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Mistake by Angell

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sassy

umm. yeah that was soo amazing I have nothing to say except for i admire you soo much for being able to share your feelings this way

This Poem Was Real Good . It Made Me think.

Vanessa

I luv this poem because i'm a rocker and tried to commite suicide and i used to cut myself

Donna

I love this poem because this is how i am feeling and it does seem like no one really does care about you or what is going on in your life at the moment. But i am still here fighting what we call life. I didn't give up, there are people that do care about you. This is a wonderful poem.

marliese

I just read your poem and cryed all the way through it, i feel like that everyday, nothing seems to help, i dont want to leave it all bhind though. thankyou for letting myself and others read this poem. it is excellent

brittany

this poem really spoke to me! no words can really describe this beautiful piece of art work! it left me speakless!

sam

i can really relate to the poem

brittany

awwww i noe how u feel i had to go though something just like that but i loved ur poem

Laura

I love it, say's it all sorry no good at saying stuff but i have to say i love this poem it relates to a moment in my life great wrk!

Elena

umm this poem really got to me and i think its one of the best ive ever red. Ive had a couple of moments that sugested suidide was the best answer. Even though im not even old enouf to drive i still believed suicide was my answer. I lay in bed with a knife crying and praying to god to help me just go and get it over with. until now ive been too scared to talk about this but your poem tells me the whole truth about suicide and i just wanna thank you for opening my eyes to how dumb i was being thinking about leaving.

LaBreia

I loved this poem it made me cry sometimes I feel this way but I just pray and ask the Lord to help. Thank you for writing this poem.

erica

this poem was very sad, but yet very convincing keep up your amazing talent.

nick

Your poem is all to real to me. You got my props.

Hillary

Your poem was beautiful it made me cry. it exactly how you feel. I was going through poems about suicide on the internet today to put in a scrap book and I saw this one and i had to put it in Thank you

kathleen

the poets words are so true in what actually happens when one decides to end their life! many are left with unanswered questions and self blame!we have to realize that depression is an illness and many have to be on meds to get out of it! cause unknown, but to whom are depressed the journey is long! this poems expresses the aftermath of the depressed individual and what feelings may lay behind!

Ervinna

Hi, there thanks for writting that i always cut my wrist whenever i feel like doing it because i thought it's the only way from facing any probelms. thanks again

priscilla r

thats poems made me cry it like me and my life i fell the same way keep the good work up

Linda

Man. This poem really made me cry. It´s like reading my own life. It hurts to face a truth that lies so deep in your soul.

Anna

this was a very good poem! I totally understand everything. And the past does suck. but you know what we just can't dwell on the past! but i did like your poem alot.

karen

i just love your poem cuse i can really relate to it.

Aimee

That was a great poem! I have thought of suicide before, but always knew it wasnt the answer. I just wish everyone knew it wasnt the answer.

Chantal

I hope to God that all the people who write to these forums are trying to find help and I hope that you all read this comment I am making.You all deserve to live, you all are worth it and someone cares about every single one of you. Please reconsider.I've been down that road too.I know what it's like I'm not saying this as if I don't know the pain.but I survived and you all can too. Please don't give up hope, it is there you just have to search and I know it's hard to find but it is there.

Blanca

I loved this poem soo much. I've felt this way for a long time now. I've always thought that suicide is the answer, but it's really not. I always know that if I do kill myself someone will be terribly hurt by my mistake. This poem explains my feelings exactly.

Muffin

I loved this poem. Thank you for writing this peom..it helped a little bit!

Sam

this is one of the best poems i have ever read. i wish i had this talent to express my feelings, i can't even express in words how i feel i just sit there with a blank look on my face nuthing to do but think

Tiffy

This touched my heart more than any other poem on here. My tears will fall for all you who choose the wrong path. Love yourself

Holly

I can relate to this poem. I know how it feels b/c right now I am in this situation. I don't want to start back up with cutting again. I really liked this poem. You're a great writer and I hope to read more of your poems.

love

.....This poem says alot... for I to have been at a point where that seemed to be the answer, BUT POEMS LIKE SEND OUT A MESSAGE THAT SAVE A LIFE....

Chrissy

This is an incredibly awesome poem. I think that it is the best poem I have ever read. It really describes how my life is going right now. Keep writing...you are better than good.

bry'ale

ive always felt like suicide was the easiest way out but for some reason i never could commit it ,now i realize its just not for me one even though god seems so far away he in nearer than we think

Lindsey

I can relate to this poem alot! I am very depressed right now and I can relate to this poem a 100%. This a great poem. Keep up the good-work!

Avi

you speak the truth.but when a person is down they cant see that hope.through my experements, i've found that the only way to dfeat the beast the beast is to wanna win over it firs your self.(i don't know, maybe YOU have another way)???

sophie

i went thru this xperience and all i can say is thankgod i did... otherwise i would never know what to do or say when someone i love went thru it and failed i think that more people can understand what happened now and can prevent it happening again

Erin

i love this poem and i can totally relate, good job

Jill

The Poem was great...... I found a resemble in it... I like it...

jessie

my mistake haunts me still. now the thing i fear most is if i will go back and pick up that blade . . . again and for the last time. i dont want to go back to that.

kassie

i thought this was a really good poem because the knife was a part of my day. every night i got it out, but after reading this poem i realize that it is not worth it. thank you

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