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No More Tears To Cry by Pamela

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tiara
I love this poem because not too long ago I lost 4 of the most greatest guys in the world! I loved one and this jus helps me and many people who lost someone special to them get through the pain. How this poem says that she dies in a car accident. well my 4 great friends, Josh, Joey, Ian, and Dustin died the same way and I acted the same way!
Brittney
from a poem like this i can relate i have written poems like this before about a friend named colt. i think this was a beautiful poem and if true am sorry for your loss.
Dana
your poem was really good i liked it
Daniela
This poem really touched me because someone i loved deeply was killed in a car accident 1 year ago next week. This person was only 25, 10 days before the accident.
Ashely
I loved this poem,although it was sad,it was soo true. This has inspired me not to sneak out of the house or do things my momma would get mad at me bout,cuz i wouldn't want my momma to get a knock at the door by someone tellin her i'm dead and she think i'm up in my room. I wouldn't want to do that to her. I am so very sorry to what happened to your friend!I hope your poem inspire others as it did me.
yatavia
i lost my mother a year ago and it was raining when th casket was lowered into the ground i was numb and couldnt feel a thimg i could barley stand, now and then i feel her presence and wish that she was here this poem helped me realize that people feel the same way that i do and i would love to chat with you sometimes about death and how long it take to realize it sincerely yatavia
ana
that was really good pome long but very good
Jerrica
the truth in it Life is fragile
Randi
This poem is so moving it has a lot of emotion. I lost a friend a year ago and I was filled with so much emotion and so many questions. I really wish I could bring her back and I can't. You have to have faith to get through a tuff time. You have to know in your heart that they are in a better place smiling and watching down you. This poem is really moving and touched me a lot.
Peggy
If only all teen could not only read this but understand that the "it only happend to others" is exately what others are saying too.
Chelsey
So much of this poem is related to my situation. I just lost one of my best friends when we were in a car accident. There are so many similarities in the poem. She was only fifteen,and the accident happened just after 2:00 am, and when I saw her in the casket it didn't look like here. Not all of this poem was the same but the parts that were really touched me.
Elizabeth
This poem is very touching it really had me crying. Please keep up the good work
Jillian
This poem i used for a school project and brung my teacher and several other students to tears. This brung corage to me after i lost my best friend. it is great to see writers produce a quality of writing like this! This has brung hope to not only me but my friends who broke down into tears when i read this poem to them! Thanks alot! Jillian
cherrie
Excellent poam, I never lost a 15 year old but I have lost a child and your poam is very touching. Thank you
cj
oh my god that is such a good poem
DJ
superb! what a nice poem. it really touched my heart.
Melissa
I really liked this poem something very close to that happend to me about a year ago and it made me think that there are other people that have went through what i did and for the people that havent been through it, i hope it will make you think twice before doing anything like that. life is precious you only get one so dont be stupid, stay safe.
Teresa
This touched me so. I have went through what you have only worse it was my 25 yr old brother killed in a car accident. His friend and him were driving home from a party Super Bowl Night Jan. 28,2001. HIs friend was drving to fast and they slammed into a light pole, my brother died instantly though his friend walked away with just a scratch. He tried to put my brother in the driver seat like he was driving. Till this day Im still not over it, and through time i will understand why he was taken so soon and he was planning to visit me that spring. So I hope you get through it as well as i do.
Randi
This poem is really good! I lost a friend too. She was sixteen! Yes you do have to have Faith to help you get through and relize that she is in a better place looking down on you!
Tiffany
I love it got to me
Renae
Your poem was really touching. Losing someone in your life that is so close to you like she is so hard to get through. Sometimes the pain that is put upon you is too hard to handle and for some reason sometimes there really are no more tears to cry. Thanks, Renae :-)
Ciara
when i read your poem, i almost began to cry, i loved it and please remember that you have to move on!
Cydney
that touched me to tears~
Roger
Right now, the tears come easily. You let us share your loss, but kept the pain to yourself. Thanks for sharing.
terri
THE POEM MADE ME THINK OF MY MOM. WE LOST HER TO CANCER ON 4/28/03. THE POEM IS AWESOME AND VERY TOUCHING.
KIah
Pamela your poem made me just go WOW my brother was killed in a car accident nov 2004 and police came to my door and my parent opened it and they told us the news we reacted the same way and till this day my world still hasnt stoped spinning. and it will never be the same
Kaci
This poem relly made me think fo the friends ive lost due to driving accidents. one being a very close friend died in the winter of 2000-2001 becuz her brother, had be speeding, and he went around a sharp corner while the road was snow covered and stil snowing. outta 5 ppl int he car only 1 lived. ill never forget her.
anonymous
the way you wrote your poem made me realize that its true what you said one day there will be no more tears to cry i lost my friend to lucimia not long ago and i never thought i my tears would stop coming down
sharee
very good helped a lot
jenny
This poem has touched me, because every year since my seventh grade year a kid has passed away from a different class. i would like to extend my sympathy to the author. i know it's hard, i'm sorry for your loss.
Jasmine
This poem was very touching and well spoken I have never gone through this myself but for the few moments it took to read I felt as if it was me going through it! Always embrace those who you love and who love you.
melissa
i thought that your poem was excellent it touched me as i lost one of my best friends in a car accident last yr and she had only turned 18 and she had so much planed for her life and it was taking away from her.
Kelly
Hello. How are you? I am very sorry about your friend. So many of my friends have been dying. Its like every day and my grandfather recently passed away. Death is so Hard. I hope you are alright. God Bless you. GoodBye
rita
i was truly touched by that poem. it made me feel soo sorry for her and her loved ones. it was an extrodinary poem.
Amanda
omg! the first time iI read this poem it was the most devistating poem ever:'( omg just last month (feburary) my bestfriends shannon's dads bestfreind dies. insept he over dosed on drugs and died he drove us everywere dances and everything. His name was Scott. he was the most nicest person ever wen he was in the ambulance on the way tOo the hospitol he died iI couldnt beleave it was true my bestfriend was devastated
samina
this is wot exactly happend 2 my boyfriend 2am knock on the door wot do his family hear ur son died in a car accident it was den identified and it was him! i found out the following morning i was heart broken i didnt beleve it i fort dey were playing a stupid joke on me but wen i saw him lying der i had nutin left 2 say apart from burst in 2 tears!
mayra
very sad i like it alot
Allison
I really like your poem. This year I am a Senior in high school and it is my sad duty to write a poem for the yearbook to remember those we have lost. In the last three years of high school, my graduating class has suffered through at least eight deaths of fellow class members and past high school friends. reading your poem has helped give me ideas on what to write. Thank you
Randy
excellent. very nice. i like how you set it up and how it flows. well done
allie
this is a great, fantastic poem it was really hard to read be cause my eyes were full of tears. I called up my friend and read it to her, she wasnt really payin attention tho. o well. you did a great job writing this 1 good job and much luv, allie
Jeanette
such a beautiful poem
Lorraine
I thought you put alot of meaning into your poem.
Rute
This is a very beutiful poem. and yet so sad. it made me want to cry.
jewelz
your poem really moved me and it reminded me of when my best friend nick died in a horrable accident last may of 2004 i know what you are going through and i am really sorry your poem made me cry. i love it your are gifted keep writing love always your friend JeWeLz
Angel
At first I didn't even want to vote for this poem because it was so sad. Even though this never has happened to me it makes me realize that life can be taken from us right under our noses. I'm sorry for the loss of your friens and I hope you'll never forget what great times yah'll had.
shirly
it's so sad. my friend died in a car crash six days ago. i miss him a lot!
Katie
This poem really touched me. I cant stop crying now, you've set me off now!
Chichirri
Your poem was very moving, but the tears will forever come, in one fourm or another. For I also, have lost someone dear to me, just a year ago.
Danielle
oh my god i loved this poem that much i nearly cried,this poem was so good and it really read out the details of how life is and how it can be taken away just like that.
Chandler
This poem made me cry. it reminded me of a dear friend of mine, Deebs, he was 15 and he died last year in a car crash. his sister is one of my best friends and i will just never forget him
Jenn
This has really deaply touched my heart! I cried half way through the poem! I lost a friend in March 2nd in a car crash. I have known him since I was a baby. This poem made me realize that you should never think that it was your fault for something that happened like God was balming you. That same year that my friend died I lost two other people and I felt like it was a punishment! Thank you for helping me realize that it wasnt my fault! this really touched my heart on so many ways!
ricki
this peom really touched me. i was actually looking for a peom about my grandpa but i came across this one and it was to much like mine. My freind died when she was 12 she went out at night and crossed the streets and got hit by a car. She didnt get to live her life. It was very hard for me, losing my good freind. All she need was desipline and a lesson. Maybe shed still be alive if she had.
aisha
i don't know how to say this but this poems was soo sad i almost cryed i. i. i can't say it
Gloria
I sorry about your friend. This poem helps you some what understand what can to anyone at anytime. All we have is faith that we will fullfill our plan that we made about our own lives.
Danita
This poem really touched me cause my friend was 14yr. old when she died on a 4 wheeler on the fourth of july only 8 days after her birthday. I remember the call at 2:00 in the morning from my best-friend telling me that that Ashleigh had died from a horrible 4 wheeler accident. I couldn't do anything, but lay there in bed and pray that they weren't talking about my best friend ashleigh. That mabey for some odd reason they had the wrong number. but i was wrong they had the right number and they were talking about my friend ashleigh. I was Five months pregant and i had talked to her only 3 days befor this horrible day. She told me she couldn't wait to see my baby girl she swore that it would be the most beautiful baby.
BOBBY
THIS POEM TOUCHED ME. I LOST THE LOVE OF MY LIFE 18 MONTHS AGO. SHE WAS 18. YOUR PEOM DESCRIBES THE PAIN I GO THROUGH EVERYDAY. THANK YOU FOR POEMS LIKE THIS HELP THE EVERYDAY STRUGGLES OF LOSING A LOVED ONE.
ashley
That was a really great poem! good job!
Alisa
I really liked your poem because my best friend was hit by a car when he was only 16. The driver was drunk and he never got to go on with his life. Our poem really touched my heart and it made me think that im not the only one that lost a close friend.
jackie
this poem touched me very close to my heart as my beautiful 13 year old daughter was killed as she crossed over the highway on march 13th 2004. i would like to say thankyou for your beautiful poem.
Karlton
I really think is the most saddest poems i've ever read. Tears run down my cheek because of this. I have lost a special friend name Jamie. Jamie was a special female friend to me. I think about it everyday. It haunts me to death. Please take a moment of silence to remember my friend Jamie.
tasha
this poem /story touched me sooo much . am every so sorry about the loss or ur m8 xxx
tawanna
that was a very touching poem just stay strong and remember she is watching you. just make her proud in everything you do.
Crystal
This was the sadest poem I have ever heard I hope the friend finds peace
yolanda
Hi my aunt died from a overdose 5 months ago and it hurts I still fill like she is still hear I never new that drugs would really thak someones life away but only god knows
Lamanda
This poem really touched me, I just lost someone that was so close to me he was like a brother, and this poem brought back the memory. When I think about that January night around 11 when we found him. I just lay in my bed at night and wonder why him, my grades started dropping and I can't sleep at night anymore. I would lay in my bed and cry and ask why him. I even wrote a poem but I don't think I'm gonna submit it yet because it's something memorable from me to him. I just want to thank you for being so strong and being able to publish this because, I know exactly how you feel.
Heather
i loved your peom cause today a freind of mine died and he was a good freind and your peom touched me
ashley
this poem made me cry when i read it so i had to say something about it. I think it really describes what is going through your head and the emotions you feel. also I think everyone know what it feel like when you've run out of tears.
Ashley
I loved your poem! It brought me to tears to read it. I couldn't imagine losing someone that young that was so close to me. I did loose my grandma a few months ago but that was cancer related. I would have to give you a 15 out of 10.
Chelsea
It was a very good and life teaching poem and it really touched me.
shruti
this is a really touching poem. i had tears in my eyes while i read it. i have never suffered any loss but this poem made me feel the loss of a friend as if it were my own.
griselda
this poem means alot to me right now. i just lost a friend a couple of days ago. and its like a burden in my heart. it was so unexpected and we didnt even get to say goodbye or how much we really love her. i dont think anyone should wait for smth like this to happen to tell someone how u feel. peolpe, plz, dont take life for granted. u never know when ur life will end. live ur life to the fullest. and know she did. even though her life was cut short, she was only 16. we will miss you very much ksenia.
Kate
I like this one the most cause it reminded me of my ex boy friend who died from a drunk drive,when he was goin to the skating rink to play his new stick for hockey he jut goty for christmas but he never had that chance. I miss him soo much i still cant believe hes still gone soo thats y i like this one.
jessica
i really liked this poem because i had a friend or more like a sister pass away not even a year ago but it is so hard to think about her because her birthday is coming up in April and she isnt here to celibrate her 16th with us and it just isnt fare
alyssa
Hey, your poem was amazing!I am sorry about the incident. Sometimes I want too take my life. Then I read something like this and it makes me realize. Realize how many people wanted to live. But they lost their lfe over an accident. It could happen to me. But why do it on a planned procedure? But you know your right it is a lesson. In a way its a lesson to me too. Thank you!peace and love! Dont ever shatter your faith,and i'll try not to shatter mine.
hailey
this poem was very sad i liked it alot if u wrote this u r very tallented but what do i no i am only 14
jessica
to who that had wrote the pome it was so pretty and stright from the heart i would give you 10 stars for that pome i am very sorry about your lose of your friend i understand what you are felling i am going trow the same my aunt was murder and it is very hard to dil with . keep up the great work i have never heard one that good thanks jessica
Vicky
the poem is really nice and it really touched me.
Stephanie
This poem really touched me. It is right in so many ways. It made me want to cry for the people that were there and touched my heart because a friend could be so right about death of another.
Donna
Very well done it makes you feel like you are going through it too. Makes you appreciate life to the fullest yet saddens the heart. Excellent choice of words and well put
Nikki
when i read this poem I had tears come to my eyes it really is touching. Im only 16 and it makes me realize what curves God really throws us. From what i read here I hope i can find more of your poems.
jess
this story was so truth full and it was scery that she new how to right it down as it feels inside and how to make it feel like i am not the only one out ther to have lost a close mate and need to no why and have un unsered sums in my head and i want to say thanks
Heidi
well all I can say is I cried,and I felt all of your thoughts and pain. I was there with you that day in january. (thats how much feeling was in that poem)
daniel
i sliped within your mind for a moment, and your pain awakened me. your finger print is burned within my mind forever. thanks
Kirstin
I rele liked this poem bcuz it relates to me. I have had many friends die and i dunno why i hated god for takein that away from me. But ur poem made me understand it's not his fault
Alyssa
I like this poem so much because I lost a vey dear friend on October 6,2003. His birthday was the day after mine and this poem kind of reminds me of him because he was also very young (22) and I thought "This can't be happening"'he's too young to go just yet. " But it doesn't matter how old you are. When god is ready to take you he will.
Jessica
The poem was very moving and it shows you that you should never take the life of a loved one forgranted.
Lynnette
Amazing is all I have to say. In these past 2 years, I've lost 3 friends to car crashes. I just wanted to let u know that im sooo sorry for your loss. I wish u never had to know that pain, and your poem is beautiful.
sara
Hi, i enjoy this poeam alot, i have had 3 of my friends die this yr alone, and 2 of them were from car wrecks, one was in the rain, and the other was by a train on the way to school, i will never forget my friends, and it is true it takes you a while to figure out why in the world they take your friends, noone was his enemy he was the nicest guy alive, but god wanted him there, so you have to live your life to the fullest and always care, cuz you never know who will die. , but anyways this poem is very touching
Pamela
I am the author of "No More Tears to Cry" and i just wanted to thank you all so much for responding to my poem. it is so encouraging to know that there are people out there who appreciate and take the time to respond so something that means so much to me as a writer. i just wanted to let you all know that i do take the time to read your comments and i appreciate every single one of them. thank you so much for taking the time to respond. Sincerely, Pamela
Kara
I love this poem. It reminds me of my friend that died. Its a really great poem. it was worth the time to read
Shyane
Two words. beautiful and strong.
Lauralee
that poem was deep. you can write what you feel. it's almost like you can feel what she was thinking.
Janette
Reading this poem so many years after that very cold day. coldest we'd had here in a long time. brought all the memories back. Honey, I'm so proud of the gift God gave you to write down your feelings & express others at the same time. Keep on doing it; at times of sadness or times of joy. like the birth of a special baby, hint! I love you, darlin'. xoxo Mom
someone
this is a great poem and seems so real to me. This year (2003) my friend was killed in a car accident she was driving she shouldn't have been but she was she was only fifteen the times in your poems are exact time that my friend was killed. I found out the next night while gettin a lift hme from a party. As long as you remember how your friend lived and not how they died
Florence
Your poem, Is more than a poem it is you nothing more nothing less i doubt u will read this but you touched me u proberably hear this a lot. thank u for the inspiration and thanku for feeling able enough to share your emotions the way u have best of luck wit ur writtin
Cynthia
Wow! This poem brought tears to my eyes. reminded me bout my friend who died. She was not 15 and not killed in a car accident but she was 17 and committed suicide. different yet the same feelings. Good JOb.
rene
this poem is very sad but it is also very good i could of never mede it up all by my self thought u r just saying the story again that had happend in your life i am really sorry for your friend hope u r well adn very good
ninu
it was a very beautiful poem and i think and feel that by reading after they should understand taht live each moment to the fullest u never know what the next moment has in store for u
keenan
that was a very sad poem it sounds jus like how my bes friend died except it was a clear day i didnt even show up at her funeral cause i didnt want to c here lying there i wanted to remember her walking around and how she was alive it is jus to hard for me to c someone lying there not moving.
Anna
I really like your poem. It reminds me of my friend who died at 16.
elisha
this was more than just a great poem. you were obviously a great friend as well. i am sorry that you lost her and that you have to be without her. on of my best friends was killed in an automobile accident too, they never found the man that hit him, i always thought that he never got his justice. He recieved his justice the moment he entered heaven
Tami
This poem actually made me cry. when reading it, you get caught up in the emotion. even though the people it's about may be strangers, the feelings it causes are indescribable.
ZAQUINA
I LOST 3 OF MY FRIENDS IN ONE DAY IN A CAR ACCIDENT I LOVED THEM AND MISS THEM SO MUCH. REST IN PEACE RASHAD,CANDICE,DORTEZ MARCH 3,2003
Margaret
I absolutely loved ur poem. it was excellent! You know it's very hard to go through that. May god bless you.
Karen
Pamela, -i know how u feel. When i read ur poem, i began to cry b/c i lost my friend last year, she was only 15 too. Yesterday was her 16th b/day. And ur right, at the end, "No more Tears to Cry". i miss her still. But ur poem touched me. Thank u.
jen
I thought this poem was great! I had a tear running down my face. It was a great poem!
Holly
I started to cry when i read this poem. last sep. 21 (2001) my sis was killed in a car accident that i walked away from. i know how hard things can be and trust me there is still a big emptyness inside me that will never be filled
Andrew
that was very deep and moving. It was like I was the one looking into the casket. it was as if i was looking through your eyes I am 14 years old myself so i can relate to what that person is feeling. I am a lover and writter of poetry my self and I know what it is like to think of somthing that deep and meeningful and forget it by the time I get ahold of pen and paper. keep on writting the world deserves so
BH
This Poem Rulez! I came here to do my poetry project for English, and I didn't really like poems, but now I am very interested how words can give such a wonderful effect on the readers
Gynnypher
Sept. 17 2002 i lost my best friend. i felt the same way i didnt believe it untill i saw him laying there in that wooden box! i wanted to jump in with him. its comforting to know there are other people that know how i feel!
STEPHANIE
i really like your poem i had a homeboy who past away too. i love him alot and miss him.
Daire
This poem was so beautiful. It reminded me of my first boyfriend when i was 15, and memories of how i felt came flooding back when i thought of the night he died in a car accident. Six years on, im 21 next week and i still cry for the boy i lost.
jessica
Pamela, i just want to say that like. i mean the way you expressed yourself so well in the poem, with so much detail. it made me cry because it reminded of the loss of my boyfriend a couple of weeks ago. then my friend dies the exact same way as in your poem. I hope you have a good life and hope you can get through it.
Jen
Amazing poem. It really makes people think about the choices they make. You're right, Pamela. One day, when people realize that the choices they make determine life or death, the world will be void of tears. I loved this poem. God bless you.
amber
This is a wonderful poem. In September 2002 I lost one of my good friends due to a car accident two days later another student from my school died in a car accident. my school was in shock we didnt think something like that could ever happen to us but it did. in that week we had 3 deaths from different car accidents.
Jesse
Oh my god! this poem sums up exactly wot im feelin, So well written it brought a tear to my eye realising other people have felt my pain too.
Krist
That was a great poem and has tought me a lesson. I do some stupid stuff sometimes and now I realize how big of an effect I can have on others. Thank you.
kelly
i really like this poem b/c it hits so close to hoe. 1 month ago on eof my best friends was killed in a car accident and this poem describes everything i felt and everyone else felt. this poet has done a great job. i write myself and i dont think i could write something like this. i cryed the whole time i read this poem. you did a great job. and keep up the good work and i want you to know that poem has helped me alot about what i have been feeling
Vanes
It is too often that we are judged and criticized on the pieces that mean the most to us. I judge you on the experience you have witnessed not the words that begin a process of healing for your heart. Anybody can write a few words on a piece of paper and be judged according to the format. I'd rather judge you and say I know that this is a masterpiece because it's a piece from one's soul. It was a pleasure for me to read. Altough I am sure it took everything you had to accomplish.
Betty
This poem shows so many feelings and is full of compassion. It is well worded and no doubt straight from the heart of the writer.
MISSY
I really liked your poem. I lost a best friend about a year and a half ago that was young to. Im sorry about the death of your friend.
Lety
It was fabulous I wish it would never happen to one of my friends because I really care for them even though I get mad at him every once in a while.
Chels
I loved it, it made me cry. It reflects on how I feel right now. I lost my best friend Codi in a car accident about a month or two ago, and this poem is how i feel. Codi was only 15, she didnt deserve to die! R. I. P Codi, I love you!
Liz
This is a very nice poem also a very sad poem I am so sorry 4 the lose of your friend!
Lori
The Poem Really Moved Me BeCause I also had A 15 year old friend die. I relate to every thing you have said. Only my friends death was caused by a fire as she was trying to save her father who had multiple schlarosis and two feet away from life (the Door) They ied From too much inhailation of smoke and were burned to death It has will be two years this upcoming march 18 2002 and still to this day the pain doesnt fade away.
emily
I stop by this site once in a while and usually don't get very touched by it. But this poem really made my heart ache. It has really catched the emotions of a loss. TERRIFIC!
nikki
this poem is really good and so sad this is one of the best poems i have ever read
KARI
it was a very good poem it reminded me of my brother and sisters caraccident but instead of killing the daughter it killed my brother insteaded
Ashley
This is a great poem,and it scaires me how close to home it hits.A lot of friends are the same way and I have been so scarid something will happen to them.I also sorry about your friend.thanks for sharing the poem.
Chrissy
Wow, This poem reallyhit home. My sister was killed in a car accident a week ago, she was my best friend. I wrote a poem thats called "It's never going to be okay, and it is posted in "open poetry 18" one of the PIP forums.I invite anyone who would like to, to go see it. Death is never an easy thing to deal with.and there isnt an easy way to learn about it. My sister Had a newborn baby (3 weeks old) and is newly married )1 year today) I greive with you, and there will never be no more tears to cry, because it just isnt fair!
shanta
I don't what to say about this poem.
crissy
i really loved this peom,it made me cry ,it also remind me how i felt when my best friend tom died,it took me awhile to undersand.
brittany
i love this poem its soo true
Tara
this poem really brings back memories for me since i had a very close friend of mine get killed in a car accident. it happened two years ago and to this day I still keep her close to my heart and sometimes find myself slipping in the memory of her name, face, voice, the way she danced and her beautiful voice. She had a voice of an angel R.I.P Andrea I love you..
Kim
This poem was great! It really explains the sorrow you were going through. Well Written!
Sam
Pamela, i liked this poem a hole lot. i have lost alot of friends sorda the same way they snuck out of their rooms to go with their friends to raves and just to go party. it is really crazy and i wish you the best of luck in the future
Danielle
this is a very sad poem and i really understand it too.
jessica
your poem was good that happen to some one i know. and i like your poem it has been the best one i read so far
melissa
i think you did a good job on showing how much it hurts when yo lose a friend i was 16 when i lost my boyfriend. it is now 5 years later. i still hurt and as you said i see it as if it were just yesterday. i m glad you can move and beging to live again but how do you do it? it hurts so bad.
pamela
your poem touched me in a way i never knew. i recently lost my dear cousin and great friend in the same way you lost your friend.i idolised him and there is no way in hell that i ever thought that this sort of thing could ever happen to my family. but it did and your poem made me realise that the bad things in life we can't predict or prevent, you just have to live each day as if it was your last because one day it will be. you don't know how much you have untill it is gone.
Tabitha
The poem was wonderful. I lost my very best friend about 4 in a half years ago and it was the hardest thing to overcome.. I miss her very much and never understood why God had to take her so young..and why so violently? And even though I miss her and wish she was still here with us today I understand the lesson..so please..no matter what age you are always look both ways before crossing the street.. ur poem was great and has helped alot : )
larissa
i really liked this poem, it reminded me of my bestfriends death a few years back
AJ
to many of us no your pain, for you to write is healing in itself take care you will survive well written because it came from the heart
Josephine
your poem was great here in our little community we too had a recent car accident that took the life of a 15 year old girl. thanks for writing it
MoRgAn
this was great! i've had a lost of my best friend in this last month, and hopefully everyone that reads this might get a taste of what you and i are feeling as well as others in the world. and to not let friends drink and drive! Thanks!
stef
This is the best poem ever! i just lost my best friend 3 and a half weeks ago ,the same way. Everything in this poem was like that night.
aleen
this is every sad and it hit me hard my friend died in a car crash 4 months ago she was 14 goin on 15 her b day was 4/17/86 she was every young and this poem brought back all the memories and the hurt and the tears and i wish we could relive thoese dayz again and i would tell her how much he means to all of us and that we care about her but it is to late and our words were unspoken and she didnt get to do all the things that she wanted to do so jus remeber tomorrow may have to start with out them even though you dont want it to
Amanda
WOW! This poem is very powerful with it's words! I think a lot of my friends, including myself, know how you feel, because we had three students in our high school die this year from a car accident. It opened up everyone's eyes. It made us realize that life is too short to be taking advantage of it! Tahnk you for touching so many hearts!
SANDRA
I LOVED THIS POEM IT IS SO SAD YET BRILLIANT ! YET IT ALSO MADE ME CRY !
vanessa
my niece died at 4 months old I understand the pain of losing a loved one to soon. Yourpoem really helped me to nderstand some thins that i had'nt ever undertstood before. Thank you Pam. :)
Krista
This poem is so true. The words touched my heart. Everyday another life is take in a car wreck from a kid just wantin' to be a kid. The guilty remain on the streets. There are too many kids dyin' today for no good reason. We must stop the stupid choices that are made!
KEISHA
A VERY GOOD POEM, & SAD I FEEL BAD 4 U, KEEP THE GREAT WORK
Krys
I never knew what death was until very recently, my grandmother died. It's really scary, losing a loved one. Your poem was really very touching..
marie
this is so much like a situation in my life. so it means alot to hear a nice poem like this
Mayra
This poem was one of the best. It tells a sad story well written.
Nicole
That poem is so sad
Kambria
This is a great poem. It reminds me so much of my cousin that I recently lost to a car accicents.
Tricia
I also had a friend who died in a car crash.Your poem touched my heart.xxx
lil
this was a really great poem
Tater
I really liked this poem. We are doing a report on poems in English and i chose death on my topic so i was looking at these. This is one of the best that i have seen.
Sara
This poem make you think of all of your true friends.
Urszula
This poem moved me. As reading it even though my friend passed away slightly diffently. Reading your words made me remember every thing like it happened yesterday. I still have the cold chill running up and down my back. If i could only express myself the way you have.
ANASTASIA
THANK YOU!!!
M
oh my gosh!! so sad...it made me cry!!
JENNIFER
i AM SO SORRY ABOUT YOUR LOSS YOUR POEM TOUCHED MY HEART. bE STRONG SHE IS STILL WITH YOU EVERYDAY AND IS GETTING A CHANCE TO GROW UP AND LIVE HER LIFE IN A WORLD WHERE THERE IS NO HURT OR CRIMES JUST DAYS FILLED WITH HAPPINESS.=)
Denise
I just want to let you know I know just how you feel I to had lost my child of 8 yrs in jan 99 from a car wreck. Its the hardest thing I have ever went through. I say what did i do wrong in this world for him to take my baby from me.
Dave
Excellent poem, I lost a cousin to suicide, and even though they died differently, the afterthought is still the same. Thank you for writting this.
stacey
very interesting poem. sorry about the loss of your friend. your poem was beautiful, it touched my heart.
Diana
This poem brought a lot of truth to me for when I lost my step son ( we were so close ) I felt the same as a lot that was said in this poem. Thanks!
Stacy
the poem was wonderful but very sad. it had a lot of heart and soul in it i could see. its my fave! great work!
Brenda
I hope to never have to encounter this with my daughter.
VICKY
THIS POEM IS JST LIKE WHAT HAPPEND TO ME A YEAR HALF AGO MY BESTFRIEND DIED.I THIINK IT WAS VERY GOOD AND CAME FROM THE HEART.
christy
I lost my best friend in march of this year. I could guess that he felt that he failed, for his goal in life was to make everyone's day brighter and when he left us we were very sad and our day gloomy. He was a almost perfect countryboy and pround to be a redneck. "Shorty" was killed in a car wreck from over correcting a mistake and went through a fence. My days aren't as long now that i know he is still with me, but i can't stress it enought to people that life is to perecious to live for the next moment. Living for the vary minute is what it is all about. Thank you for sharing your peom with me.
angela
Oh my. I don't know what to say. That is so sad. I really liked it. You did a great job of writing that.
Ashley
I totally love this poem. It's exactly what happened to one of my best friends about 2 months ago that died in a car accident. It has really helped me understand better about the death of him. My friends and I did understand though that this was a lesson in disguise. We just couldnt understand why him. It was a terrible tragedy all too much like this one. Thanx for this poem. It means more to me than anything!
Danielle
this poem reminds me of when my grandma died. thanks for the great poem. I brigs back memories.
J.C.
This is a very sad and touching poem, and i hope that people will express their feelings in a poem or song, instead of violence, after a loved one passes away.
Tiffani
This is the sadest and sweetest poem I've ever heard. I'm truely sorry 4 the loss but u have taught us all a very good "Lesson" in life. Luv ya lots!
Kristy
I realy liked this poem. After I read it I started to cry.
Nevada
I thought this poem was a great poem. I ran in to an incident like this only it was my boyfriend , so i know what it feels like to loose a loved one , he was killed in a car accident and i felt for him for months after his death , this poem helped me realize that the only way to deal with the pain is to let nature take its course , the ones who love you that are around you will help you.
Taama
the year 2000 was bad for me.i lost a close friend in Feb. to an auto accident, my Dad in March to surgery, and my nephew in law in June to a motercycle accident. Needless to say, your poem really hit home with me. I also e-mailed it to the family members of the friend that died and to my niece. Maybe it will help to know that they are not alone. Somehow no matter who you know of that has been through something like this you always feel alone. Thank you for sharing your memories with the world.
Candy
Your pome makes me think of my cuz,she past on just last week. She was only 16 with a little babyboy. He is 3mths old and hes not going to know who is mom was. I did not know her, wish I did. I know she was a good girl and mom. She had so much love in her life.
Amanda
Your poem was so good. It brought tears to my eyes as i thought about all of the "lessons" that i have been taught. I want to thank you for helping me understand.
Dawna
I REALLY LOVED YOUR POEM. JUST RECENTLY MY FRIEND DIED IN A SINGLE PASSENGER CAR ACCIDENT. AS I WAS LOOKING FOR A POEM TO HANG UP IN MY ROOM, I FOUND YOURS, AND IT MADE THE TEARS FALL SO FREELY OUT OF MY EYES. I NEEDED THAT. I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO HOLD THEM ALL IN. I AM NOW WRITING MY OWN POEM, AND HOPEFULLY WILL ADD IT TO THIS COLLECTION. THANK YOU FOR THIS POEM...IT MEANS A LOT TO ME.
linda
this is a cool poem after i read it i started to cry