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Dying Inside by Natalee Fox

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LiL
I really liked this poem. A best friend of mine passed away oN the 13/12/03. Just 3 months ago. And im still hurting and missing her so much. She was only 15. Everything reminds me of how much i miss her. . Very Nicely writing poem. Thanks.
Rachel
I loved this poem. I have resently lost one of my own friends, in a car crash. It was an annocent car crash, no drugs or drinking involved, and so it took me by surprise. He ment the world to me, he was my shining star each and everyday. So when I read this poem, I could relate to how this person felt. Its a terrible feeling, that honestly can't be described or put into words, but the author did a good job.
dale
i lost a friend a while back and this poems was how i felt i felt that a part of me had died and the world was just crashing round me
Amber
This poem was really great. My friend Garett died 1/4/03, and this poem really reminded me of him. I still think about him and miss him alot. but i know that when i go to heave i will see him again.
CAMBRIA
I READ YOUR WORDS AND I DO FEEL YOUR PAIN. MY BEST FRIEND OF 2 YEARS, YES ONLY TWO, BUT WE WERE INSEPRABLE. SHE DIED IN A CAR ACCIDENT. SHE HAD JUST LEFT MY HOUSE AND I WAS SUPPOSTED TO BE WITH HER. SO I KNOW WHAT YOU SAY WHEN A PART OF YOU DIED ALONG W/THEM. EVEN WITH TIME IT WILL NOT HEAL UNTIL YOU EXPLORE ALL THE ROADS IN MOURNING.
veronika
Hey, this is an awsome quote! really! i lost a friend of mine on July 23, 2003. it was by far the most awful day i ever had been through. i wish i had the talent to write what i am feeling in a way that u did. Ryan was the most awsome guy! i'll miss him forever! i am also sorry for ur loss. but in the end the clouds will part and everything will be ok
Jenn
That's exactly how i felt when my boyfriend of four and a half years died at 16. When he died a bigger part of me did too. It's been two years and I'm still unable to date cuz I see him in everyone and everything.
Will
Your poem is touching. We all feel like we decay and fade when something bad happens to our close ones. But it reminded me of what i felt for a long time, in a good way so ya good job!
Rachel
Hi my name is Rachel and im 15. I just read ur poem and i think its great. i found out that on 9/25/03 one of my friends (Katrina) had died. This poem i can really relate to because the moment i read the words in a letter i recieved i felt i had died and had began to cry. The next day i bought flowers and went to her grave, it made me feel a little better, but everyday in school yeah i might smile but inside im dying.
amanda
i love this poem because when i read it it reminds me about my cousin dustin that died two years ago.
Kristen
You're poem was Great! two days ago I lost a close friend from a car accident and it has been very tough to get through. I read this poem and it made me cry but it also made me think about everything else in life. Again, it was a great poem.
steven
this poem really depics exactly how i feel, my dad was murdered when i was fifteen i am now 17 and it seems so long yet so short ago. good poem. i love you dad and i will never forget you.
wilson
I love this poem,I felt so sad when i read but you know what,we have to thank God the we know those people the we lost but they are always are going to live in our heart.
Patsy
Hi, My name is Patsy and on Decemeber 15, 2002 one of my best friends Adam "Kyle" died. We were friends who did rodeos together. Adam was amazing ranked number 1 in the world in bull riding. Not a day goes by that I don't think of Adam. I know Adam is watching over me right now but I miss him very much. Your poem is great and I can really relate to it.
jasmine
when i read this for the first time after my pop died it made me cry. and i can really relate to it now.
NESSA
i had lost my dad 2 years ago. and i was daddy's little girl and of course i still am and always will be. this poem touched my heart because he took a lot of me with him. that's kinda good but way to sad. thanks for sharing this poem.
Beth
I really liked this poem, I can relate a lot to it. I have lost a lot of loved ones in the last 4 years. first it was my cousin who died at birth, my uncle was killed, my firend died, then my aunt died I miss them all. and this poem is exactly how i feel about them. It brought tears to my eyes.
Lisa
What a greatly moving poem! It helped me greatly Thanks
teresa
My friend past away on Aug.7 2001 it's been horrible and this poem has related to how i feel
crystal
My father died in Dec. of 99. It is exactly how I feel... When he died he took a part of me with him... I miss him so much... I wish everyday that he was still alive... but i know that my wish won't come true... But in away my wish did come true... He is with me every day of my life... I just can't see him in a humen being...
Ashley
On January 7, 2001 I lost my aunt. When I read this poem I just cried because I was reading my exact feelings.
Vanessa
i love this poem. After i read it, it made me think of my grandmother. She passed away on new years.She died off of cancer. It was very hard for me to get over her death but sometimes i can because every time i close my eyes to sleep the image of her face appear's in my dreams
Victoria
i really can relate to this poem.. when i read it, it made me feel somethimg that i never felt befor.
heather
this is a very good poem i had a friend that died not to long ago and this poem explains the way i feel about him after he died to
Rusha
I lost the love of my life back in april to suicide.I will love you forever Eric
Michelle
This was a great poem.
sarah
I really liked this poem...it explained how i felt when i had lost someone i loved
Jeanette
My Aunt practically raised me from the time I was born til I started school.She passed away in March and this has been the hardest thing I've gone through.This is exactly how I feel everyday.
lori
"breathtaking"
meg
this poem puts it all into words what i feel everyday.
Carrie
I lost my best friend in car accident in September, and this poem describes exactly how I felt. It is a beautiful piece that really touched my heart.
STACI
LISTEN. MY MOTHER PASSED AWAY IN AUGUST OF 99 AND AFTER READING THIS POEM I KNEW I COULD RELATE TO IT!
felicia
i lost a close friend only 3 weeks ago he ment everything to me & i miss him sooooo much & this poem reminds me of him,im sorry about ur friend i know what you are going through!
jennifer
i thought this poem was great. thats how i feel now my husband is gone to heaven.