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Unfulfilled Love (the Cruelty Of Distance) by Malcolm Coleman

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Vicki
Awesome Poem... I felt that one... You have a special talent..
Jessica
I must say this is a very great poem. I think the part about the phone ringing and it being a friend asking him to go out but he doesn't that is the best part truly. Because i know how that feels. The pain to sit night after night looking at a screen and knowing not any time soon you are going to be able to touch that person on the other side. But to whoever might read this let me warn you. Internet love is serious more serious than you might think. Sometimes it is nothing and you think it is something. But sometimes it is something and on those occasions you must treat it carefully or you can lose it with a movement of your fingers on a keyboard. This is a great poem.
AnGeLiCrOcKsTaR
I just wanted to say that this peom is truly wonderful :) This poem brought nothing short from happiness to my soul and atear to my eye. I know what's it's like to have an internet love, miles away, but inhabiting your heart and soul naturally. This poem gives a beautiful explanation of that love I, and many others, know all to well.
chris
Wow. This is just how I feel. Great poem
romey
Truely beautiful!
Tom
I couldn't have said it better myself. This poem describes my situation to the letter. Problem is, I still haven't solved the distance factor, but I'm going to keep trying.
Denise
I am pretty sure you read my mind... this is exactly how i feel... the overwhelming love and every once in a while that little tiny bit of insecurity... but more than anything, the longing to be together and finally be whole...
Michelle
I Know This Pain All To Well. Be Strong Everyone. It's A Bumpy Ride.
Martinez
One Word: "Awesome"
david
All I can say is WOW...It's me saying those words...Great poem.
Terry
This poem describes my relationship with a certain girl so well, its great. Nice Work :)
Amanda
This is exactly how I feel ..... I love him dearly and waiting for the day we shall be one .
Justine
I can feel exactly how the author is feeling at the moment.. The words are beautiful...It touches my heart...
chona
the poem is great, i feel in love w/ the poem.
Terry
I feel this way every night, "will i see her tommorow or not until next week?" We always talk about meeting but are scared that it might not ever happen
CECI
this poem reflects everything i feel and just how my "love" feels for me. Its my heart speaking on Malcolm's mouth thank u for expressing my life into such beautiful words!
angel
this touched every part of my heart, i am feeling your exact words, and emotions.
Tisha
i really enjoy this poem because it states the truth of what some people go through when they meet that special someone online...
b
the essence of an online romance, the unsure feelings of not ever knowing what will happen, not knowing whether the other person is being true, the pain of separation.
Joanne
what a perfect poem
Ayn
honest
White
It's sad.....the words really touched me...the poem is beautiful
Jan
I'm chatting nightly with a man thousands and thousands of miles away and have felt all the feeling expressid in this poem and more...I wonder will we ever meet? My love grows stronger each and everytime we chat! I hope this poem wins :)!
Mike
im in the exact situation right now and all my feelings are exactly the same so when i read this poem i could almost feel as if i were to write it. great poem
tess
Loved it!!!!! I know these thoughts are the thoughts of someone who loves me!!!!
Chontaye
This touched my heart so strong... so many times I am feeling this. Words from the heart needs new meaning.
donna
when reading your poem...my heart start to beat a little faster , to think that is could actually be happening.....wonderful, awesome , poem.....you did a great job.........my heart is still beating quite fast and i finished reading your poem almost 5 mins ago
Pam
I loved this poem...felt the same way...until I met my friend :) now things are ever better!!!
Amy
This poem is so perfect, it is exactly whatme and my someone special are going through.
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