Send some poems to a friend - the love thought that counts!

Poems for the People - Poems by the People

Silence, Emptiness, And Confusion by Bek

All of the poems at Passions include a Vote feature, and each of those who vote for their favorite poems are encouraged to leave comments. The number of comments does NOT necessarily reflect the number of votes (many people do not comment), but they do give an indication of how other visitors to our site have responded.

Return to Poem

Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Jessica

Wow that touched my heart and i could really relate to the poem even though it was really really really short but yah i really enjoyed reading it and i can she it with someone else now!(Keep up the good work!)

casandra

nothing bad but brillants lol

Josie

That was beautiful. I respect your writing,even though it was just one poem. you're a deep writer. In away, I feel like some void little girl, with a pain lingering in the back of my head. I just think you're poetry is great. Keep on writing because it would be a waste of talent if you stopped.

Samantha

i love your poem it touched me inside keep on doing poems and dont stop

lizzi

wow this was amazing. brought tears to my eyes

Liza

This poem reminded me of my myself a lot. Depression and suicide is really hard to overcome, and the last line of this poem kind of stuck me. I can live alone if I want, but will people let me?

Sarah

Relatable, very. The raw truth, undeniably. My feelings go out to the author and anyone knows how this is.

Lindsay

The poem touched me in a way I've never been touched before. It's not just "like" me, it IS me. Thank you so much for writing it. It may very well help me on my journey of self-discovery and depression recovery.

berenice

bek,your poem touched my very battered soul,i can relate to it i have felt this way since i was a very young child,i am now a woman of 43,my hurt child is still within me,thank you,i no longer feel alone

melissa

wow! itz so deep i can relate to it.

sarah

i loved this poem, its like it was about me. it was great!

Brittanie

I've never been good with writing my feelings into a poem form, so reading this touched me because it did just that. Bek's poem helps me to realize what I'm going through and how I can fix it.

Absinthe

perfect, fragile and perfect, just like those of us who have truly experienced this kind of pain. i cannot wait to hear more of your work. im very impressed.

Tanya

Your poem has truly and deeply touched me. I could feel the tears drip onto my keyboard and your poem is exactly how i feel, but sometimes it's hard to get the right words out.

whitney

Good job. I really like your poem it tells what I'm going through right now. Keep up the good work =)

kim

omg~! this poem kicks omg i love it dude great job omg i love ur poem~!

Anon

This poem is one of the absolutely greatest ones I've heard in a long time. Your words have a really deep meaning for me and I thank you for it.

trish

This poem has reached out to me. Bek put my emotions and put them into words beyond any of my wildest imaginations. The way the complex words are arranged are simply beautiful although its talking about the sadness in a young womens heart. Even though I am quite young, i still felt the sadness from this poem to me when i first read this poem. Absolutly love it!

Oliver

I found this poem to be exactly what I was thinking. It made me realise that other people know and feel the same as me. Thanx alot. Keep up the great work.

Rach

Keep up the good work Bek, that poem is amazing, you're a talented writter :)

Katie

I love your poem it is a lot like my life and how i feel thanx for puting it in words

Sarah

Wow.. that was very deep. I know exactly where you are coming from.

Jennalee

this poem describe exactly what I feel at the moment. depression can really downsize someone. Like what someone can do when they feel a certain way, nothing really. I'm depress every single day, and there's not a thing that would makes me happy, unless they came through.

Thomas

WOW! fINALLY A WORTHY POEM. I LOVED IT KEEP IT UP

Allison

This peom is so touching...it puts my feelings into words.

ashley

not much to say ....im a depressing person..i am drawn to depressing poetry. I loved this one ,the only one i really liked.

Kylie

i luv this poem..it kind of says how i'm feeling right now

neni

I am very interested in poetry for about a year. And this one may add to my poet-collection and I find it so 'what a great and convenient' to the problem I had rightnow, especially the tittle.

Linda

I'm so touched by this poem.I have been through depression, but without the help of my friends I would be dead right now! I hope this peom will reach out to others like it did to me. Thank you!

All Visitor Comments on this poem have been posted by people who wanted to let the author know the poem touched their hearts. If you would like to leave a comment of your own, please click the Vote button in the Response Panel beneath the poem.

Return to Poem

Poems for the People - Poems by the People