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Sisterly Love by Ashtyn Bevins

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dang girl, that was so beautiful really u get a 20 i hope u the best in life .
This is a terrific poem. I dont know what I would do wihout my sister
Hey i love your poem i just lost my bestfriend last month and this rminds me of this poem good job
This poem is sooo sweet! When I was reading this poem it reminded me of my sister and I. I love it!
I loved your poem!It really made me think of my little sister. She is a baby but I still wouldn't want to lose her. I love my sister very much and I couldn't think of one moment of not having my sister. I bet it was hard for you and I bet it took you a long time to get over losing her. I hope I would never lose my sister. My sister is like all of my heart. This poem really touched my heart. You done a good job and keep doing it.
i thought this was a very deep n passionate poem, n sorry to here about ur sister.
this poem is so good it made me cry
This poem is the most beauiful thing I have ever heard, with just hearing the title made me drop in tears, and when I read it I tought it was me living the poem.
It was a sad poem but it was great
tt is a sweet poem. i cried reading this. so sorry about your sister
I thought the poem was good and a lot of people can relate to that situation including me.
I really like your poem, I love how it is a bout your sister that die at year 10. That is so sad. I'm sorry about that. I'm just glad that i have a sister that will always be there 4 me!
you done very well on your poem. I was very touched.
that is a very excellent poem. it is kind of sad though. keep writing,your good!
Really touching poem. I really can relate to this poem because i lost my twin when i was little because my mother could only support one baby in her stomach and when we were born they told my mother my twin (who was a boy) was dead and even though me and my brother never grew up together he still grows inside of me.
this poem was a great poem. it was very touching and i can relate to it very much, granted the one i lost wasnt really my sister but close enough to it and readyign this poem showed me how much of an impacted her death has had on me
Great poem I have a little sister and wouldnt like lossing her shes the little joy of my life she keeps me happy all day long and I love those moments when she looks up to me. She will always be with u keep that on mind.
thats a great poem, my friends sister died in a car crash last thanksgiving-- she was 16 and my friend is 13. i know it is hard for her. im sure it is hard for u.
Your poem is great. It startled me, you see, because I lost my little sister to brain cancer too. She was 8, I was 13. Your poem says the words that I can't say all the time.
i really enjoyed reading the poem. It gave me a lot to think about when I think about my sister. My sister means alot to me and I live her with all my heart. Her 17th birthday is approaching and I wanted to do something special. I decided to make her a home made card and inside there would be a bunch of poems and qoutes. I know she likes poetry so it would be a good gift. i dedcided to use this poem giving full credit to the author(of course).
i liked ur poem it was nice.
Wow!I really loved that poem. my sister also has cancer, she is 19 now. so yes. i understand totally what you are saying!
You poem is very good and sad, I love my sister every much and if i would lose her, i do not know if i would even be able to write poetry. Keep Stong!
Oh my God! I don`tknow what to say your poem is so special to me. I have three sisters and they mean so much to me. I am very sorry you lost your sister I have no Idea what I would do without them! You are GREAT
This is a really sad ,touching,and great poem please dont stop writting.
I know how you must feel..when i was 2 years old, my mom was pregant with my brother and sister. but they died inside her. so i live feeling a guilt because i think that me and my brother(we're twins, too) were too much for her to handle. but i'm sure you sister is with mine. i'm sure they're ok. they're watching over us each day.
oh my god! your poem had me in tears, im very close to my big sister, and if i lost her i don't think i could go on-well done for being so strong-im sure she'd be so proud of you.
very touching.keep writing.
i think that is poem is very good
This poem really touched my heart! I have two sisters and this poem really tells the truth! This poem was hard for me to read, but I'm glad I read it! Like, I said this poem touched my heart! Thank you Jessi
An excellent poem A poem that touches people and leaves a lasting impression.
I love this pome it made me think more about my sister. that not only she is young but she will follow me so I need to not put her down, pull her up when she falls down. Because I know one day I will need her to do the same for me. this pome help me best friend because her sister might die soon now she know that she must give her all the love hse can I and she would like to thank you for your help that your pome did for us. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
i feel very sorry for you but it is life where anything can happen. i appreciate your love for sister which you have expressed through your sentimental poem.please dont stop writting beautiful poems.
this is so beauitful i lost my baby sister i was 4 and she was 2 ill never forget it and i try so hard to let my kids no to love each other is so very inportant. you and your sister will live on forever just therw your love for each other god bless you
I think that is so sweet and sad I can't say I know how you feel but I feel what you are going through!