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The Wishing Star by Sarah Poet

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Stephanie
Sometimes people may write a poem and not think its good, but Sarah you ROCK! The poem you wrote is behond GOOD its awesome. KEEP WRITING NO MATTER WHAT ANYONE SAYS! No matter who they are. You encouraged me. KEEP IT UP!
laura
girl, that brought me to tears and i think that was so lovely u get a 10 and keep the good work up and please dont stop with the poems keep them coming
lauren
this is a very good poem i love the way she makes it sound i feel so touched
MEYA
I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN VERY WELL. AND IT HELPED ME REMEMBER THAT I ONCE TO HAD A STAR TO SIDH UPON.
Nur
I truly loves this poem; 'The Wishing Star' It is very encouraging and very beautifully written!
Ren
i love this poem. thats all i can say.
Kristin
It's good that you can encourage many people to love theirselves. Keep on writing your amking a teenage world so much more understandable
Alasha
I thought your poem was great. I could so understand how you felt and I know where you're coming from. Keep writing and maybe your poems will be published somewhere and inspire someone else to write.
whispers
this poem means a lot to me because i do the same thing every naight the stars are out give or take some details.
Katie
It's beautiful. It hits the reader smack dab in the heart. perfect.
Jessica
This was just the poem I was looking for. You have a true talent for writing poetry!Keep up the excellent work!
ashu
Hey,this poem is really 'Good'. When i read it. there was some kinda happiness on my face. breathtaking really. very touching!i have added it in one of my fav. collection. This poem is to something to learn from. i will give this poem full 10 points
Julia
i luvv da poem. it's very creative n meanz lotz of things its as if sayin u cud wish fo all those things. this poem ish gREAT!
Rachel
Wow, that was really cute! I have had the worst night crying over many things, and I just wanted something to inspire me. I really wish that i was someone creative and could write things like this! But I can't, so I read things like this and reading helps me get things out! So thanks for the help
GEMMA
VERY INSPIRATIONAL!
Mari
I just wanted to let you know that is a great poem i would give you a 10. We can wish for every thing but there will be always something that we cant have. If we are rich we might not have love. Who knows that might be why God made us who we are
Ari
When I frist read this poem, I thought it was well planned out and creative, but now this poem means something to me. I've learned to accept myself for who I am and not to wish to be someone different, and I also learned to treasure all the things I already have, and not to wish for more.
Leish
Thats a great poem an i agree with all these other comments posted here. its really touching and makes a lot sence once u think about, its deep and has tons of meaning thrown into it. Keep up the good work, i wanna read more poems by such a good poet as u sarah. Your great!
cassy
i like this poem it's very deep
meag
this poem is so cute, i really felt what was being said! i really enjoyed reading this, so i sent it to my friend!
Rory
i really enjoyed reading this poem!nice job sarah!
mandy
That was one of the best poems I have ever read. It has such great thought. I can totally relate to it
KATIE
I THOUGHT YOUR POEM WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL, IT GOT THE POINT OUT THAT MONEY CAN'T BUT HAPPIENESS AND THAT WHAT I'VE ALWAYS THOUGHT
Teila
I love this poem it is so true and thought out.
Kimmy
buitiful poem
Alisa
Very good poem, very true!
Snow
for the last few weeks I have been trying to find out what i wished in life.. and your poem brough the answer.. thx for the poem .
johnny
i being a male, don't cry. thats what i found in this poem, the feeling hit close to home for me. I liked it.
patty
amazing sweet touching poem.
LaTasha
I found The Wishing Star to be a greta poem. It was very touching for me, and it gives a sense of hope, and courage to those who wonder and need to find their inter self. It was a very enjoyably reading.
brian
great poem, more people should know about it
Ewan
This poem is one of the best I've ever read. Good Job, Sarah!
Lauren
This poem is very well written. I am a firm believer in wishing upon stars, and it sometimes feels like they are the only things that understand me. Some of my wishes are superficial and won't matter in the long run, but some go deeper. Thank you for this poem.
Steve
I was amaized by this poem. I write poetry to to get away from the world and this poem really struck me. I loved it
Lauri
That is such a beautiful poem. I love it! It's very true too of what we want to wish for and we what we know we should wish for.
Samantha
This is a great poem! It expresses what i feel inside and outside!
Anastacia
it was beautiffull
Kimberley
congratulations on writing a very well written piece of poerty, which expresses, i'm sure, what every teenager wishes during times of their lives.
Nicole
This poem is one of the best i have ever read. It touched my heart and it made me realize that when people find a penny heads up or see a shooting star that they wish for a pony, or to be rich, or to be famous and it makes u think " well hmm... those things will only last a few years in life" but wishing for a good personality will get u everywhere and i think its a great message.
turtle
i love ur poem..i wish i had a something or someone who would just listen to me too:(
JAY
THIS POEM I THOUGHT WAS VERY WROTE. I FEEL THAT THERE WAS ALOT MORE TO BE UNDERSTOOD. I AM ONLY 14 YEARS OLD AND NOT VERY INTERESTED IN POTERY BUT I THINK THIS WAS VER VER VERY GOOD