This is such an awesome poem. I can relate to this in weird ways. I have never tried to commit suicide.. but I have wanted to. I get depressed really easily anymore, and its so hard to talk to anyone. You made it so clear when you wrote this. You helped me in more ways then one. Thank you so much! Keep writing and remember, that no matter what, you always have writing. So if you want to commit suicide ever again.. remember to write. get your feelings down on paper.. and it might help you. it sure helps me!

it was a sad poem but it had sooooo much meaning to it

THIS POEM WAS THE GREATEST. I COULD RELATE TO THIS POEM IN SO MANY WAYS ,MY FAMILY TOO. I LOST MY FOUR YEAR OLD BROTHER WHEN I WAS ELEVEN. I MISS HIM SO MUCH.

I loved your poem dearly, you have put into words the very thing that I am fighting as we speak. I am 17 almost 18 years old and suffer from severe depression. I fight to live for each day, and sometimes I'm close to losing. But it helps me along to know that someone out there too knows what it is like to stand on the brink of death look over and think "I need to hang on for a few more seconds". Life is something that everyone should love. I love life, I need my life. But there is that deep dark dull pain that has haunted and continues to haunt my life. Knowing that you have been there eases my pain, knowing that someone else knows the indescribable pain we feel. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

ive been in your shoes before, im 14, and have attempted suicide before. suicide does nothing for you, except cause pain and grief. if you feel it is your "detiny" then you truly are sad. heed my words, for it is best for you and your family if you will just put down the knife.

This is a great poem! i also feel this way sometimes, where i just want to die and get it over with, but slowly i am realizing that i should enjoy life to the fullest. Tahnk you so much for helping me realize this!