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Will She Come? by }X{Angel}X{

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Sean
I couldn't believe how much this poem described my waiting for the true love of my life. I am in the Army and she is not with me. Every night I lay there waiting for her. This poem fully expresses the longing felt and is truly a work of art! Thank You for sharing it with us.
J
This poem reminded me that men have emotions and doubts, too. It is so easy to forget that. I liked that it ended not knowing if "she" came. That wasn't the point. What mattered was the preparation and the building excitment, albiet nervousness, for the special night. It left me hoping for him. and hoping that someday I am "she." Beautiful work.
NIBBLES
Did she come? I liked this poem very much and understood that this night was special, but to not know the outcome let me down.
kay
I thought this was a beautiful poem. Keep writting.
Mary
I really like your poem. When you put your feelings on paper, it's remarkable about how others could be feeling the same. I printed your poem. I hope you don't mine. MLC
Cheryl
I was waiting, hoping she would show. But in the end, it didn't say so. I choose to believe she did. It is a beautiful poem.
Sonya
I think this poem has to do with a hope within loneliness. It's very expressive and it's one of the most touching poems I've ever read. Thanks for sharing it.
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