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At First by Marci Parker

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Mandie

This is a very deep poem and i find this cutting me close to the heart cuz i too went through something similar to what you did! Be Strong and Live life to the fullest sweetheart!

tiny

oh gosh! I am only in highschool and i've already ran into this problem twice. Luckily both times were miscarriages. But plenty of my friends have been here too.

Nikki

wonderful poem. i am raising a girl on my own. he knows she exists. he just chooses to no longer be a part of her life. May God be with you and your child.

julie

Wow, u can't say more to express the pain u felt, but find joy in the child u now have for he has nothing and u have God's gift.. a child who will love u like no one else can.. great poem

Lori

This is a wonderful way of putting feelings to work for you. I have been there..please remember that you may now have a child to love and hold.as he has nothing..in a way you have gained by this and he has lost..Love and Prayers

Angel

That poem was so filled with emotion i loved it! I really feel for you, good luck in life.

This is a really good job. It touched my heart. I can just say I know what this person is going through.

star

Just wanted to say thank you for writing this poems n sorry that u have to feel like that because i know exactly how it feels, i dont think ill ever get over him but i dont think i want to

Elise

BEEN THERE.DONE THAT. I feel better knowing im not the only one. i had my son when i had just turned 16. my son is now 17 months old and im 17. life has been rough. peace and god bless

Danielle

that is such a great poem.its so touching and so true.I'm sure lots of people can totally relate to that!

katie

your poem was incredibally beautiful i loved it i bet so many girls out there can relate to this poem keep up the incredible work

Veronica

I think this poem can relate to so many girls out there

Marc

i'm a single father of an 18 month old baby girl and this poem really touched me...what we think is love is often masqueraded and we can't see the truth even tho it's right on fromt of us.

Jasmine

This was a an excellent poem, it really moved me!

Lindsey

This poem really related to me. It touched me in a couple of ways and it is so true!!

Christy

This was a really good poem. So many girls have gone through this. Everything you have written is so very true. Unfortunately people have to go through these harsh things in life, but we live and learn that people don't always tell the truth. They lie to get what they want. I think this was an exellent poem.

LiNdA

That is a very strong poem

Lisa

i really believe that many teenage and beyond women of today's generation can relate to this poem and so i know that you desire my vote i see so many of my classmates and friends that's in the same situation as the young lady in this peom

Ana

This is the most beautiful and creative poem I've heard the person who wrote this has a great talent and will go really far if she keeps on writing poems like this one I love it.

michell

I love this poem.I hope you have more

Angie

I loved this poems its all true that is the only thing that guys go for lately they dont have no respect and it was about time girls put a stop on guys playing with our feelings.our virginity is our life ones you take it away they take our lifes and its true you will always remember the first time!

Lucila

it was a beautiful poem and made me think how others take advantage of our feelings and our emotions.love is not always sweet as thougt to be.

Erica

Your poem was completly moving. I was touched by your words and my heart goes out to you and your child. Best wishes to you and your new life. I hope everything works out for you. Stay strong

Nicole

This was a great poem, and i have to say that the end when you said that you were pregnant almost made me cry! I think you have sompthing going there, but you shouldnt make it so specific, try to fit it to everyone!

Vanessa

I think this poem is excellent is deep and strong. I personally Liked it ALOT!

Mona

WOW.. oh my god.. that was incredibly beautiful.. I just don't know what else to say but that.. when I got to the end, I really could feel her pain.. and it was just written so eloquently. absolutely incredible. well done Ms. Parker!

Christina

I loved this poem. It was sooo sweet.

Cri

Great!!

NaToya

I give this poem a big 10. I really loved it. I was so true and emotional. You are a good writer.

Nigel

Very deep, very moving. While reading it, I see what you saw, feel what you felt. On reflection, this poem reflects my own pain and worries (except for the pregnant bit). :-)

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