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And Where Were You? by Valerie

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ANABEL
HEY, SENT THIS TO MY EX HOPE HE CAN COME BACK TO ME! THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH! P. S: YOU TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MIND, THAT I DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS
Katie
I sent this Poem to my friend of 6 years who is slowly drifting apart from me because she is only hanging out with her boyfriend and her boyfriends friends andher prettier and cooler friends! I don't know what to do! So i sent her this poem and hopefully your talent (i liked the poem by the way) can help her remember me and so we don't drift apart forever! Thank you alot! ::Tear:: IM glad you wrote that poem!
andrea
i really really love your poem we had the same experience my friend leave me all alone she always mail a letter to me that we are bestfriends forever and shes always there for me but now shes not she had just transfer from another school and i think our frienship die imiss her terriblywere are friend gradeshool and now im in 3rd yr.
Mandie
Me and my friend of 4 years got in a horrible fight and now we never speak to each other ever and I miss her sooooo much , but I know it will never be the same again , and I don't think I could ever trust her, your poem made me really think about me and her , and your poem makes me know now that I am not the only one who had lost a close friend so dear to me , this poem is wonderful and full of emotion and I loved it so much , keep 'em comeing!
Ann
I have felt every emotion in this poem. I was there. But now I have my dear friend back after17 years and I will never loose him again.
clare
this poem reminds me of my best fiends and the wonderful times we once shared . we were in different schools then,and when i was feelin so helpless in my new school,they were not by my side,ireally felt like crying everday until i die then,but it's okay now.
sandrine
ur poem is really greaaaaat it really touched me especially that i'm hurt from a similar situation.
jazmine
i liked your poem it took me back to were i lost my best friend once and it brought a tear to my eye. Its good to know im not alnoe on this thank you!
Amanda
This reminds me of a really close friend! Thanks for putting it on here!
yna
THIS POEM BROUGHT ME TO A PHASE WHEREIN I WAS ABOUT TO CRY. I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY,REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, LIKE IT. MAKE MORE POEMS LIKE THIE "VALERIE"
Jim
My best friend of 11 years who was my soul mate, room mate for many of those 11 years and meant so much to me walked out of my life and has not spoken to me. After a year and a half sending him holiday and Birthday cards, messages on voice mail no return calls or word. I lost both my parents weeks apart from one another recently and no family around and I reached out to him again thinking, hoping, praying he would reach back. I was wrong. to this day I have no idea what happened or why after 11 strong years of solid friendship this happened. We shared so much and trusted each other like brothers. I am lost, confused and so alone wondering if ever I will see or speak to him again.
Andie
I love your poem! It simply makes me cry like a baby. :) Keep up!
peaches
The poem really brought tears yo my eyes. I am really going though a tough time with my best friend. I do not know what to tell her and how hopefully this poem will tell her how I feel. I think you did a wonderful job on this poem and I hope you write many more that I can vote for.
Alysha
Hey, I love this poem. It says exactly what i feel now that me and my best friend are apart. Thank you
Jen
that poem was brilliant and borught tears to my eyes, it brought out emotions and said so many things that i certainly can relate to. keep writing them!
Jessica
I fell exactly the same way. My friend stabbed me in the back and it hurt me so bad. even though I can't stand to even think about him, I still miss him soo much! Great poem!
kim
i totally understand this poem since it's exactly word for word what happened to me and my former brother and best friend. he'll always be my brother, but i'm hoping one day we'll find each other again. good job valerie.it's nice to know once in a while that there are people who understand, so thanks a lot for that.
Ash
WOW! That poem totally blew me away. I can relate to it so well! Thanks 4 putting it up here!
Marggie
This poem is true feelings.I went through soemhting simalar about 6 months ago with my best friend. Now that the new school year has started I have him in one of my classes it is hard and keeps bringing back unresolved feelings. I want to talk to him but I can't Good job.
Linda
This poem touches me very much. Just lost a friend. He just disappeared without a trace, without a word...without reason. Not knowing is a torture. But I wish him well n I only have fond memories of him. Nice one Valerie :)
Marvin
I've lost my very best friend a weeks ago...What i felt right now described in this poem.
Yanagi
I cried when I read this poem. I showed my friend this and she cried too. I love this poem, and I hope that what is described in the poem doesn't happen to me.=(
Amanda
That poem was good. We really enjoyed it! Keep up the hard work! Thank you for sharing it with us! Thank you
Kelli
hey i like this poem i just sent it to a friend i lost and i hope he reads it andunderstands how i feel right now. thanks for coming up with a poem like this
kimmie
I really liked u r poem, cuz I'm in thiat kind f situation right now, except I don't mis her, she's the one that made the mistake, and I wish I nver met her! Newayz, you write really really really godd! Keep it up val!
Denise
your poem really gets to me, I know the pain of thinking you would never loose that special friend
Icarus
Nothing is lost.
Laura
WOW. I lost a friendship last year - a friend of ten years. I write poems like this one...and all of them make me cry. I love it, Valerie. You're very talented.
Nikki
This reminds me a lot of my life. I go through his so much.
Valerie
Your poem really touched me!!! I am recently going through the SAME THING!! It was like your poem described my situation perfectly!!!
Cindy
I really liked this poem. It reminds me of my friend that moved away. I's going to send it to him.
Jo
I really liked your poem cause I could relate to it well, the language was simple and it had a good sound to it. Very effective
Rachel
WOW!! This is a really great poem adn I can relate to it so well that is scares me...I complement the writer and encourage them to keep writing!! It was great!!
Ali
It's very effective and when I read it I remember my lycee memories