the truth!
angelie
The poem sounds good. It really touch me. hehehehe
shannon
Hi, i know how you feel,i feel the same sometimes
Icisis
I loved Miss P. 's "At Night" Poem. it touched my heart because i had met this guy online a while ago and i liked him so much it hurt. So now he has not been online in 4 days and im getting worried and scared of the fact that he might have someone else. and this isnt the first time he did this to me. so at first i ignored it but now its getting to me so when i read that poem i was thinking about if he was messing around on me. So i thank Miss P. very much!
kishor
it's a very good poem i have ever seen. actually i saw these poems for the first time and i like this one very much. it's close to the heart and the last line shows you the reality.
hobbit
that was a nice poem that can really relate to me and when i had a love during the summer.
Strawberry
WOW this poem got to me because it reminded me of my EX boyfriend and it almost made me cry i love him so very much still and i have no clue why hee hee
Amorette
This poem is really good, i feel the same way, i have just ended a seven month relationship, and i still hav a lot of feelings for him, and i am not sure if he still feels the same way for me. I really do wish that he would cause he made me really happy, when we were together.
Liz
i really liked it! it mad me sad, because i can relate to it exactly!
Michelle
Your poem touched me. We have all had these feelings and thoughts about ex partners, especially at night in bed. Night time is the only chance I get to listen to my thoughts as its MY time. The morning brings with it the realisation that they are only thoughts and reality sets back in.
kid
I actually did that at night thinking of the one I love so thats why I like the poem so much great job=)
caroline
that is how i sometimes do at night too!
Janet
that was a great poem
ariana
heart grasping! awsome job
Victoria
I really like the poem. It was so touchin to me. It was nice.
Loretta
I like this poem becaues it sound like me.
Ms. Ronda B.
I had just broke up with my boyfriend as well and this is how I feel At Night.
FoRgeTtful
Hey I really love this poem,, i can really relate. sounds like the same thing that happened to me,, and it hurts like no other. but great poem!
Rebecca
I loved It!
Agnes
i like it. your poem is a written story of me. those thinking and memories. they came at night. when he's not here anymore to hug me
Meer
This poem touched me in the heart because I am experiencing that situation at this very moment and i really understand where you are coming from,i really really love this poem. Great JOB!
p
great poem i can totally relate and it makes me feel good to know that there are other people who think about all these things at night. I love the poem!
eku
At last I could find something that describes my feelings so well. I could completely empathise with the feeling of the poet. At night I think of him and pray for a miracle which could bring us together. But in the morning I always feel that whatever happened was for my good. I had started feeling that these extreme swings in emotions are indicating some kind of mental problem but I think its so normal to think like this. At least now I know that I haven`t gone insane.
Anna
Oh my gosh. That poem was so true. I have done that many of times. and i'm only 13. what a shame. Well thankyou for letting me read your poem. IT WAS AWESOME!
Luzy
I could relate to this poem. It brought sad memories back to live, but it also gave me the satisfaction that I'm over and done with all that pain. It only made me sronger and gave me a new view in life itself. Thanks a lot. Keep up the good work and write more and more poems.
Adara
Omg This poem hit home it describe my excate feeling and thoughts about my break up thanks for putting how i feel in to words when i could not
rose
i love your poem alot. when i read your poem i konw it remind me and i remember my b. f. thanks for that.
Rosely
This poem really touched me. This is exactly what happens to me at night now that my bf broke up with me, I still love him. Good job!
Sondra
I read this. after my breakup with my ex. What you wrote was telling a lot of fellings that happen when no one is around. At nite things are a lot differant. Awesome Stuff,Keep it up
Miss
This poem really touched me because this is what i do every night. I think about this guy who just ended our relatuionship for another girl. I feel like im the only one but this proved to me that there are more than just me out there and i would like to thank you for writing it!
Kim
Your poem is great. 10 out of 10. Wonderfully written.
niki
I was in a very serious relationship for 7 years! I felt as though I had gone through hell and back with him. Although we had some wonderful times together, and like you said at night I miss him dearly, I also wake up to a new day and remember that was lastnight!
Cassie
I can't belive how ture this poem is to my own life. I loved it.
Kelsey
OMG! This is ssoooooo great! I'm going thru the exact same thing, there are two guys in my life that i love right now, but i still love the other more so i dream about him and i together again. But i wake-up and realize it was all a dream.
Brooke
same exact thing happened to me but after month 5 things became bad. To top it all off, i "gave" myself to him because i thought he was insecure about me graduating and him still being in highschool. Here's a little advice for people. THey say only have sex when your in love, don't even do it then. I was in love with him but i guess he didn't feel the same way and a part of me will regret it for the rest of my life but another part is happy because I LOVED HIM. Great poem I love it
tiffany
i really love this poem. it reminds me of what i think about every night when it comes to me and my ex. its weird cause i think basically the same things.
DANA
I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS RALLY SWEAT AND CUTE AND I CAN KINDA RELATE I HOPE U KEEP WRIGHTING POEMS!
jme
omg. this poem was absoulutely beautiful. it reminds me so much of my ex. i'm still deeply in love with him and think of him every night before i drift to sleep. keep writing.
vikki
I understand how you feel because I went through so much and I still love MY EX. yet he doesn't know at all.
CRYSTAL
THIS HOW I FEEL ABOUT SOMEONE RIGHT NOW KNOWIN THAT NONE OF MY DREAMS WILL COME TRUE. HE KNOWS I LOVE HIM BUT HE DOESN'T FEEL THAT SAME WAY. I TRY TO BE STRONG EVERDAY. THIS POEM HAS HELP ME REALIZE HOW I REALLY FEEL AND THAT I NEED TO TRY TO STOP DREAMIN AND JUS GO ON WITH MY LIFE.
Amanda
I really like this poem because it reminded me of how me and my ex boyfriend David were at night I think of him all the time and when I wake up I just remembered it was all at night. Good Job on this Poem!
selfish
i loved it it mad me stronger
elissa
ur poem kicks!
Amela
We were only together for 9 months. But it felt like 9 years. The emptiness I feel when I am alone, you've captured it. Yours is not a poem but what every broken heart feels.
shelly
i love your poem! it reminds me of my bf, he died one day. this poem reminds me of him. this poem is really i mean really good!
Jordan
this same thing happened to me not to long ago nice I was touched. But i really mean it.
katie
Wow this poem was good, i know how it feels to fall in love fast and have it fall apart. i still love my ex
clayton
That was basicly my life a couple of years ago and it just brought back memories. But it's nice to know that other people go through the same things I did, so I don't feel all alone. Nice work, keep it up.
Tiffany
This poem was short and simple but I totally understood where you were coming from because at night I do the same about the one I WAS with.
Ashleigh
i thought that this piece was very good and it made me think. I enjoyed reading it and when it came to an end i read it again and again. I love this poem and i am going to send it to my ex cause all i do each night is think of us and dream of us but all that he does is use more girls to get back at me and doesnt realise how i feel. hopefully this will help 10/10 for this piece
lucy
MISS P I LOED YOUR POEM . EVEN THOUGH IM NOT FELLLIN DAT I DID LIKE A YEAR AGO NOW IM N LOVE. N I HOPE EVERYTHING TURNS OUT OK FOR YOU .
Kelsey
OMG I love your poem! I can relate to it so much, and it's really touching. Awesome job!
A
wow this poem is great. I just lost someone I thought I would be with forever, and everyones says "life goes on" but its when You are alone, by yourself, when its hurts and haunts you the most
hallie
I just went through the same thing and it blew me away i didnt think there was a poem that could desribe it. It was great!
julie
that is sooooo true cuz me and my bf broke ^ 2 months ago and hes in 2 of my classes and i wish i could talk 2 him but i can't
Justin
Your poem was beautiful! It describes me to the dot in and i. I do exactly as you wrote
HAFSA
i loved this poem. it really touched me
Denise
True work of an artist. Explains thoughts and emotions, that can be felt so easily. I can definatly relate to this. Excellent Job!
rose marie
i truly enjoyed reading your poem. i too understand what it is like to loose some one you really love and i am dealing with that right now. i lost some one, my first true love for some imature reason and your poem really hit the heart.
Blue
That waz great. I can really relate 2 dat poem. great poem. Keep up da good work.
Lindy
this is exactly what im goin through right now. me and my boyfriend drifted away so i ended it not knowing how much pain and sadness it would cause me. i just wish i could go back and be with him. it was so perfect. now im just here and im not really living.
khaya
i really liked this. i liked this boy for the longelt time, and just realized he was taken. even if i say i'm over him and that i've forgotten it. i really haven't
Hira
I loved your poem. I actually cried after reading it . I can relate to how you feel
zach
so far i have looked at a lot of poems but so far this is the one on the site i like the most well thanks again and keep righting good poems PEACE
Bethany
I loved the poem with so much of me. That poem made me love it, because it relates to me so well right now. So many people go through heartache and pain and loss. and it's so hard to deal with. Very good, keep on publishing the poems!
aGirl
omg!I'm at a make it or break it point with my bf and this totally whats going on in my head! Thank you so much! It helps to know that someone who thinks the same can write it down so nicely.
Trish
I love this poem, I felt like it was completely reading my situation
Jess
your poem took the words from my heart and put them on the screen its like we are the same person. wonderful poem
Laura
This is a great poem, it made me remember a lot of the memories i had with someone and we broke up. I really like this poem you put a lot of thought and feelings into this, thank you.
Amanda
This poem was very simple but said a lot. it totaly explains me, at night is when we do most our thinking and i def. think about all the things that were said in this poem.
culesha
I thought this poem was very nice. I could relate to it on so many different levels. I was once in love with this guy, and then he moved away unexpectedly. I was very sad and heart- broke. Your poem realy helped me in so amny different ways.
Maria
I love this poem and would love to read some more by this author.
Lizette
This was a very beautiful poem. A month ago i broke up with my boyfriend of 3 years, because of unfaithfulness, and your words put my thoughts and feeling in that poem. Although it made me cry because things arent at its best between us, i wanted to say it was well written.
Janelle
I love it , it describes me all the way
Carolyn
What a beautiful poem! This really hit home with me cause i left my bf of 1 1/2 years due to him mistreating me. This was only a week ago so i'm still very upset. Thankyou for showing me that i'm not the only one who feels this way :)
Rachael
I really liked this poem. Although i'm still with my bf he has just moved 200 miles away and every night i lay and think of him and how much i want to be with him!
FLy GuRLie
i really like this poem. This is the pain i feel rite now so i'm feelin this poem even more.
keaunka
I understand this poem i feel like you took my feelings and wrote them on a peace of paper
Ying
Its all so true. I can try to make myself numb in the day by doing lots of stuff to free my mind from dwelling. When night falls, I am alone once again. And I cannot escape all the memories that keep huanting me.
Thuy
This is such a great poem. Your poem is exactly how I feel at night. You're poem made my day. Its great so keep up the good work.
kayla
oh my gush this poem is exactly what i do. i lost my first love 4 days ago. and i wish i could change my past. i loved this poem,it really touched me.
Lorrin
i really enjoyed your poem it really touched my heart in a way that poets never could. my boyfriend recently left me after about 4 months and that poem describes everything that i have been feeling lately. good luck with life
Gwyneth
I loved loved loved your poem. I had a "thing" with a guy for about 2 months. but we'd never made it official because I had another guy whom I also liked. I broke it off with the 2nd guy but a few days later the 1st guy stopped talking to me. I miss him so much and this poem was so true to me. I cried because I can feel your pain.
Joni
Man, your poem really got to me. What also got to me was the description of the poem. I am in the exact same position. It is nice to know I am not alone. As i read this poem I cried my eyes out. It felt good to let out the pain that had been hiding inside me. SO, thanks.
cathy jo
I can identify with all you have said. At night. thank U.
Lisa
this poem hit me so close to home. me and my bf are starting to fade away, and it breaks my heart, but i know that after we break up, things will eventually get better.
Shietheir
I really love this poem, it really reminds of how this boy used to treat me in october of 02'. I used to cry over him every night, but it's been 6 months since we've been together I don't cry anymore
Anisha
That is really nice it reminds me of somethings.
Meiko
I can't believe it. Your poem and the description of it completely describes me and my previous boyfriend. I know how you feel.
German
your poem is great. im sorry you and your boyfriend broke up
ae20
Great poem! It explains exactly how i feel!
Kemi
Miss P girl!wow is all I can say. I'm speechless.
Ash
A wonderful poem, expression exactly what lost love really is months after, I still love her; and hope that one day we will be together again. Love can touch just one time and losing that love can be awful
Alex
I can relate to your poem. I am feeling the same way too. I go bed at night with hope and dreams but only to wake feeling lonely and depressed.
Alyssa
I Really Love This Poem It Really Hits Home For Me . Its Like I Wrote It My Self . I'd Just Like To Say Thanks To Mrs. P.
Satya
It was nice to know that I am not alone in the sort of devastation that losing love can be. Its only the grind of the day that keeps me going. Nights, I am dead. Hope springs eternal but isn't that a torture too?Miss P in me you will always find a shoulder to rest on and share the pain.
Aimee
I loved this poem. I was with this boy for 16months and i thought it was going great then one wednesday he broke up with me,He didnt give me a reason,He said he didnt know why he done it. At night i wish we were still together and i even tell myself that if i really want i can ask him to be with me again,But when it comes to the morning and i see him,I just get nervous and i end up not even talking to him. Its been about a year since we broke up,Yet i still have feelings for him. I hope you dont mind but i wrote this poem down in my poem book i keep. One day we will be together again but i hope that day comes soon. Thank you for the poem,It made my day.
bry
I love your poem, my b/f and i broke up 3 months ago. And now it seems like we are not friends anymore. And it hurts me to know that i will probably never be with him agian.
Blake
This was a poem that hit home to me. Me and my gf dated for 2 years and at the end we started fading apart and i started treating her wrong by yelling quite a bit. I now regret that mistake because we have broke up and she if with another man. I have tried to get her back but the only way i can is in my dreams.
katie
I loved your poem. i know exactly how you feel. at night all i do is think about him but then i realize i wont ever get him back
jorja
after reading the poem i really felt sad because i know how it feels to long for a person you really love that doesn't love you anymore. :( sad isn't it?
Jenni
This poem was awsome. this is how i feel about my ex boyfriend!
kera
YO POEM IS SO TRUE I MEEN THAT HAPPENDS TO ME ALOT AND IN THA MORNIN ITS ALL IGHT. BUT I THINK YOU GOT TALENT. I REALLY WAS FEELIN THA POEM
zack
i love it! i lay at night everynight thinking of my ex-girlfriend all the time thinking the same thoughts i feel your hurt
simposn
This poem made me cry b/c i juss ended a relationship juss like this and at night i stay up and think about him!thanks for helping me relize i feel deeply about him and im not ashamed anymore
MIch
I think your poem was awesome, i can relate to you many of times
kryst
When i read this poem i started to cry it really reminded me of the guy i was in love with and still am but i know that we will only be together in my dreams.
star
this poem. was very touching. it made me think, about me, about my x, and how i fell in love with him, but now, we arent together anymore and nothings happened. this poem is exactly how i feel like a perfect match to me and my feelings, i loved reading this poem it like jumped out at me. i liked it. and thanks
KariJ
I loved this poem. It was so real to me because this is something I have felt, something so true but yet so false like a dream.
Peter
Nice poem but I am a guy and I was left wrongfully behind I feel like crap I feel like nothing am 21 and can't find love nobody loves me
Tiff
This poem is so true even the reason u wrote it I was with my bf for almost 3 months when we broke up and now neither of us know why but whats worse is the day after we broke up he was in a bad car wreck so i really do think bout him at night and all of our friends say once he wakes up(hes in a slight comma) tha we will b together again because we love eachtother and love is thicker than lonely nights!
Jessi
OMG when i read this poem it made me cry so much because everyword it said thats how i feel and still felt about when my b/f broke up with me. This is such a nice poem and its touched mai heart.
Emily
Reading this peom was like reliving my situation. We dated for only a short time, and nearing the end of almost two months things started to go bad. Its been nearly two months that we've been apart and i live each day with full regret. He now has a new girlfriend but i realized i was in love with him when it was too late. I live each day with a sheild over my thoughts until night comes where i can wish and pray for him to come back to me
Manda
The things mentioned in this poem reminded me of my thoughts when I broke up with my first love. I always felt emotional at night , yet during the day I was fine and thought I was over him. Great poem!
lisa
It was good and i like it
mario
Thank you for the poem, I just left my would be girlfriend. Its funny how you can read a person's body language and five days ago one can be so intense and now its like she reconsider her feelings. I was trying to find some sort of siren to hear my heart screaming, but I can't cry(lol) so I tried miles, coltrane, holiday, even sade, it was until I read your poem, I could not utter any words. I give you a deep amount of respect, which is hard in my current situation. Keep up the good work. From the soldier who is fighting the losing battle.
trudy
oh my god this poem really made me feel, you are awesome it reminds me of me. I bet it's been a inspiration for a lot of people.
Frank
Well Miss P u hit it right on the head. i too had an ex-who i loved so much but after months we broke up due to many things. and on thing especially. that we grew apart. i thank you for you poem. it means alot to me. thank you!
Shata
This poem is my life except with my boyfriend it was like a year, and it all left. Suddenly he had other things to do. Oh he will never know how bad he really hurt me because I just knew he was different, but it seems to show the truth now, that he is the same as all the other low-down boys.
Susan
I cried when I read this. It is exactly how I feel. Only in my dreams is he there now and I hate the mornings when I wake up and realize it was all a dream
Marco
I think this is a poem which looks to be so simple, but I know it is something very deep, something from a dreamer and a lover. I love that!
Josh
I thought that poem kicked! It decribes exactly how i am feeling about me and my ex girlfriend/bestfriend. I try to keep myself busy during the day so i dont have to think about her and all that has happened between us, but when I lay my head down to sleep there is nothing that keeps me from thoughts of her.
kenneth
i know how u feel in this poem, so i not how deep your feeling is. i can relate to this poem that y i love it. keep doing your thing
Ebony
this is a beautiful poem
Ashley
your poem touched my heart so much because that's how it was for me and my ex-boyfriend
Irish
tears just escape my eyes at night,they have not got reason to leave it was two years.why am i still looking back?memories memories too painful to remember but too painful to forget. lovely sentiment, but all too true for so many people in this life.love is supposed to be simple-isn't it?when i was younger that was what i thought,how come things have to change?
Jamie
Hey there! Amazing peome.. Me and my BF of 6 months just broek up and every day I wake up with him on my mind. I know its hard sweetie.. but in time Youll get over him. Wonderful poem!
Parul
sometimes Love lasts a second..but the memory of it's fleeting lasts forever, sweeping us into it's maze of futile thoughts and vain hopes, everytime we are alone..and Yes, THE NIGHT HAS AN ENCHANTING TONGUE that sings to us with throbbing passion again the many secrets we run from.the saga of beak emptiness. Kee3p up the great work.which is so touching.so moving..so haunting!
Amber
I really enjoyed this poem..though it was short.it was very good..so many things can be expressed in so little words.very good job on this..and i love it..
Ashley
You have a gift for writing poetry. I enjoyed the poem you wrote. I can relate in my life to what you are trying to say.
Jo-Ann
This is so true! It's the most wonderful poem I've seen on this site.So.keep up the good work!
AKM
so true. so true. my bf broke up with me a month back
Kimbelry
OMG, I have been going out with this guy for 3 months and at some point I feel as if he and I are drifting apart. I dont want to lose him though, because I love him a lot and your poem is exactly how I feel sometimes.
angie
Hey Miss P, That was the best poem I have ever read in my life. I connected with it in so many ways. ~great poem~
serena
I really liked this poem, i can really relate to it right now. keep writing ;o) your an inspiration to me
BlueLibra
Your poem basically sums up my summer and fall. In a wierd way I don't feel so alone. You captured my emotion almost perfectly. I've yet to be able to express it so well.
Rafael
beautiful and original will touch the heart of whoever reads it!
Claudia
This poem is exactly how I feel about my ex who moved to California, and whom I still love with all my heart. He is sweet, funny, and georgeous! I miss him so much!
SEMRA
He girl i just wanted to say thanx for writing this poem .It seems like u wrote it 4 me and its funny how it explains exactly how thing were going 4 me and how it ended i just anna say thanx u and god bless
Tabatha
i know that this is a catagory of relationships that went wrong but mine is an unusual story it remids me of my boyfriend brandon that died in april of 2001 he was my life and soul and now that hes gone i read a lot of poetry and listen to music for compfort this is a great poem and its at night when i am all alone i think about us being together and now were not but when i get up and got to school i realize i have lots of friends that love me and i can go on but i love him! thank you for your inspiration i love this
muns
Emotions beautifully expressed by words.Really touchy!
Nina
i feel this way too...thinking about the times i had with that person...thanks...
Bob
very good, I know how it feels
MsV
Miss P., thank you! This poem speaks to the heart! Keep writing, because you're helping to eleviate a lot of pain from a broken-heart.
Michelle
this was a really cool poem
Whit
this poem really moved me and it is all true and i understand exactly how you feel. this poem is one of the best i have read.
Elise
wow this poem truly explains how i feel. i can totally relate to every word.its like u took the words and feelings directly out of my soul.i am going through those feelings right now.the nights are hard.thanks you for your poem.it helps to know that someone is going through the same things i am.its a beautiful poem
Missy
i think that this poem is so true. This is exactly how i felt and still feel after my boyfriend and I broke up. I layed there and prayed all night and wished that he'd come back to me but i realized that it would never happen.
shannon
This poem is amazing its amazing how its acactly my story im glad this person wrote it and who ever did i know how you feel!
Saul
I loved this poem and thats the way I really feel and do
alicia
wow, u all have rel talents ..i think this POEM is so true, not for me but for what my friends when through. This poem is very nice and has lots of true meanin.. very good work!
Forgotten
Your poem has really brought some meaning to my situation. You are a great poet and just to tell, I was hyperventalating when I read this because of what happened between me and my ex-boyfriend. At least I know some else shares my pain..
linda
Miss P this poem thouch my heart.. my boyfriend and i still together we have been for a year and well after about 4 months he left to college so we got in fights alot. we fight all the time when we speak on the phone and when he comes to visit me..but i dont have the guts to just end this. i love him so much and i know he loves me but we fight all the time.. thats why the begining of this poem really touch my heart. and well your peom is what we really all do. WISH..thanks miss p.. keep up the good work
Ashley
I feel this way all the time at night. That is how I know this poem is true.
Claudia
This poem is so tight. I like it A LOT! you go girl!
shawn
damn. i could not have said it better. a thousand thanks to miss p. you gave me just what i needed, i heard just what i needed to hear. and i thank you.
Tim
This poem was very deep and it struck me.I think it's a great poem.
Rohit
ARE U THERE AND LISTENING? THEN LET ME ASK YOU THIS. IS IT YOURS OR MINE - WHOSE PAIN THIS POEM DEPICTS? Tears roll down my my eyes even as I write. We came close so quickly, and in two months we lived almost a life. She was in far away, I went to meet her. we were together for two days which seemed forever. We shared those magic moments and I returned. I do not know what went wrong she started drifting apart. and we broke off on 14 Feb, exactly 2 months and 6 days after coming to know each other. All these sleepless nights that I have spent, made one thing sure. I WILL NEVER FORGET HER.
Anzelle
i cried my heart out - thanx for making a difference in my life and please send me something personal - please! I lost my boyfriend of 3 years and I need someone!
tyra
i am really feeling this poem. keep up the good work.
Katrina
Miss P. I know how you feel I was in love and I still am and me and my ex were dating for four years and then we decide it was not just us dating and always arguing so he broke it off. I can't belived I lost him. I love the poem thak you for writing it.
Claire
I can totaly relate to this poem. I think its awsome!
Nic
I really liked your poem because that is exactly how I feel right now.
jamie
this was soo true. my friends and i are always saying that we hate to go to sleep cause before we sleep, we think and the thinking isn't good, it reminds of all memories and regrets.
CHRISTY
THIS POEM WAS SO TRUE LIKE IT WAS JUST TALKING RIGHT TO MY HEART. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. FROM A READER I'D LIKE TO SAY WE REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR WORK. THANKS
Sarah
This is exactly how I feel!
babie
i really like this poem it explains every thing that went on in my love life he felt different after the break up than i did
donna
This is sooo true!
Jaman
I really liked this poem...I really meant something about me and my loved one before...
Vicki
This is a wonderful poem keep up the good work!
trisha
she speaks the truth...she is a good write..extremely good
jayme
I know excatly how you feel. I was in love with someone( and I still am ) but I let him go because I was my first love came back in my life and i picked my first love over my current boyfriend And now one year later I now relize how much how means to me. I miss him so much not only was I in live with him he was my best friend too but now he is really happy with this girl. And I promised him and myself that I would never ruin his happiness. even if it means that i'm unhappy. do you think I'm dumb for that? I cry a lot over him and what I 've lost . Even tough yesterday me and my first love celebrated our one yaer anniversy. Maybe I 'm nuts but thanks for your time I 'd love to read more of your poetry! jayme leigh byers
Samantha
I really liked this poem because it relates to a relationship I recently ended. It really tore me apart and somehow, it helps to know that other people have been "on the same boat."
demia
All I have to say is that is deep....keep up the good work
nirav
miss p your poem is just great 'n' it reminds me of what i'm exactly goin through all in all it very nice poem
stephanie
Miss P., I enjoyed this poem because I had went through the same situation with my ex-boyfriend.At times I felt like I was the only one going through heartache every night and crying myself to sleep.But my love didn't leave he sure enough came back and now we are waiting for me to graduate so we can start a better life together. Keep it up with the poems because you make them easy to picture in the mind.That's why I voted for you.
Evangeline
I was in love with the man whom I was with for 5 years & whom I thought would be my husband eventually. Then, within a conversation, I heard from his own mouth that he has another girlfriend. Within a split second, I could actually feel a physical pain in my heart. I couldn't breathe. This happened 2 years ago but till now, whenever I recall that night, my tears flow naturally. Night-time is always the time when the devils come out to play with your mind and when you feel the loneliness of your soul.
Staycie
this is a great poem it speaks to me.
Kevin
I know what you mean and feel here. I love your poem. It's super. Night being the most romantic time of any day. WOW.
caifan
I like the poem because the things it sid. They are true
Barbra
I love this poem, it touch my heart.
MARIE
I THINK THAT THIS PEOM IS SO SO TRUE YOU GO GIRL!!
Dan
I don't know but this is the most wonderful, i've seen on this site, thanx for this poem it help me to go on an forgot about all the bad moemnts PS; sorry for my bad engkish :(
Shelley
I see so much talent and life in your poem. I can see, and can almost feel what your saying. Your deep.
melissa
That's really scary because I'm going through something very similar to that right now.
melissa
It reminds me of what i think about at night and also what i realize in the morning when i awake.
scoobie
i really liked the poem it was kind of ok untill the end but i liked it so good luck on being in the top 100 so keep trying
TWANDA
I thought this poem was awesome because thats what we really do in everyday life.
Rick
best poem I`ve read in a while. really meant a lot to me
lyande
the poem was great i read this poem and i had the tears in my eyes because i wanne quit with my boyfriend but i can't because i love him to much.
chrissi
I think thats a really great ,touching poem, made me cry..
Sierra
Iloved it!
Leo
I wrote a message almost like your poem,but yours has much more vividness to it.Such a beautiful poem.