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Unhappy Christmas by Steve Woodman

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Amanda
That was really a VERYYY great poem. It was amazing.
Heidi
After i've read yer poem A lot of feelings came over me. I felt sorry for you and sad too, So i think about you the next christmas that comes. take care
kimberly
this is a very sad but true i think that you should keep writing like this to let everyone know how really evil the word is!
marlana
DANG
darcy20
wow!
adrenaline
I hope u got a better chistmas this year. I feel so sorry for u.
Nelly
this poem reaches out to people on a personal level. It says its for kids, but i asure you it reaches out to many more people. I feel the structure of this poem in a way is somehow based on personal experience, i'de be curious to find out, but i know when i write i write from personal experiences too. Over all a great poem, and an outstanding author.
Nessa
hey at least not every christmas is the same. your poem really touched me my dad used to hit like that except he left which made it worse than being taken away i suppose. in other words i understand where the poem is coming from good work! hope they keep coming
Ronny
I read your poem and I nearly dies because it was so sad and I was sad when I read it and then I read it and I got sadder because it was such a sad poem with a sad title and a message about a father and he hit his son and that made me all crying and stuff and my dad doesn't hit me but if the did it would be sad because that's not what people should do especially around christmas oh my god it's just so heartbreaking
Tyson
Hey man this poem was good . keep going. I had a little bud that sometimes got hit. That guy aint around no more though.
Cathy
Steve, what an inspiration your poem is to those who do not realize the reality in this sad world. Keep writing in a positive and inspirational way!
chris
hey man sorry about that i hope this christmas is better for you
fred
sad, but true.
Angie
THAT POEM IS SO SAD AND I LOVE IT.
jon
Enjoyed Steve's poem. I just wonder if he is drawing on personal experiences or if it is pure imagination. I am sure it goes on. Well done.
Meighen
amazing
christina
the poem was great
Nuria
This is a poem showing injustice in the world, and how cruel human being can get...
Hayley
this poem is so sad. i think that you really got the truth of what it's like for those kids into that poem. just once more: IT'S GREAT!
Peanut
Wonderful! Excellent! I wish I were that father in the poem. Oh, baby. Beat him with a stick!
Autumn
Hey, Steve your poem is really really sweet and sad. I was reading it and i send it to my friend Lacy she love it too. She said it was really sad! All my friend loves your poems they all are really good. Even Bryan my boyfriend he hate poems he said that are for girly girls like me and all my friends but when he was reading your poem he was crying.!
jim
A touching poem by a thoughtful author.
Autum
Your Poem is the Best! It's very sad and i cry but i remeber when i dad hit me and my two little sister! Thanks so much you help me in away i can not show!
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