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Better Untouched by Chole

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Bea
its a beautiful poem. i can feel it as i am right in it. sometimes something such as crossing the border between friendship and love should be left untouched. love it.
yesenia
hey, great job. this poem really makes me thing about a friend that i just had.
Tasha
THAT WAS SO TRUE. I AM REALLY HAPPY THAT GOD DOESN'T ANSWER ALL PRAYERS
Eliza
This poem is really nice and true too. I really love it.
Deszerrie'ja
This poem hit so close to home, i really really like the poem for the simple fact that i love/like my friend and he knows but its like thing can come from it at this time and the poem really made me think about it more and i true see that things are better left untouched.
Lyla
this is a great poem. I love it very much because i can i love a guy who is my friend, but i can't love him as a boyfriend because he a true friend and hat happen if we broke up. What will happen next???
Natalie
that was a god poem and i hope you get better not saying its not good. Hope you have more to come.
Kuulei
This poem is one i can relate to alot. I once fell for my friend and i prayed to god we could be more then just friends but as time past i realized it would be better if we were just friends. I didn't have a way to put how i fell in words, but now i found a way. through this poem!
Sum1
Very deep poem dat a lot of ppl inc me hav gone thru. Keep up the gud wrk :)
vERRI
THis poem is super
brittany
this poem was absolutly untouched i have read anything moe beautiful it makes me think alot of the old days with all of my friends.
Carmen
This is very nice. So special, and so true.
luis
great poem, keep it up, it saved me from a really bad break up. thank you so much
Gatita
This poem is so deep I love it! it kinda reminds me of a friend that I had
jordan
this poem totally explain how i feel about this guy and i have never read a peom that took everthing i feel about him now and put it in such stright to the point wordings. it's a great poem!
ioannis
it is great!it touched me because just right now i understood that i will never be with the girl i like,and probably is better for me to be like that
Julie
Oh my god! that poem was so sweet! i was all like "awwwww how sweet"i feel exactly same way about this guy i know! i loved the poem! good job Chole!
Tora
Wow! Chole I loved that poem. It totally describes me and my friend relastionship. Better Untouched has inspired me.
TIN2
I loved your poem. Reminds me of this guy Mitch, whose been a close friend of mine. Someday, I'll be able to look at things this way. Right now im still trying to gain some perspective to move on. I'm even thinking of sending your poem to him. thanks!
Angel
Okay just wanted to let you know that I think this is an awesome poem. My best friend and I live in seperate states and yet everytime I see him I feel something that can never be explained. Anywayz I just wanted to say that this is simply an awesome poem and I think that we all need to really pay close attention b/c our one true love may be closer than we think.
kari
its great i hope u still see him and still be friends. even if u cant have him theres a reason and ur poem shows this u have inspired me . thanks
auror
i really like this moment. it has so many meaning, it came from the heart.
Erin
This poem is absolutely beautiful. I've been trying to figure out a way to express my feelings toward a friend and this is perfect. When we moved to different colleges I was unsure of my feelings, but now I have realized that things could never work between us as more than friends and I will always love him more than anything in this world and would do anything for him. But I could never tell him how I felt because I was afraid of losing him, so things just have to stay untouched! Great poem. and thanks for the help!
Me
Hey Chole- i love this poem it explains everything that i am goin through i am soo in love w/this guyz and i can't tell him:(
Jaclyn
This poem is amazing. In high school, I was head over heels with my best friend, and always wished he would see me that way too. After running into him recently, I still love him to death, but am very glad that we stayed just friends. Great poem!
kim
oh my god, i just realized everything that's gone on and finally what it means because of your poem. my best guy friend and i have gone through exactly what this poem describes. i love him more than life itself, and i always will. i guess what they say is probably true."it's better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all.'' great poem.i can't tell you how much it means to me to read it. keep up the great writing!
ash
this poem remined me of me and my friend it is so true on that i wanted so much more but i couldnt have and i always put him down its so great that other people are feeling this way too
Liz
You describes exactly, what I feel right now. Great.
cherielou
ilove this poem.its nice and very fascinating.
Pat
I like this poem very much
Joanna
i love your poem. you hit it right on the nail. it made me cry. there's this guy who is my best friend in the whole world. i love him so much. we're going off to college in the fall and i'm going to miss him so much. sometimes i want more with him.it's so confusing.
Amanda
This poem really expressed emoitons that I have been avoiding for a long time. Thank You for helping me get through such a tuff time with just a few words. Beautiful job Chole.
Toya
i love this poem
Elizabeth
Beautiful and inspirational words!
rana
When I read this poem..I knew what was really want to know. Great Poem
Abby
This was a very touching poem. It says exactly how I feel about a friend of mine. I have feelings for him, but he's better left untouched.
hasz
Well you are right my dear.. some things are better be untouched.. I'm in the same situation as yours.. and we both are still great together. Good job
Jim
Very good!
Lubasha
very insightful and touching!
Monica
your poem was really touching i think it was absoulutely perfect
Yvonne
I like this poem so much.It remides me of the boy I had a crush and I still have a crush on.
Laura
yah, this poem helped me realize truth...and how some things are ,as chole says, better left untouched. even though we cannot or don't want to see the future, not everything is best our way; and for some reason life does turn out even better if it is untouched
tennille
This poem is so great!!!!
april
it was a good moive ok
nicole
very true
MILLIE
BEAUTIFUL I FEEL THAT WAY RIGHT THIS SECOND. IT HELPS TO KNOW I'M NOT ALONE!
Melissa
This is a beautiful poem. I myself write poetry and I love this poem. I am going through a similar ordeal with my best friend. I now live in Kentucky and he lives in Tennessee.
Luv-ing
Very well-written poem..I can feel what you felt then..
J.
GREAT POEM!
jeffrey
one of the best yet, love it more please, more
jim
Dear Chole, You must be amillion miles away, but your poem made me feel very close to you. The subject of the poem is what I`m going through now
Renisha
This poem is really the way people feel and i like it because it decribes many of my friends relationships
Laiim
it a really nice poems.. :)and i have kept it as one of my favourites ..