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How Dare You by LaTiefa Alston

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Baybe
LaTiefa, Hey.I just got done reading your poem, it was great. It felt like Deja Vu for me, I had the exact same thing happen with my current boyfriend.he was my best friend for almost 2 years, until i realized I wanted to be with him for the rest of my life.Your poem said it all.
Tracy
This is a beautiful poem, and it was able to express all of the feelings that i now have for my guy. The power of this poem surpasses all words that i could use to express my feelings. Thank you for sharing this beauty with the world..you are a true artist of the heart!
Karmel
i loved ur poem it expresses exactly how i felt when my boyfriend kissed me the first time stirrin' up feelin's i "thought" i neva wanted 2 experience agin but boy wus i wrong & we're still 2getha;-)
susan
you are right...its sexy,funny and i enjoyed it...!!
k
most excellent choice of words. hits very close to home. Thanks.
krystle
THAT WAS VERY GOOD I WAS THE SAME WAY THE BOY THAT I LOVED CHEATED ON ME AND HE(MY BOYFRIEND KNOW) WAS THERE FOR ME THE HOLE WAY THROW I LOVE IT I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT
Diana
This poem have captured the exact feeling i felt. Its wonderful! Its so funny its like telling my story, me and my boyfriend, i let the "i love you" out 11:00 pm as i can remember and by that momment he kissed me and i was like lost in time.. "You've made me vulnerable again" I dedicate it to my sweetheart Rommel =)
Andrea
As someone who has been there,I commend you. This poem has a syntax that I often only see when reading Maya's(Angelou) poetry. Beutifully done, and well written.
catherine
i can relate perfectly to this poem..i just ended a long and troubled relationship with my ex-boyfriend..and just when i thought i didnt want love cos i didnt want to get hurt..this guy comes from nowhere and turns my life upside down..well done LaTiefa..i wish i could express my feelings so beautifully as you did in this poem
Judy
i can totaly relate to these feelings
Renada
This poem describes exactly how I came to find my new love. It was beautifully written and very imaginative. (Not to mention sexy!)
Marlyn
this poem is Awesome! I really like it. you can feel it when you read it.
Gina
Great poem, it explains exaclty how i feel towards the newfound love of my life, this poem is going straight into his mail, thanks for saying what i couldnt.
Sunshine
These feeling in writing is exactly what I have felt. I loved it totally so wonderful thank you...for all the expressions totally marvelous
Jenna
This poem is off the hook, girl. It's written so well, it uses every day words in a fly way. Keep it commin'!
Courtney
This was a great poem! It can relate to me also in a way...I really know how she feels...bye!
JKS
excelent poem. One of the best
mookster16
The poem is definitely the "off the hook boys and girls.
Jerry
LaTiefa, How dare you dare to repeat the same feelings my girlfriend had ( has) for me towards her ! SUPER poem, loved your uninterrupted flow of thought, very spontaneous & real !
Wyneeshia
This was a very excellent way to question, yet agree with this person. I loved it. Thank's for giving me something I could tell my male friend.
Diane
Wonderful poem. Made me cry as I thought about a man in my life that I cannot have.
Stacey
Awesome :-)
MONIQUE
THIS POEM WAS VERY CUTE I LIKE THE WAY YOU TALK ABOUT THIS PERSON AT THE BEGING OF THE POEM AS SOMEONE BAD THEN SET IT OFF WITH A SMOOTH END KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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