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The Last Goodbye by Michael Bush

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whit

my boyfriend and i got in a fight 4 days ago and i haven't heard from him since. The last thing we talked about was breaking up so right now im in this akward place while i wait on the verdict. i screwed up and i dont wanna break up because i love him but he might. i tried to tell him im sorry or or that i take it back (which i cant) but he doesnt listen so this poem is the most perfect thing i have heard in my life!

Zach

This poem was very dramatic and sensational. Whoever wrote it has a lot of talent.

Babygirl

Wonderful poem you put the right elements in it to make it realate so much to peoples lives.

kaying

Well this poem is very nice. I very enjoy reanding your poem. It makes me remind of my ex. I very love this poem..

jennifer

this poem reminds me of breaking up with my ex, we loved eachother so much and we were together for 10 months and I spent so much time with him and I guess he just stopped loving me and we broke up this poem is a great poem and i just wanted to say i feel your pain!

Jessica

This poem is great because it came from the heart, keep up the good work!

Lauren

OMg that was so good! It makes so many mixed up feelings of mine crystal clear!

Julie

I like this poem b/c I know exactly how he feels. I am going through the same thing right now with my ex-boyfriend..I broke up with him...but I can't get over him...the feelings never go away.

Lauren

I think that this poem is really wicked and i can relate to it well coz it happened to me about 5 months ago,yet i still fancie him like mad but we made apromise that we would never go out coz he dont want the fuss!But cheers this poem has really cheered me up!

Andrea

That poem is very good. I could really relate to it.

Helen

This was a great poem. I can totally relate to it, every time I read it, it makes me cry. cause I am going through that exact thing. It's so sad!

Stephanie

I like a lot this poem, is . great !

Megan

This poem is really, how do i say it, amazing. I dont know how to put it, but it is sooooo how i feel about my true love, its not even close to funny! goodness i hope everything works out for you michael, and i really want to see more of your poetry out there, thank you for caring enough to put this out there for the people who need help putting their feelings into words!

kristen

this has to be the best poem i have ever read. it has so much feeling and passion in it. great work, it took my breath away

kylie

This poem really touched me, as it is exactly how i am feeling right now. I have never had this happen to me before. i love this poem.(it made me cry).

Jamie

I thought this was a really good poem. I can really relate to it because I'm going throught that right now.

Angelica

ITS REALLY GOOD AND I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL

GEORGE

I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM DUE TO FACT THAT I CAN REALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM. I JUST FINISH GOING THROUGH A VERY HARD BREAK UP. ITS HARD SAYING GOODBYE TO THE PERSON YOU STILL LOVE. ONLY IF THEY WOULD JUST UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH YOU STILL LOVE THEM, MAYBE THINGS WOULD COME AROUND.

Kelly

I thought that this poem was so touching and it made me think about love in a whole new way and when i am next in love i will think before i act!

Carina

Great poem. Hope she will comes back into your life again!

LuVlY

Your poem was Da Bomb!

John

IT totally relates to what just happened in a relationship with me, i f-ed up and now i have to say goodbye, and this poem was a good way of saying it, thanks michael...

jay

awsome poem!

Jim

good poem

Patricia

i thought this poem was really touching! But the only thing is that my ex wrote me one similar to this and while reading this poem it really touched me and it really made me think of what wonderful times we had together!

Courtney

Breathtaking

hollie

This poem applies to mu life 100%. Thank you!

stephanie

that was a really good poem it describes exactly how i feel

CiNdY

I really like this poem perhaps because I can relate but I'm voting for this poem because I think it's well written and touching. I mean, it got to me.

ERICA

I LOVE THIS POEM I CAN RELATE TO THIS

Christine

i luv this poem! ahh! its soo true and its somehing that i can relate to! I LUV IT SOO MUCH! i dunno what else to say! *smiles*

Anastasia

That poem, described EXACTLY how i feel about this guy called Jason, we went out a couple of times and next thing you know i fall in live, and so does he, with my best friend! I try to get over him, but nothing works. So i think Michael is a great poet!

jessica

I think your poem really tells how you feel, and you put your words in a good way to say how you felt.

alizay

It think it is a very emotional poem because all of the words that he said is so real. The last goodbye when it comes to love mean a lot.

Denise

It's rare to read poetry from a guy 1st of all, and secondly to have so much emotion as this one did.Thanks,it gave me a whole new look on how "in touch" guya can be.

deanna

i think this was a great poem. it says a lot for someone that just broke up with someone they truly care about.

Greg

My girlfriend and I recently broke up after 3 years of being together. This poem made me cry because it is just like listening to myself.

Jeanne

This poem was great. It explains exactly with what I'm going through and I can completely understand what you are saying!

danielle

that peom it so really to me yo

Kendra

I really liked your poem because you are a guy and it is hard for a guy to admit when they have lost something good! From a girls point of view if I was that girl I would be flattered!

Queen

I realy like this poem cause i can truly relate to it i realy hurt a guy i thought i loved or did i dont know i just realy like this alot (it made me cry)

Danielle

This is so great. I like pretty much cried when i read this. It explains everythign im feeling right now, i knwo i have to say good-bye, but i dont know how. Its just Wonderful, This is true art. Keep it up, i enjoy it alot!

Michael

Man! Your poem is the best i've ever read.

marco

very cool

alicia

that poem is one of the best poems i have ever read in my entire life. my b/f and i broke up a couple of weeks ago and altho' it's gender swapped. i feel the same way. good on you Michael

chassity

i really like your poem i can relate to The Last Goodbye, i've gone through some hard times with lots of guys. keep up the good work

michelle

this poem is how i feel bout my ex boyfriend he acts like he still loves me but then he dont at times and i just him so much so i really really like this poem!

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