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Shattered Pieces by Cherenee

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Zoe
This is a lovely poem my husband left me after 14 years a few weeks ago and this poem touched my heart
Kayla
That poem made me Cry, because i really can relate to what you have written, You have such great talent.
fikky
the poem is great and i totally relate to it. its also sad. to fall in love and go through that much pain
Sam
Wow! is all I can say. My girlriend recently broke up with me. I've never read a poem that comes so close to what my heart is screaming inside trying to tell her. i whish she would come back.
Jehan
I am amazed of how close you came to capturing the way love can make you feel when it's leaving. I would like you to know that this poem is wonderful and you did a very good job.
Mike
Very good
Andrea
great job
tina
this poem is unbelievable! i have searched other poems, but this really touched me. it reminds me of my life right now. i give you so much credit. you're awesome!
amanda
hi, i wanted to write to you because i reallly felt your pain i lost my daughter last year! keep writting its a great way to describe how you feel
Dark-Michael
I greatly admire this poem because I've been trying to heal from a similiar situation for a long time now. Love unreturned is the most painful and pride diminishing cause of a shattered heart in my opinion.
lailani
when i read your poem, my eyes began to water at the realization that the one person i love is never gonna love me back. He broke my heart into billions of pieces and simply walked away without uttering a word. He left me cold, alone, and fraile. i feel simply. broken. Your poem truly touched my heart.
Elizabeth
I just wanted to tell the artist of this poem that I know how you feel. I've been through it before and I hope things work out for you and if not then the guy just lost something important and he's to blind to see it.
Eric
This describes exactly how I feel about my ex-fiance. She Shattered my heart into pieces when she cheated on me and then left me and now she wants me back because things didn't work out with her and the other guy and I still love her and that will never change! But I won't take her back until she proves top me that I can trust her again!
Daniell
i feel the same way my boy friend moved away and i love him so much!
Nicole
THIS POEM IS SO GOOD . THIS IS HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW . IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART.
Mini
I can totally empathize with you, which I wish I couldn't and that you didn't have to have gone through it. Picking up the peices of your heart is a hard thing to do and a tough decision to make. You have proven yourself much stronger than I.
Chell
Oh man! You are one smart chick! This poem makes me want to cry. I freakin love it!
Melinda
I absolutely love this poem, it is wonderfully written & from someone who feels the pain of a broken heart. It was written for all the heartache striken people out here. Including me.
jesse
this is a great poem. this has happend to me and to many others so we all know how u feel!much luv
Gill
loved it. I can truely feel where you are coming from it realy touched the heart
Monet
that's what love is all about.
Abby
This is a great poem it fitts what happened to me and my best friend perfectly. Thank you for writing the poem that helped me figure out what happened to me.
Weasel
This is a very beautiful poem. For I know just how she feels. This one really hit home with me. Thanx Cherenee.
Rachael
wow.. its not often a poem can touch my heart the way this poem did. i couldnt fight the tears. well done.
Aimee
this poem did really make me cry and I feel u. I feel the same way about someone I love I just dont know what to do but it will get better I know it will with me and with you
Quedasu
The Beautiful, passionette woman that wrote this poem, is the LOVE of my life. There has come full circle the restlessness of her soul and the mending of her broken heart has been left up to the angel of which she is one .
tata
im in the middle of now where when im reading this poem and it help me to rise again becuase once there is someone who came in mylife and now his gone and i love him still. and this poem help me realize that i need to move on. this poem is great.
Iesha
This poem is so beautiful, it made me picture the situation and feel the emotions.
Ivan
I really enjoyed this poem. it is exactly how I am feeling now.
shelly
This was the best poem have read on this site so far I think i may know how you feel when you wrote this. I am only 14 but i was in love with a boy who was 17 and one day he decided that we should brake it off because of the age difference.
Evan
I fell in love with a girl and she did this to me, I am so broken inside that I can't even feel my body anymore. This poem reflect many things i feel. thanx.
Cherenee
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments on my poem. Some say it's extremely difficult to write poetry. I say Yes it's true. But it's not so difficult when you let the heart write, and the hand just copies down what the heart says. Again thank you.
lorenn
This poem totally descibes wat i'm going through.he has made his choice to move on wif his life.But I'm still stuck with those past memories.I should wake up soon and move on .
Misty
This was one of the best poems I've read in along time and by coincidence I am goin thru something similiar. You have excellent skills and I hope you continue to use them:).. Great poem!
douglas
extremely true and moving
mando
it an awrsome poem
sara
This poem really struck me cause this is what i am feeling right now thank you it means a lot to me
charity
this poem has so much meaning i love it.
Ashleigh
I thought this poem was brillinant, it captures the mood with great precision. I am also in the middle of trying to deal with something similar, so I can definatly relate.
Shannon
this poem touched me. I had to try so hard to hold back the tears. I can relate to this and i don't feel so alone anymore
karmi
great poem... i'm still not over a relationship that ended a few months ago... the poem was inspiring, and it captured my own feelings. :o)
monika
great
Mary
enjoyed your poem...it's true that the one broken-hearted has to mend their own heart, and hopefully with the help of an understanding friend....God.
Christina
This poem was GREAT!
Jesse
great poem!
CHERYL
I CAN RELATE WITH THIS PERSONS THOUGHTS, I FEEL THEIR PAIN.
Ashley
This poem described perfectly what is going on with my boyfriend, well ex. He broke my heart and now I have to pick up the pieces. It was a beautiful poem!
Dennis
fantastic! keep up the great work! And may god bless!
amanda
That was a very moving and very heart filled poem. I really enjoyed it and i hope everythign works out for you.
LASHAE
THIS IS A POEM TO WHICH I CAN RELATE TO. I WISH NO ONE WOULD HAVE TO ENDURE THIS PAIN.