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My Star by Bri Biggs

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Teisha
This poems is very touching and rememinds me of all the deaths that have been here recently by where i live. It's been so bad 4 people have died in car accidents i the last 5 monthes. And one girl was in a coma for almost 2 monthes but made it. This was a very good poems and touching me in many ways.
Melinda
I thought your poem was really good. I just had a friend pass away this past Saturday when he was on his way to work he fell asleep and hit a tree before anyone found him he bleed to death on the inside. So keep up the good work on your poetry.
shirly
well, my ex-boyfriend died in a car accident six days ago. i loved him very much. well, he went driving with his friend and they both past away. this poem really hits the spot that he left in me.
Tina
I really like your poem it was just the kind of poem i was looking for. I think you have a talent and you should write more. You rock!
anna
i know how you feel because on july 18th 2004 will be a year for my friend angelina(angie) she was only sixteen years old when she died she died in a car accident. she was the only friend i ever lost and i didnt know how to handle it. i cried for about a week in a half but the thing that got me through it was my friends and family. till this day i just look back on the great wonderful tmes that we did have and sometimes i cry cause shes not here to do anything with me any more. s oon this sunday (7/18/04)i will be visiting the pole that her cousins car striked a year ago. but ill stay strong cause ill just remeber the good times we had together adn all are freinds will be there to help each other out. so when you get sad just think about all the good times yous two had together.
ninna
i really loved that poem as it reminds me of well it actully reminds me of 2 things 1st my uncle was killed because of this drunk guy hit him and it kills me to know that my 4 year old cousin will have to grow up with no dad because of some stupid drunk driver. 2nd one night i was walking home with 2 of my buddies KALA and JAMES i herd a car come around the corner and just take james and kala with it. my best friend for 9 years died kala and james another close friend is brain dead. the thought that goes through my head every night "that could have been me thank you jesus"
Aimee
I really enjoyed reading this poem. One of my really good friends Bernadette recently died in a car accident and your poem has helped me more and more each day. she is now my little star in heaven. RIP B
Priscilla
i really like this poem.
maymay
I really liked this poem. I did not lose a friend, but i have recently lost a grandmother, and i am losing a grandfather. Thispoem just put me in tears.
Catherine
it was a wonderful peom and it brought a tear to my eye. i am so sorry for your loss.
lexi
I am sorry for ur loss and when i read that it brought tears to my eyes. You are a brave person in putting your feelings on this web and i loved it. it touched my heart as it did to everyone else's.
Eilysha
I really liked your poem. Yesterday one of my classmates from school died in a car accident, I had a couple classes with him and we sometimes talked. Since I lost my dad I have been having trouble coping with death and I just thought that this related to my friend so I just wanted to say I like your poem
monique
this is a very sad poem! I lost 2 of my best friends about 2 years ago and i know how you feel! Keep your head up and keep praying. You will meet again someday!
Evania
that is such a sad poem remids me of me and my best frineds and hpw much i cried
Pukei
OH MY GOD! IT'S SAD! I'M CRYING! I'M SO SORRY ABOUT YOUR FRIEND I CANT NEVER IMAGINE IF IN A FUTURE MY FRIENDS. GONE. I VALUE MORE THE LOVE OF MY FRIENDS. THANKS
shelley
i thought that this poem was very touching it reminded me of a time when a really good friend of mine was in a car accident but in my case he live but this poem meant a lot to me.
heaven-lee
oh my gosh this poem is so sad. this girl has so much talent
Kristin
This is very good. 2 friends of mine just died in a car crash on Tuesday, and this poem hit every single part of me. It made me cry. you did a very good job, good rhyme scheme
Sonya
Hey i really like that poem i think that drinking and driving should be stopped some how and have higher tech stuff to save lives so this poem was great i give it like a 12 out of 10
Heather
i seriously wanted to cry when i read your poem. you said it better then i could ever have done. as i just recently lost a friend that was killed by a train. so i know what you r going through. sorry about your loss, just be string for the ones that you have lost.
Ashley
Wow. It's so hard to loose someone u love. i bet you think about it a lot. i dont know how i could handle or go on with life if i lost my best friend. Your poem makes me think. your a great writter and im sorry about your friend. god bless you.
Candice
I really liked this poem because here recently two of my really close friends got killed by a drunk driver. They took Matt off of life support and Eric died instantly
Nicole
I had a close friend that died in a car accident a year ago in November. Everything you said in that poem reminded me that there are other people out there going through the same thing. I am sorry about your friend.
Monica
I had a friend die before thanksgiving. He was on his way to see us and he died and his sister lived. Another friend died 7 months later in a accident too. This poem tells alot.
goodgril_420_88
we really liked your poem. we lost a really close friend in November of 2002. She was in a car wreck about a block from our house. we are very sorry for your loss and we love your poem. we hope you are dealing with it and we hope we can learn to deal with Alyse's death.
Lizette
hey i love the poem it relates to me so much my friend died in a car accident and i just took it sooo hard so thanx for relating
jazmine
ur poem touched me for i lost a friend a couple months ago i wanted to let u kno that i kno what ur going threw and to always keep ur head up
megan
iliked your poem its really sad,im sorry about your friend i cant imagine how bad you felt God Bless
Eveli
This poem made the lost of my friend,who died three days ago, easier. I could not think she's not alive somewhere.
Falon
I have to say that this poem is really touching, as just the other day my friends were in a car accident and one of them died, but thankfully the others are ok. Death is a sad thing in our lives but we have to cope with it, and you show this in your poem, " My Star"
Bryanna
I love your poem! I don't know how you feel but I can just imagine. My condolenses go out to you!
Brandie
I am sorry about your friend.I don't know how i would react if my best firnd died. God Bless
Brittney
This poems is a really good poem i like it because it remines me of my cousin who died in a car. not to long ago she had to live her kids and everything and their father had already died not long before that he had killed him self in arizona with a gun after killing his wife that why this poem make my family members all cry when we read it life sometimes isn't fair but you have to deal with it.
Lyndon
reading your poem made tears come to my eyes it reminds me of my friend Feather i love your poem and i know how it feels
shanta
This poem was great.I am sorry about your friend death.
Kelly
i love your poem. one of my really good friends just got hit by a truck about 2 weeks ago.she's still in a coma and her chance of recovering is really small
Annelie
This is one of the best poems I've ever seen! It is so sad and beautiful. I cried so much when I read it! It's great!
heather
that was an amazing poem.and i feel your pain because i lost my best friend on august 3, 2001, he was my best friend for 14 years.and i miss him so much! thank you for sharing you peom My Star
Shay
Wow! This poem really touched me! I too, lost a friend to an accident. I know what you're feeling. May your "Star" always live inside you!
Martha
I'm Truly Sorry About Your Friend.. I Understand The Pain You Went Through. But Now She Is Set Free!
crystal
The poem was sad but really good. Because back in January my best friend died in a car wrenck. I was with her but she didn't have a chance to go to the hospital she died right away.
angela
I really like this peom. I means alot to me because on easter 2001 my best friens Samuel died in a car wreak so I feel your pain and I'm sorry for yu loss.
Lucia
It was a great poem, it described the way my best friend died when we were going into the fourth grade. Its a wonderful poem!
aleen
this was such a good poems and it is sooo true i like it sooo much keep on writing the poems
KATERINA
great poem.i cried the hell out of me.i can't imagine the pain you ve been through
MINETTE
THANX SO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZING POEM. IT DREW MY ATTENTION BECAUSE ONLY TWO MONTHS AGO A REALLY GOOD FRIEND OF MINE ALSO DIED IN A CAR ACCIDENT AND I REALLY MISS HIM.
ness
I have never criend so hard after reading a poem!
sheree
i really like this poem and im sorry for your loss im one of the lucky people that has never had to exsperiance a loss and i hope i never will good luck and keep writing :) this poems very touching!!!
Chanelle
THis is a really good poem. One of my friend just die 5 days before thankgiving.
danielle
I though this was a great poem nothing like this has ever happend to me but i don't know what i'd do if it ever did and i praise you for being so stong.
yoanna
I LOVE THIS POEM IM REALLY SORRY ABOUT YOUR FRIEND
rae
thank you
moniqua
you poem was very touching.you would of never thought that it was going to be her friend that dies.you know how to touch the readers imagination.
May
All I can say is Wow! It was great and I can relate to it. This poem put into words how I feel and still feel about losing one of my dearest friends.
Natalie
it's awesome my best friend died last night and the poem really got to me..i love it !
lindsey
i can so relate to your poem b/c recently my like really good friend got into a car accident and was killed i miss her soooo much!! thank you for writing this it reminds people that there love ones hanvent left them! *theres not a day that goes my i dont think of my fiend but i know shes in heaven watching over me & that what gets me through everyday!! THANK YOU@!!!
ryan
this poem is awesome she really is a professional
Shinomizu
I had once decided not to love anyone, just to avoid this sort of pain. But now I regret the days I've lost and thrown away with merciless solitude. What a true friend can give to you, is something no one can describe if never felt it. You simply learn how to love, openly and just for love's sake. That's why friends should never die - but the poet is right: our love keep the ones we love forever living. Amazing poem, I love it :-)
Roxann
ITS A GREAT POEM!!
Rachel
This poem is sooo sad! Every time i come to this site i always end up reading this poem.
Shanna
Awsome Poem!
Tiffany
Great poem I am so sorry for your lose.I have been there so many times because my best friend got hit with a car so if you need any help write back
Allie
I lost a friend last summer and I think that you are a very good writer
Desiree
This is a great poem and I am sorry about what happened to your friend I had a close friend that died two years ago and I know it is a hard thing to go through.
Micheal
I felt the pain that you had when you wrote this poem and I knew when I heard It I knew it was me I felt the sam way when my gram died Thank you.
marissa
great poem
megan
that was a sad but a really really great poem
Elizabeth
loved it!
Brittani
I love this poem. MY STAR! Thanks for understanding people and knowing how to tell people about there star!
Becki
This poem was amazing. Your a fantastic poet. keep up the good work and let me know when you have more poetry on here I'd like to read more by you!!
winter
i understand what you are going through because my aunt died from a drunk driver and i miss her to.
Natalie
I picked this poem becuz it touched me.Four years ago my best freind Derek died. He was in a horrible car accident.This poem reminded me of what happened becuz he was my shinning star and he will always be. He was talking at a young age of 9 but look on the bright side he went earlier but got to stay w/ our heavinly father longer!