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Dear Dad by Nikki Moone

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Kimmie

Oh my gosh! That was so well said! I think most of us teens feel that way about life - one HUGE ROLLER COASTER RIDE!

mandy

your poem ment so much to me. it was just like my thoughts in life. as i am a teen going through the teen life and being confused on everything that crosses my path. i am going into 10th grade now and this is a time of my life i am confused the most and i just think your poem says it all for me.

Sweetie

I really connected with your letter to your dad..i mean there are so many girls out there who feel exactly what you wrote.

alysa

i really enjoyed your poem it was so good.....ill i can say is it brought tears in my eyes and helped me understand someone out there is feeling the exact same way i do..and it helps me understand life a little better that maybe alot of people feel this way?? and hopfully all our questions will get answered

Ashley

Hey, I really really liked what you wrote. It is exactly how I feel right now. I dont know what to say or how to act anymore. Nothing ever goes the way that I want it to, and it hurts so much. I cant talk to my parents, because I feel that they will reject me for how I feel. so I turn to writing as many teens do. I thank you so much for writing that, because it means so much, and has alot of meaning~

Rachelle

What if I told you that I knew exactly what could fill that void so you could live a happy and successful life and never ever feel so lonely again. It's simple and it's been there all along. it's called GOD and he wants to help you. :) This poem really reminded me of my life and what it used to be like until I found God. :)

nikki

I really do like this poem it is the best one that i have read all day and i have been on line for like to hours now. this is really,really great

Tiffany

Life gets better i promise. I am now 20 and I have been where your at. You will never fully understand life, but you learn how to deal with it. I admit i'm still confused, I mean I'm sure that we are not that far apart in age

Nikole

This poem reminds me alot of what I have been feeling and I am very greatful for this poem. It help me understand. Thanks

tracy

When I was reading your letter to your dad it broke my heart it was so wonderful,nice,and heart breaking......everyone wishes they had a world that was all figure but really we can't because everyone has diff. opions right.. well that is my comments thanx tracy...

Beeann

I can't believe I just read a poem that is identical to one that I would write. I feel the exact way that this poet did when she wrote this. Just when I thought I was alone.

Maree

Look, Your letter that you have writen to your dad says so much baout what im going through at the moment. This letter was touching and great Keep up the good work

Jamie

This is a really good poem i really enjoyed reading it and i'm starting to think lots of girls go through this because i am right now!~ keep up the great work!

val

very good keep up the great work you write so real

Jennifer

This poem really touched me.

Rachel

This is a great poam and touched me in many ways. It is so true, and iU think that a lot of teenagers could relate to this if they would just take the time to read this. Thank you for writing such a wonderful letter

Ashley

I really liked this letter. I know exactly where Nikki is coming from.

Karen

well written Nikki, i and i think every other teenager out there knows just how you feel.

Amy

I liked your poem it was good! It was more then good! I liked it alot!

Ashley

This poem that she wrote reminds me so much of me. Nobody really knows how I really feel except for one of my friends Holly, but that is only because she is dealing with the same situation I am going through. After I read this poem I almost felt like crying because it was so realted to my life and what I am thinking about my life. I really, really respect and understand what Nikki is talking about in her poem.

Sasha

Absolute reality

Lori

very well written poem. It really meant alot to me

Jessica

I loked it very much. And it was great hope you write some more

jfw

your poem touched me. i wanted to reaffirm with you that life is a journey, not a destination. So where you've been is experience and where you go will also be experience. You have the right and the responsibility to choose the path upon which you walk. I wish for you a gentle journey down life's path.. a little sun, a little shade and no more complexity then you wish upon yourself. listen to your heart.pursue your dreams. you write from an honest place and a have the ability to express it. good job.

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