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All of the poems at Passions include a Vote feature, and each of those who vote for their favorite poems are encouraged to leave comments. The number of comments does NOT necessarily reflect the number of votes (many people do not comment), but they do give an indication of how other visitors to our site have responded.

milly
VERY NICE, VERY NICE! THIS WAS CRAZY "OH MAN" AM STILL TRYING TO CATCH MY BREATH! U GOT MY VOTE
candy
that amazing i truely love this poem
di
WOW! this poet has a way of drawing you into the poem itself, i felt i was there, what a talent, please keep up the good work. i will certainly be looking out for this poets work in the future
Chelsea
WOW! I got turned on just reading this poem. and it's so true. Women can take it all night long it's unfortunate that men just cant keep up. Keep up the good work, this is a true work of art.
mary
great poem
Dominique
Wow!
Bud
This poem says it all, it takes you to the universe and beyond. No one word can do justice to this work.
Johnetta
i absoultly loved it. you are really good. it made me get THAT sensation. if you know what i mean. ;)
Darla
I read this years ago shared it then. its just so awesome. the best ive ever seen on here. any site. Found that i had the link saved went to ck it out again Enjoyed it just as much :D
Liz
ive read every poem on this site and this is by far the best one keep it up! ( by that i mean the good work)
Liz
DAMN! Keep on truckin' buddy! Best poem EVER!
Kay
That is ansome poem. Keep writting!
jessica
NICE! LOVE IT
trisaca
WOW! This is great! I felt like I was that woman. It made my heart race. I'm going to share this with my man. I want him to feel the way I felt after reading this wonderfull poem.
Diane
This was truly an emotional and inspirational piece. This reads like a personal experience. It's erotic and exotic at the same time. It's sensual and arrousing! Beautiful!
nekka
oh my god that was absolutly great! it had me wanting to continue reading and upset because it ended. fantastic job
stephanie
I thank this poem is really kick A**. I feel you cause when it happens it does happen. Gosh it is a sinsational feeling, i promise its the best and all women love it to their best ability. no doubts. holla,holla
Amanda
Dude, it makes me wanna do the bad thing. lol
Lil Ladie
This is the best one I've read so far.
sally
I found myself reading this poem faster and faster as I craved for more. Phew!
Sharren
I love this poem, Keep up the good work
Becky
This is awesome. made me feel like I was there. AWESOME JOB.
kate
this poem is so sexy.
abbas
Real HOT!
Akina
Man! That poem was tight! You got skills baby!
Akina
man! i love this poem. you got some rel talent baby!
Angela
I first read this poem about two years ago. When I first read it I thought it was so awesome that I made a copy of it and gave it for my boyfriend to read. I just came back to this web site two years later and it is still on here. That's great!
marla
wow
Jamie
awsome!
jennifer
I loved it! I cant believe a poem can turn someone on like that but it did. this is the best erotic poem ever please write more of them!
Dovey
Oh My. My heart pounded reading this poem. The last line,the clencher, omg. I've been there!
Britni
That poem is the best poem I've read yet. Boy whoever or whatever provoked you to write such an intimate and breath taking poem as such, make sure they KEEP PROVOKIN. keep up the good work
Natali
This poem is soooooo good! The way Michel describes everything is pure perfection. I couln's find a better way to put it. It's beautifu.
Anna
This poem was outstanding and so true! I can tell it came from your heart. Wow! I just can't get over how good it was! Great Job!
Ayesha
All I can say about this poem is dayum what a poem.
Boogie
Yo. This poem is off the chain. Me being a female, I can really relate. Keep making those incredible poems.
Ri
There are plenty of things that I can say, but let me just simply say that you did da damn thang! I enjoyed this one, it was the best one yet! Ri
Brandi
I loooove this poem. I have never heard any good peoms before Keep up the good work.
Irina
OMG, I definitely want MORE! That is some erotic poem, dude.
K.
God dat was good LUV IT. WRITE MORE WRITE MORE PLZZZZ
kari
oh my gosh you hit it right on the spot. this poem is the best poem i have ever read. great job!
Aimee
Where is my cigarette? This is in my fantasies!
Lonna
All I can say is "OH MY!"
Jessica
WOW! This is SO me and my boyfriend. YOU GO BOY
britt
yo nigga dis poem is hot. it ,makes me feel like im having sex with a poem. lol. keep up da good work. hellz yeah!
ely
This poem deserves an award! Keep it up!
Karen
Outstanding!
peter
at 46 I wished was true, but it is a great thing to do. lol
Manda
You WIN!
latin
This has got to be one of the truest poems i have ever read. this poem has come from Ones heart and desire. great job! It has my vote!
Maria
you could do that to me ANY TIME YOU WANT!
boo
you are so full of passion, whoever has you has your heart and whoever has your love you have their soul.
Mandy
i loved the poem. it was increatable. made me catch my breath and think naughty thoughts lol
Josie
Michael, great poem. It was a vivid moment of passion!
Mel
This was a great poem! Yoou are a great writer keep up the great work and never stop. I love this poem i want more more and more!
Mandy
This was a wonderful poem, it has such detail, that as you read it you can imagines it. Great Imagery and stimulating choice of words.
toni
that is soooo mmmmmmmmmmmm. cant put into words! i want more!
Betsy
I just have to say that when I read this poem a rush of passion overflowed my body and soul. It described me and my fiance to the "T"! Great Job and keep up the good work!
deanna
AMAZING
Shaun
I LOVED it! IT was so beautiful! other than the breast part I dont know how you thought of it!
jenny
WOW! Michael the poem was wonderfull.
Deb
This poem touched every fiber of my soul!
Terps
9. 5 out of ten!
Phyllis
mmmmm, omg, this poem blew my mind, my senses, omg, made me think of how i get when my lover gives me such great pleasure 'orally'. omg, your vivid interpretation of it all, omg, i think you know what i think of your poem, omg. keep writing, give me more. ;) ;)
Sheil
What can I say. this poet said it all! WONDERFUL!
asif
this poem is me! i feel as though the woman in the poem is me! this poem just totally describes my everyday fantasies!
rochelle
excellent!
laura
great poem! it's how i always feel..you must really know what you are doing! keep up the good work!
CYNTHIA
MICHEAL THIS POEM IS HOT,I NEVER SEEN SOMTHING DESCRIBED SO WELL AND IT WAS SO(WHEW)IT REMINDS ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND
Loca
i think that this poems is one of the best that i've read. it really got me and i can totally relate with the author
Rlee
Simply AMAZING!
Michelle
I thought that this poem was wonderful. Keep up the great work..
Peggy
Michael, this poem is so hot. I have a new love and it describes our first time together to a tee. Fantastic!While reading it, I did not realize I had stopped breathing. It took my breath away!
rider
*&*%#%$&^%#@$^&)__( Great
monica
this poem is me! i feel as though the woman in the poem is me! this poem just totally describes my everyday fantasies!
Christine
Oh baby! that is it I want more!
jojo
What can i say but BRILL i loved it
tya
i couldnt have done any better, whatever the inspiration was,. im sure it was great. Yo, keep up the good work.
Megan
WOW!Michael has a gift for being able to capture the true passion. well done michael.well done
Rogue
what can I say but "wow"? this was beautiful and very well crafted..amazing! keep up the good work :-)
Sandra
this is such a kool poem! it really makes u feel how u felt when u wrote it :)
Jessica
Michael, All I have to say is DAMN! That is the only word required for such awesome(fro a lack of better words)piece of work.
Tracy
I loved this poem! It described the way I feel about my husband. I loved it so much that I just printed it and can't wait to read it too him. I'm sure he'll love it. I know I did. It is perfect,.Great Poem! Thank you so VERY much!
lilprincess69
this is the best poem i have ever read in my whole entire life. it xplains everything
Anant
That was something real real real real real real real hot ! Beautifully written. One of the best poems i've ever come across !
Lauren
whoah, that got me.
Nadine
Awesome poem. Words can't express this poem. It is just breath taking
Tess
What can I say..It made my eyes water and my body catch fire. Thanks
jennifer
HOT
mike
awsome
Joe
No one word can desrcibe this poem, no matter HOW hard you try!
s
I agree . wow is all i can say
T
Oh my God! This poem is intense.
Allen
Excellent. Very intense. I only wish there was one I could feel this way with.
Raivyn
*mouth agape* that was. priceless. Very, very good, very descriptive, and very erotic.
Carolyn
Wow!Wow!Wow!Wow! This poem really got to us.Please write more like it!
selena
I LOVED IT ! I really does the trick.Makes you think if you've got it or not.Good Job
Donnatella
(Smiling.) Poet, I found your comment at the top, true and amusing. This poem is hot and shouts for more, more, more! I enjoyed reading it, but I felt as though I needed 'more.'--(smile.)
Aaron
VERY SENSUAL! for a moment i thought i was in the poem itself!
J
HOT!
Marcy
Very hot. I can feel his emotions..It made me sweat..
Kristina
I'm fellin hot, hot, hot! WOW! Amazing!
Joe
UNBELIEVABLE! The greatest poem I have ever read! Beautifully and elegently written!
Daniel
The poet paints a scene of incredible passion, with no hint of the akwardness that so often accompanies attempts to capture the sexual experience in words. Beautiful.
Sasia
mmmmm very heated & naughty, my favorite combo ;)
Stephanie
This poem is amazing. Wonderful use of metaphors and word combinations. I love it. I wish I could write that well. It gave me inspiration and makes me feel closer to my boyfriend.
kat
THIS POAM KEPT ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT, WANTED IT WAS LIKE I COULD SEE EVERYTHING THAT WAS GOING ON. I THINK THIS AUTHOR IS SO AMAZING AND IF I EVER FOUND A MAN LIKE THAT I WOULD HOLD ON TO HIM FOR ETERNITY!!
Deanna
WOW! That was very powerful.! This poem is so descriptive and straight forward. Wonderful!
sexybivy
you've been read from Puerto Rico..you used the exact words an expressed as no one ever has.it's done perfectly!you deserve a huuuge award for this and more!
sweety
wow, i don't find any words to define this poem.
Russ
WOW ! Thank you Michael for moving such inner feelings within me. I think I need my shower now.
Billie
I really enjoyed this poem. It was really great!
Christine
Beautiful
Rachel
I really loved this poem, it made me realize what there could be between two people. Thanks.
Shirl
I think I need a cigarette.....and I don't even smoke! Very vivid writing - I love it.
Christie
Whew.I'm a little out of breath here. Very sexy and more importantly, very beautiful. Congratulations on the ability to see sex for what is should be.
Jason
GREAT JOB Thank You
Michele
Steamy, what else can I say..... love, sex.... so beautiful. Thank you for such a wonderful poem.
James
Wow! As a guy reading this and thinking about my fiancee and I . . . well . . . She loved it too. Thanks for the great poem!
OLYA
that was a great peom
Andy
BRILLIANT never have i read a poem that captures my attention so completely.
Chianta
The poem was realistic and it makes you feel as if you were the object of his affection!
Jim
My sense of Love became lost in the wilderness of life. This has helped to find it again. For that I thank you.
Tish
As I read this poem all I could do is hold my breath, and wish my lover was here with me! I literally held my breath! Great poem!
Snoop
This was the shit-really-It totally says how I love my Shelly
Nara
Oh, my GOD! Its perfect
Serge
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I'VE EVER READ!!, You got some TRUE feelings for that girl.
Nikki
Totally hot!
jackie
The best I WANT MORE, MORE!
jill
all i can say to this is O MY GOD, where do men like you live :) awesome work
Gina
WHOA! I'm wiping sweat of my face. I'm going to my man's house.
Melissa
Oh boy.
Paula
Your poem made me cry, its good to see that there is a man out there that can put this kind of a act into such beautiful words.
Baybe
Micheal, Your poem was great.Your described it very well..It was full of lust and sexuality, but was not at all dirty..great job!
Kimberly
WOW. I LOVED THIS POEM SO MUCH I SENT IT TO MY GIRL FRIEND.
Rachel
Excellent!
Bambi
You have inspried me with your writing, i once was lost but now you have inspried me a great deal to carry on, and share this with my lover as we experience this each night.
Liz
Michael, You wrote the words that describe me true.. I always want more just like she wants you!
NATHAN
IT WAS JUST 2 RIGHT!
sarah
i really like this poem. it is a very sweet poem and it remindes me of so much good job!
Rich
Wow man, your lady MUST be smiling! Tell us more !
Angel
wow, i'm a vergin. yeah, whatever. but, hummmm.. he he he.. well guess what I'm gonna be losing soon??? I hope it's just like how your poem describes it. that would be 2 good 2 be true tho. anyway you're a good poet and you're honest too. i can tell cuz you obviously write about what men think 24/7..
Bobbie
This poem made me feel as if i were with my love in every way. Cant hear enough ,dont stop .
Sandy
I love it!
LIZ
I don't know how many times people have wrote WOW on the response list but WOW..That was a great poem
ashley
That was beautiful, that poem just hit me right there looking back on the nights. Absolutley wonderful
Christina
This poem was so sensual and sincere. His words came out like a voice that told what his heart was saying.
Oksana
I wish my boyfriend wrote this for me!
Alesia
Very vivid detail. nice use of words..it seems as though you were writing this poem while doing the act described in it. VERY GOOD WORK!
vanessa
that was really intense.sounds like you two are really close. when i was reading it i felt as though i was their with you.its really good..i write poems also!
shun
that was wonderful!
Oscar
She agrees with me - you said it right.
San
You're right, some of us just don't get enough...and your poem is absolutely beautiful!
wet
WOW! That was so awsome! Keep it up! I want to feel like this again!
Britt
WOW! That is A GREAT poem! WOW! That Is Really Good! I Love IT!
Jewel_Orb
WOW! Describes every feeling I have ever felt. KOODOS!
Melissa
I want more! This was so sexy and so hot! I loved it!
Marion
This was unbelivable, it made me feel every detail, your girlfriends' a lucky girl.
sara
DAMN! this is the best poem ive read in a million years..ok,ive only been alive 18 of em, but i know how it is to be on the receiving end of this is, and its how u described it.i love it!
Hayley
ABSOLUTELY BREATH TAKING..I'M SPEECH LESS BCOS U HAVE CAPTURED EVERYTHING!
Nichole
This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read.I loved it!! Please write more like this soon.
Wonderland80
AMAZING!!!! :o)
Samantha
this is a very lovely poem
erica
this it the hottest poem. All i can say is give me more!
LEVITICUS
WHOOAAHH, WHAT CAN YOU SAY BUT WELL BRAVO BRAVO!
Kari
Words can not describe what this poem did for me.
Jessi
WHEW! That took my breath away that made me think of the way me and my b/f make love Ithink I will send this poem to him.keep writing man your good!
Sonia
This poem is so intense. I have no words to describe the feeling. Keep up the good work.
moniqua
You really could turn people on with that kind of poetry.keep it up your a good writer.
lantana
Wow am wet thanks gosh i can't wait to be with him the poem deserve more than bravo !!!
Alison
excellant, beautiful expression of love.
Amanda
It is a masterpiece. It explains exactly how my boyfriend makes me feel. Truely passionate.
Randy
I am not truly a poem person but I thougt this one was GREAT!!!
Sherry
This is one of the best poems that I have come across thus far, and I have read alot of them. My boyfriend lives in California and I in Pennsylvania, So we communicate by phone, and this poem really describes how we are together. Thank you.. Its really beautiful...
Ideaolist
This poem is among some of the best I ever read. Keep making em hot.
Angel
I LOVED THIS POEM ... IT IS SO BREATH-TAKING!!
Denice
This poem give me the words to express the way I feel. This poem is so real!
kim
Wow- what a poem! It really makes me wish my boyfriend wasn't a couple hundred miles away right now! I hate being at college!! :o)
Shellie
very erotic, the kind of passion we all crave, surely??!! beautiful!!!
Lawry
This gal of mine also wants more! A poem written for me.
Diane
WOW!!!!!!!!!! I can hardly breath.
steve
SUPERBLY DONE!!!!!!!
Sha
Give me more!!!!!
Saiqa
MASTER PIECE!!Breath takingly beautiful.....surely can drive lovers crazy....
NATASHA
THIS POEM REALLY GOT ME HORNY AND WANTING MY HUSBAND TO HURRY HOME FROM WORK. YOU DIDI A GREAT JOB IN DETAILS AND EXPLAINING OUR SEX LIFE AS NOT SO NEWLY WEDS. THIS POEM WAS THE BEST ONE EVER WRITTEN ABOUT GREAT SEX.
Zara
That was amazing, you are so in tune with your emotions. I am definitely sending this to my boyfriend because I know that thats exactly how we feel when we're together.
Jennie
WOW, I loved this! Sent this along to My Love. This poem made me blush with desire for Him...got my heart to pounding thinking of him next to me. ~smiles~ Thank you.
Todd
Hay! That's porno now. My girlfriend loved it.
Suzanne
wonderful....I love the ending!!!
Larry
We apparently have two insatiable gals.
WINTER
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM I CAN FELL IT AS A READ IT IS AS IF WHO EVER SAYING IT IT REALL HAPPEN I LOVE THIS POEM I LOVE THIS POEM.
TV
I needed a cold shower badly after reading such hot stuff!I hope my JILL reads this many times!Thank you.
Paulina
All I can say is, love me again, let me devour and dive into you!!
Lav
Took the words right out of my mouth!
Taniesha
This poem is all that and some okay!! I was getting aroused just reading it. I give you a Perfect 10 for this!!!
Kajun
WOW!!! This is the best poem I ever read in my life! You made me want to get off of work and go make sweet love to my husband just like you wrote in your poem. Great job! Hope to read more of your poems.
SweetBijou
Intensely sensual! Wow!
Sheena
Oh my god!!! That poem was beautiful, it was so true. It made me think of my boyfreind. I WANT MORE!
Deb
Very Hot!!!!!
Danielle
That poem is well what can i say me. This is exactly how me and my boyfriend make love. I love this poem it is wonderful.
De'Anna
That poem was insanley sexy! That is a definate striker!
veejay
ooohhhhhhhhhhhh!!
Leah
YIKESSSSSS!!!!...Way to go Michael!! You gave me a cardio workout while I was sitting still! Keep up the good work..*S*
Andrea
I hope to someday be with someone who is so taken by me that they write such poetry! ;-) Keep up the good work.
Theresa
Just wanted to say i really like the poem, and i really want to read other ones from you.
undercoverlover
This is a very unique poem, it expresses what I feel many of us feel when we are in love and so passonately involved with the other, sometimes we need to reflect back on those feelings that we once had and thought we lost,this poem brings back those feelings!
Carrie
This was a great poem about making love that most people cannot put into words.
brandy
that was a way cool and erotic poem and believe me my boyfriend just couldnt stop reading it. . .neither could i
Jodi
bravo!
nikki
this poem perfectly describes the passion that my true love and I share you hit the nail right on the head (keep writing!)
Angel
this poem ,made me speechless with desire,i loved it .it was so detailed and erotic,just what i was looking for ,thank you,its a verry nice poem.
Mia
WoW! that poem was absolutely beautiful I don't know what to say, just good luck with your wrting cause i felt that and it was deep keep up the good work.
Martina
Thank you for sharing your poem. It reminded me of many memories, and im sure more will be had. Take care and smile:̃
Linda
That is a wonderful down to earth poem.Thank you sent it to my boyfriend!
wish
Huuh!, what a daydream!
Rina
This poem really makes me arouse......so does my fiancee....& u know what happened next!!!!!
Secret
Damn!
ash
damn man! ur so good! gosh your poem is so breath taking!
dori
I read this poem often.:):)..what a feeling.
Johanna
** Excellent Poem **
Trevor
i am not normally a poetry lover but this pome is so intense that i read it over and over again and everyone i send it to is in awe
Amber
An excellent poem. It was like I could feel and understand what the writer was saying.
leticia
I believe you captured the experience in such a passionate but "tasteful" way.
cassie
i wish !
dave
hey dude ,hot poem,real good,my baby will love this one,keep it up ,
debbie
I can identify with passion and desire you express so vividly in your poem.... thank you for filling my mind
Debbie
I found this poem beautiful. It captures the human emotions that go along with making love.
Jimmy
I liked this poem alot!!
JENNIFER
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS IVE READ IN A VERY LONG TIME...EXCELLENT!!!!JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO READ..
Tabitha
dude..very good petry i wish my boyfriend had talent like that*hehe* rock on!
Italian_eyes
Well....Ummm...WOW !!!...let me catch my breath. Your poem was filled with lust, foreplay, excitement, it was erotic, seductive, sensuous, heart pounding, extremely passionate, just very, very HOT....I read it to the woman I love and she responded.... well let's just say...Thank you (smiles)
Brittney
this is a veery great poem! I have been there, and experianced some of that, so i can realte from where its coming from!
angela
great job!
erica
This poem blee my mind away. never in my life have i read something so real.
mumma
All I can say is, wow, I feel better......
Savannah
Absolutely amazing! It's every girls dream. A man tending to all the womans needs. Historic!
Ivo
It is just perfect
angela
Well, just saying the poem did the job for me...hehe.
suj
" !!!!"...i am speechless
Sarah
Very emotional and real. Makes you feel as if Michael wrote this while in the act.
LINDSIE
THIS POEM IS SO REAL. I LOVE THE WAY IT MAKES ME FEEL. IF I COULD TALK TO YOU I WOULD TELL YOU HOW I FEEL.
Lane
Hot, hot, rhyme, rhythm and what not. GREAT Michael.
crystal
I loved this poem. It was fantastic!!!
Phil
I read this poem and it sent chills down the scrathes of my loved one. Hope you don't mind, but I had to send this to her. I wanted us to both enjoy this orgazmic poem. It made me howl, like a crazed wolf.
Carol
WOW~~~THIS POEM IS OUTRAGEOUS!!! VERY VERY SEXY!
Baby
this made me think of things i have that i never thought of before
Sidni
Damn! this has to be the best peopm I have ever read in a long time. You go boy! Your girl is quite lucky to have someone who values the true meaning of sex.
Branwen
This poem really hit home when I read it. It is very beautiful and I would love to read more of his poems.
Secret
Can I have you for my own?
danielle
wow that was an excellent piece of work that fefinetly leaves you tasty as well as thirsty
KatiaT
I was wondering if you could e-mail me that poem cause that thing was off the hook!
Kari
this, is a good poem. it's very.....descriptvie! I like it!
LD
My heart is racing!!!
peter
Excellent i will send it to my lady
RODNEY
I LOVED THE POEM ANDSENT IT TO MY FUTURE WIFE AND SHE LOVED IT
Monique
I don't know about everybody else, but sex is exactly like that with my man. Thanks, Michael for allowing me to relive those precious memories while I'm so far away from him.
Bren
I think you are very talented and I really appreciate your dedication and talent on writting poems.
Mendy
Perfect
Kristen
I loved his work!! It must win!!
Kori
This poem puts some graphic images in your head.
Miss
EXCELLENT poem, very moving, the best!
Baby
micheal i gave this to my husband and we liked it and it really changed our sex life. and u have really out done yourself
Tara
This was just an excellent poem and expresses exactly the way my boyfriend and I are. I was so happy to have the privaledge to read it. Thank you
Mel
Very nicely done...
Jesse
This poem was very erotic, the writer used words that helped you imagine exactly what the writer was talking about. It was very sensual, erotic. I think it is really cool that a guy can write so beautifully, senusally. I wish my boyfriend could write like that. I am sure the writer has no problem finding women! Wow!
Jen
Your poem was so vivid, almost real. I wish I could write as well as you.
Danielle
this was a very discriptive poems it was the plny poems that came really close to what i was looking for. thanks always D.A.
CHUCK
I love it and sent it to my wife
Solissha
I love it!
Laveena
I loved your poem, it made me lust for the act you so acurately described
Ayisha
Simply Beautiful.
Wanda
This poem, is so touching because I am in a relationship, that have caused me to want more, and it seems like you found inspiration when I needed it the most. Thank you so much for touching my life.
Tara
Whew! **wiping sweat from my collarbone** Is it a little hot in here or is it just me?
Rain
WOW is all i can say...that was breathtaking
Dan
Hot. Like watching body heat (Kathleen turner) :) I loved it.
April
It was as if i was being touched in ways of passion. This poem is the BEST. I love it.
Dawn
oh, how true. powerful
princess
this poem was great
Amanda
excellent!
norman
Totally erotic! Allows your mind to live every moment.
David
Most awsome I was totaly thrilled on the edge of my chair it was totaly romantic and very warm. I loved how I felt like I was there for this act of such pleasure but really was not awsome take care.
yesenia
this poem was tite! I digged u alot with this poem keep it up man!
Celia
Very nice poem i loved it not many people can describe passionate love the way it was described here.
Rose
I love the passion and truth that was put into this poem!
Aphrodite
This poem makes me want to meet the author and see if his actions are as great as his poem is...I'm here for you baby!
Tina
That poem is so true, I know exactly what you are talking about. It exactly how I am too.
The
This poem is probably the best that I have EVER read in my life. Hey Mike, you keep writing like that and you'll get more women than you know what to do with! Keep up the good work.
Laura
It was breath taking!
mirna
Michael, I really think you have a wild imagination about passion and love. OHH, Honey if every men were like you baby. mmmmmm I think you are very erotic. LOL
babylease
That is with out a doubt, something that can make your heart race. Very wonderfully written.
Debbie
Very sensual and erotic to the mind as well as to the body... Very effective in arousing not only the physical needs but the sensual of the mind,body and soul.
monica
it's the bomb
jamie
I have chills all over, you have a real talant.. it was incredible
Rose
More! is a awsome poem. Very seducing! I wanted to send it to my lover but didn't only because I feel that it belongs to you and your's truly. You are a very awsome poet