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The First Time by Lan Trinh

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lady

this poem is soo amazing. i love it because it made me remember what happened to me and i realize that i wasnt the only person that was done this way. after two years i still remember it, but i am thankful because it helped me and i've learned a lot from that one experience. guard your hearts and yourselves ladies!

Draik

You know this really sounds like my sister. This guy took advantage of her when she was vulnerable. Now she has a kid and the father is in jail.

alisha

i was suprised at all the girls comments that said "the same thing happened to me". So yep it happened to me too and the pain you feel is imaginable. It hurts to know oyu were used but even though u never forget it u will get over it and live on and find someone who really loves you. But u learn from ur mistakes, and hopefully any other girls can learn from ours. It was a grest poem. Keep ur head up

Erin

OMG! i loved this

Bianc

i really like this poem

ashley

this poem is a great way of expressing how much a person can care for a nother and get hurt so bad. this was a great poem for me because the same thing happend to me.

lisa

I really thought this poem was great. It happen to me too. I know how u feel girl. It hurts u sooo much but yet u can't hate because u still feel something. Keep writing u have a talent

manda

I loved this poem. i know how thid gurl feels i was used just like her. thanx for the great poem.

Luc

That was a great poem! Don't put your life on hold because the guy you are writting about is not worth it. When you finally meet the right person.it will all make sens :) I hope I get to read more of your poems, that was truly touching.:)

beki

this poem is amazing, i really like how you portrayed your feelings. the passion and love you felt is skillfully brought over. it sounds like he did not deserve you any way.

Cassie

This poem is great! I know how she is feeling! It happened to me too! I thought that we were in love and that we would be together forever! Well I guess that i thought wrong! I gave him something that i can never get back and after like a month or two afterwards he left me!

Ruthie

I love this poem and something sort of similar like this happen to me and it hurt so bad. I use to be in a relationship with him and after it was over that's all he wanted but I will forgive but never ever forget.

Lashorea

I really love this poem. I csn really relate to it. The only difference is the guy stayed with me for 8 1/2 months after we had sex but thats not a good thing because thats the only reason he stayed with me. Not only that but he wsa sleeping with my cousin too! So all i have to say is keep your head up and someday the right guy will come. BE PATIENT and ask God to help yuor heart to heal and give you some peace. He'll send the right man for you when its time.

ann

after reading this poem.it just make me realized that i have been through this slipery situation before.

Sarah

A very powerful poem and I really liked it.

amanda

OMG! this poem was the best poem i have ever read! I am crying right now! I have never had a poem get to me like this one did! i was just thinking about having sex wit my boyfriend but, now, i am goin to think twice! thank you soo much 4 this poem! keep writing you have a true talent!

heather

this is a great poem. it says how i felt when my ex bumped me cuz i did things with him that i had never done, but i didn't have sex with him but i alomst did and i read this poem and it says how i feel in this situation. keep up the good work.:)

jennie

i think this poem is so true and i love it

Kevin

I found that to be a great poem. You sound like a deep caring person and i'm certain you'll find the right person. BTW. The guy sounds like a prick to make you feel that way.

Beronica

I really love your poem because i was in that situation

Antoinette

Your poem is beautiful...although I have not experienced what you went through I know that it is every girls greatest fear.

Salli

I loved the poem, it was very touching I believe this poem will help others to think twice about what there about to do. I really enjoyed reading it, I think your an excellent poemt, and I would like to read more of your poems. I loved it!

Jeannie

I really like the poem because the same thing went on with me

Blondie

I just wanted to say, that I really liked your poem, it is very deep. When I read it, it reminded me of my first time. The guy did the samething to me as he did you. It really hurts.

melanie

This poem is very heart felt. It is deep and expressing those deep feelings in a person.I hope the author of this poem continue s and has much success in poertry writing.

Kate

I just want to let you know that your poem touched my heart. I myself did not have a great first time experiance and I would take it back with every fiber of my being if I was given the chance.

christina

that was really deep. i loved it . i started crying all through the poem. please send me some more of your poems. i would really like to read them, thank you

lizeth

i love this poem t is very deep!! :O)keep up the great work!!!

Tiffany

I really felt for this poem because I've been put in that same position. I never thought that my feelings would be able to be expressed as well as they were in this poem. Being put through this has made me a totally different girl. Since this happened I completely regret ever losing my virginity. I wish I would have saved myself for someone that was a real for sure thing, that would be there for me always.

Melissa

unbelieveable. My heart grew into this poem. Your a beatiful person.

Jessica

I can totally relate to how she felt. The exact same thing happened to me, and it tore me apart. But I soon found a great guy and it all works out ok

melissa

i just love this poem.as i read it i just felt the girls pain i could only imagine how devistating that must be.i really enjoyed this poem and wish to vote 4 it...

Candice

this poem is great...i can really relate to it...the same thing happened to me...and i have never been the same since...its good to know someone has been in the same shoes as me.

Haley

I AM VOTING FOR THIS POEM BECUACE IT HAPPENED TO ME!

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