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The Gift by Susan Miller

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Vanessa
I would like to thank you for writing this poem it has touched me in a way that i can't explain..I'm sending this poem to my boyfriend soon it will be his turn to open his gift
sara
i really loved this pome. it gives a whole new meanning to the act of making love.
Gabby
Fantastic ! Oh this is so beautiful this poem.. it truly says it all when you are with the one you love for the first time.. a gift.. yes.. our love is a gift to those we care to give it to..
WLYESHIA
THIS POEM CAPTURED THE SHEER ESSENCE OF THE LOVE AND LONGING I HAVE FOR MY BOYFRIEND. WE HAVE BEEN SEPERATED FOR THE PAST YEAR AND I COULDN'T THINK OF A BETTER GIFT TO GIVE TO HIM THAN THE GIFT OF LOVE...
david
This poem makes me think of and feel my girlfriend kristy. Only a month we've known each other, but i love her already and feel it in return. I'm telling her tonight. What else can i say but thank you.
Leslie
Truly soul touching.
mariann
Great
Sean
This poem tells much about almost every sensation that accompanies those "first touches" in a loving relationship. I commend you for your ability to make the reader feel exactly what it is that you felt inside. Well done.
Kristie
Girl let me tell you one thing, this poem is off the hook. The reason why I feel this way is because I am experiencing a situation like the poem, but I rate this poem a 10 on a scale of 1-10.
Vicki
SSOOOOO powerful.
nb
Excellent expression of one giving themselves totally.to thier Love
Christina
It was very beautiful,something you would send to somebody you LOVE
james
Very Nice...Very!
Teri
I read this poem and got goosebumps.I recently met a man whom I've fallen deeply in love with and this poem describes everything I feel for him.
Kim
One of the most touching and romantic poems I have ever read. i loved it!
Tammy
a sweet and wonderful replica of the first time I spent with my one true love. This poem captures every emotion felt.
Lisa
i love your poem, i would just past some of the others but yours just caught my eye. i love the whole gift thing, you're very talented.
teresa
the poem was beautiful and so touching, i think it is how every first time should be.
Dustin
Normal I like poems that ryhum alot but this poem caught my attention because you are specking from you heart grat poem.
Kayla
wow, this is truly a magnificent work of words and heart,, i really enjoyed reading it, i even sent it to my boyfriend, thank you
wendy
i love this poem because it got me thinking of my boyfriend that killed him self and i miss if and he did give me a gift
ravi
YOUR POEM WAS SO TOUCHING AND SO HEARTFELT. IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHED ME TO NO END
STEPHANIE
THAT IS THE MOST WONDERFUL POEM I HAVE EVER HEARD.I LOVE READING EVERY LINE OF IT AGAIN.
Doru
Nice! speechless!
K&T
Absolutely wonderful poem! It captures the heart's stirring of the first time and the promise of a lasting, true love. Thank you for this poem!
Linda
This poem is so beautiful.It is so real to form.Making love with someone for the first time is hard,you have such great talent and we all one time or another have expericed it happing..I am sending this to my guy. we have not made love as yet but will very soon
Andrea
This poem is so pure and innocent. I thought it was absolutely wonderful. Keep up th egood work.
caprice
i really loved this poem if you don't mind i copied it for a class i have in college english.i just wanted everyone to hear your work. i did let everyone know where to get more of your work. keep up the good writing.
Jim
Absolutely beautiful and very true for anyone who truly has found love.
oviston
excellent words!!!
brandy
I had just read our poem. I just wanted to show you that i really liked your poem. I guess why i liked it so much is because thats how i felt the fist time. But i guess everything did work out for me, because now i have a fiance.
holly
i thought this poem was brillant it captued the true spirit of two lovers for the first time
Helen
I feel you. Its beautiful.
Carolyn
What more can I say, I LOVED this POEM. I just sent it to my friend and I am sure he will love it too! It perfectly embodies the feelings of true intimacy and love. Thank you Susan for reading my mind, and writing about it.
Nik
just happened upon this page. Of all the poems, i chose this one above all others. It's perfect. Thanks so much.