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Finding ourselves sometimes struggling with life's little struggles, we need to learn over and over how to get past them. And eventually, we do.

Dancing In Dreams

In dreams I am dancing with the Lord,
It's a slow and glorious waltz -
I'm waking as the devil cuts in,
His two-step praising my faults.

A twist of uncontrolled movement,
And I begin to doubt my own feet -
Until I call for the Lord to come,
And bring back the dance so sweet.

I get lost in the soft, soothing melody,
As we glide to the dear angel's song,
That's when He shows His love for me,
And proves the devil so wrong.

Heaven's canopy is our ballroom,
Twinkling stars - our only light,
Doves and angels surrounding us,
As I fall gently to sleep for the night.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Caroline
Wondeful imagery. This poem describes life perfectly.
Rebecca
loved it
luz
It is truthful and insightful, full of grace and beauty.
BROTHER JOHN
THANKS BSC. THIS IS AN UNIQUE WAUY TO PUT OUR STRUGGLES IN POETIC FORM. TOO, OFTEN, THO, SOME RATHER DANCE WITH THE DEVIL. THANKS FOR THIS NOVEL IDEA.
Courtney
This poem really took my heart, I hope you continue writting. on a scale of 1-10; I give you a 9! I write poetry also and this poem is beyond great.
A
Very well written. I like the way you described your walk with Jesus as a dance.
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