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One Last Start by Samantha Yost

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lisa

hey this is lisa just wasnt to i really loke your poem i was really nice and sweet i hope you will holla back k bye bye

Stephanie

I love this poem even though I'm only 15 I love it. It has touched my heart to hear about that. I love writing poems but I would never have writen anything like that unless I was really talented.

amanda

this poem made me realize and think about my babys daddy maybe we should start again

keisha

this poem is so nice i mean i was never in a situation like that but i felt what she was going through. i hope that he is there for her and the baby,and i know that she will be a great mother.

mandy

yo this poem is nothing but da truth its kinda what i am going threw you know, but my only problem is getting hurt again.

Kayley

thid poem id fab really touchin, itz great !

Trista

I have to say this was a great poem i went through exacly ever word in it im 17 yrs old and my baby is 2 months old and me and my b/f broke up when i was 5 months pregnant and got back together when i was 8 months he told me he was ready and wanted one last start to make things work. I always tell people if they let somebody go and they come back its true love so maybe it was ment to happen this way. Its hard to do on ur own but i made it and i know the rest of the girls with this problem can do it so never give up hope.

hella

this poem is the best! OMG i can totally realate to it in all ways. when i was 13 i got pregnant. Aj (the father) never once said a word after that night. when he found out i was pregnant with his kid he started comin round. now i have 3 kids im 16 all from aj and i havent seen him since i had my last one 1 1/2 years ago.

Peace

I really like that poem it went hard.

Viviana

I feel your pain.

Cheyenne

I thought your poem was awesome because when I was 14 I got pregnant by a 19 year old. When he found out he went to jail for like a week. I seen him everyonce in a while after that and when I lost the baby is when he starting coming around the most.

David

Wow, this poem really touched me. Im not really into poetry but you inspired me to read on. I loved it. Thanks for sharing your feelings with me. I hope you all the best for the future, keep up the good work.

ashley

I love your poem

Nikki

three letters: W-O-W! That was really touching because i went through a stage where i thought i might have been pregnant and i was scared that my b/f was gunna leave but it was a false call and it made us stronger!. I hope that you give him another chance. we're humans we make mistakes but everyone deserves another chance!

Stephanie

i love this poems,i read it everytime i come on this web site.

amber

it was great all my friend loved it

chrysty

This poem is very touching. I lost my first love because I thought I was pregnant. It doesnt feel so good. But all everything happens for a reason

Amy

I thought your poem was really good. I understand your situation cause I've been there time and again with one of my exes and no matter what he does I'm always right there ready to give him another chance, even though I know I shouldn't.

jenna

I think that your poem was very touching and I knew it took alot for u to deal with him over and over and I love my bf so much and we have a kid together and she is now 2 but back when i first had her he left but i gave him another chance and he changed so much! good luck for you, your kids, and their father in the future!

TIFF

I give much props to the author of this poem. I had the exact same situation going on.

shy

hey thought that poem was so good i liked it even more because it was long i like longer poms than shoter poems shy

chris

This poem was written excellently. I wonder how hard it would to be in love with a man and then have him leave you when he finds out you are pregnant. I hope it never happens to me. I feel sorry for the ones who have to go through this experience and my prayers are with them.

Best

this poem is how my life is right now

TIM

A STUNNINGLY,CREATIVE+ENIGMATIC POEM WITH TOUCHES OF REAL AND GENUINE EMOTION. THE RYMING PATTERN CUD SO EASILY BE COMPARED TO THAT ALLUDED TO BY MILTON'S WORKS. EMOTIONS CONJURE A POWERFULLY VISUAL+VIVID IMAGE DEPICTING UR INNER CONFLICT AND ANXIETY. THANKU 4 UR INSPIRING WORK.

abraham

this poem was verry tuching i think it was the best

Jessica

this is a great poem it shows what it like to have a man that doesn't want to say just cause you were pregant i hope it helps all of us young girl taht think getting pregant is the way to keep a man around but it isn't

jasmin

great poem

Luscios

I read this poem and it kindah made me feel bad. But it was a really nice poem and I wish you the best of luck.

Hannah

I really love this poem. It reminds me so much of my life now with my baby. I love my baby's father and I wish that we could be together again. I want to hear him say that he wants to give it one last start.

Becca

I love this pome because it sounds so much like how my dad felt about my mom when she left 4 kids behind. but when she left for the 2rd time she never came backe, not for at let 16 years. Fanlay after 3 mounths my dad had got killed and she thought she would be a mom to me when. I want to give her a chance but she left me when i was only 3 wekks old Now I am going to have a baby and she thinks she is goiong to try to tack this baby from me. Think you for your time Becca Sapp

claudia

i love this poem you wrote it reminds me of my friend she went through the same stuff. it is amazing how someone can write there real feelings out in open.you did a great job.

Jessica

that poem seemed a lot like my first love. we had a baby things seemed fine untill my baby boy came. Weird how guys want a second chance after it's late. There was no new start for him. He is now my best friend who I can go to for everything but I could never spend day and night with him.

Karen

This poem really tuched my heart i know how you feel.If made a stupid falt.You must learn to forgive yourself.Give the guy a changs maybe it works out if it doesn't it is Gods will.Good luck I'll keep you in my prayers. Me ?????

Linda

Don't give him one last start tell him to kiss your butt and don't come back...

Pepper

This is a wonderfully written, down to earth poem! I wish you luck with your future!

michelle

this poem reminds me of how my relatioship went when i got pregnant and told my boyfriend he left me

crystal

i think it was a great poem and it explains a lot of what tenage girls go through today.

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